增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week our music teacher teach us a song,named Indebted Heart(感恩的心),through that now I know we should live with a thankful heart. I think of my parents, who I think are first people I should thank. It’s they who gives me life, bring me up, look after me and teach me how to live happy. I should thank my parents for giving myself so much. Maybe I should consider how to pay back to the love my parents give me. And now I think the best way to be gratefulness to my parents is to study well. And then be a useful person to the society is my ideal.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意::1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Last week, I take part in the show of “Beautiful Villages around Yinchuan” in our school. In Sunday morning, my parents and I went to the countryside to get some informations for my poster. After we arrived at the destination, that impressed us most was the beautifully scenery as well as people’s living conditions. I took many photos. Then we chatted with a farmer, which told us about some recent changes. All the farmers can get online to learn agricultural science and trade his products now. Besides, in their spare time, they can enjoy various activities, such for table tennis and chess. The next day and I put my pictures and an article on the school wall newspaper. I felt proud of development of our country.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity, others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, "The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well." Immediate, I raised my hand.