增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I'd like to share some ideas on why to have a healthy family. First, parents are supposing to treat their children equally，which is important for the family. Beside, children and parents benefit from have some day-to-day routines. Therefore, it's necessarily to follow daily routines. In an addition, every member had better giving other members proper expectation. Finally, you should love my own family. In other words, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that is great importance. I hope that my advices can be helpful.
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During my last summer holiday, I go to the countryside to enjoy myself. I saw mother bird in her nest in a big tree, watching some of her baby flying away. I thought she must be very proud of her children, that were able to find her own food now. But she might also feel a sense of loss since they wouldn’t need of her day-to-day care any longer. For my parents, things are more easier. We have set up our family blog to posting our photos and journals. Once I leave for college, we can convenient share our experiences but support each other. Their “nest” will never be empty.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A son took his old father to a restaurant for a evening dinner. Father being very old and weak, while eaten, dropped food on his shirt and trousers. Others diners watched him in disgust while his son was calm. After he finished eating, his son, who was not at all embarrassing, quietly took him to the wash room, removed the stains, combed his hair. When they come out, the entire restaurant was watching them in dead silent, not able to grasp how someone could embarrass themselves publicly like that. The son settled the bill and started walking in with his father. At that time, an old man among the diners who called out to the son, “Thank you to leaving a lesson for every son and hope for every father.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
About eight years ago, I go to visit my grandfather during the summer holiday, who lived in a small village. One Saturday afternoon, my grandfather asked me climb a nearby mountain with him. At first, I ran fast, leaving my grandfather behind. However, about twenty minute later, I felt so tired that I stopped run and eventually chose to sit down for the rest. Soon, my grandfather reached when I was. He looked for me and asked, "Have I noticed the beautiful flowers along the way?" I kept silently. My grandfather smiled, "My dear, you are not in a race and on a journey." After that, my grandfather and I had walked slowly, appreciating the scenery and laughing along the way.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改: 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I will always remember that going to the Amusement Park every summer with my family members since I was six year old. Each time I would suffer a long bored trip, crowding into my aunt’s tiny car with my four cousins. I kept asking my aunt, “ Are we there yet?”, for which she often logically replied, “Do you see anywhere like them?” When we finally arrive, we would have to stand in line for great deal of time. After enter we would rush to the water park to cooling off. It was amazing. After many physical activities like running and swimming all day, I admitted I was complete tired but I felt like nothing could stop me.
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除∶把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改∶在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词注意∶
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处. 多者（从第Ⅱ处起）不计分。
A couple of years ago, when I was in London, I took my friend to a restaurant when there was a chef who was known to be among the best in world. During the meal, I told my friend the history of each dish we eat, the ingrediens used and the way it was used. In the end, she was impresing by the whole experience. A few days late, I was back to Beijing. She gave me a call. She said she went to the restaurant again together with some friend. However, we found nothing specially at all although they ordered the same dishes. “I realized then that the food tasted such delicious because of your stories,” she told me. “They gave to it that magic flavor”.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My little cousin is great interested in science. And he does some dangerous experiments sometime. Although his parents wants to encourage him to be great scientist, they often worry about his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he hurt him thumb. Felt sad, my aunt wanted him to stop doing that experiment. Therefore, my cousin didn’t want to give up. He said, “Many scientists got hurt when they were doing experiments, but they didn’t give out.” My aunt had to have him to finish the experiment and he finally succeeded in finish it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A group of boys was playing a game around a tall tree. They decided see who was the first one to get to the top of the tree. Their mothers were looking at the children when they played. One of the climber was David. He was a 8-year-old short boy. Nobody thought he would win the competition. Then the game started. All of the boys tried their best to climb as higher as they could. Though they all made it halfway up the tree before David did, but David reached the top of the tree fastest in the end. His mother was pride of her son. She asked him how he reached the top of the tree so quick. David said, “It was easy. The another children kept looking down when they climbed. When they found how high they were, they got scared and were afraid of fallen down. I only looked up until I got to the top.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my family, there is three people. My father is a farmer and go to work in the field every day. He isn’t good at talk to others but he gets on well other people. My mother is very kind and is friendly to everybody. So when I have the problem I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever, because when the teacher asks we very difficult questions, I can come up with the answers quick. And my father thinks I am not patient. He says once I have difficulty in solving problem, I will easily give up. This is that I need to improve in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划-横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My classmate, Zhang Qiang, live in affluence(富裕) in Shanghai now. He's considered as a famous engineer. Not that her life has always been easy. In 1971, he born into a poor peasant family in a lonely village. Before go to school, he usually grazed goats in the mountains. At school he studies hard despite simple food and old clothes. With Father's back bending down, with Mother's wrinkles(皱纹) deepening, he graduated in our senior high school with flying colors(以优异成绩), and was admitted to a famous university in Dalian. After getting a job in Shanghai, owing to his diligence and honest, Zhang Qiang has always been spoken high of. A native girl married with him in 1999. His success once again proves that an aspiring(有志气的) kid, though he is poor, can also stride(大步走) out of a remote village and into an prosperous international metropolis(大都市).
