增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, my British friend, Jim, spotted paper-cutting stand when we were wandering on the street. See such wonderful paper-cuts really amazed him, so he immediately decided to buy one. Therefore, the seller shook her head at the moment she saw the 100-yuan note Jim handed over to her. She had no change! How disappointed Jim was! He was about to quit while I took out my cellphone, scanned the QR code on the stand and pay 5 yuan. Jim was very surprising. I explained to her that nowadays we could pay with a cellphone for almost something. “Wow!” Jim said, “The paper-cut looks great, and the payment method seems even great!”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Allen,
I am so delight to know that you want to buy some gifts with Chinese characteristics. I think a Chinese brush will be a good choice.
The Chinese brush is traditional writing and drawing tool, dated back to more than 2,000 years ago. It was one of China’s Four Treasures of the Study, that is made of hairs of animals and bamboo. Writing with a Chinese brush is a little bit of hard, and it is beneficial to shape one’s mind.
In my opinions, the Chinese brush is a perfect gift for my relatives. Hope my recommendation will be helpfully. Wish you a nice journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
If you happen to be a heavy sleeper, that always wakes up about 20 minutes late for lectures, a special app calling Sleep If U Can is for you. Sleep If U Can is alarm app for students. When the alarm rings, some small task should be completed to turn the alarm on. For example, you needed to take a photo of some specifically things or shake the phone a number of times. In addition to, Sleep If U Can will also give yourself the latest weather condition. You can decide whether to take an umbrella with you before left home.
On a bright November day, a graceful English lady walk into a cozy bookshop in the heart of London’s Chinatown. She picked up a orderly pile of New Year cards and calendars decorating with beautiful Chinese paper cutting patterns and Chinese ink paintings. Then she warm greeted the shop assistant. The lady was 91-year-old Pamela Youde whose husband was the late Sir Edward Youde, which served as the governor of Hong Kong between 1982 and in 1986. For several decade, Youde has been a loyal customer of Guanghwa Bookshop. Every winter, apart from buy New Year cards from Guanghwa for her friends and family, he also buys Chinese calendars for each of her four grandchildren. She expects help them learn Mandarin well.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Online shopping is one part of our life for nowadays. There is no doubt that online shopping makes it easy for us select and purchase goods. It is especially convenient for people which are always busy with their work or study. Beside, we can find anything we want at the much lower price. However, many problems appeared along with it. Firstly, we cannot tell whether the quality, size, or color is satisfied until we receive the goods. If not, we have to mail it back and wait for long days to get them change. What’s more, it is a big challenge to ensure the safe of online trading.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Chris,
I am glad to hear you are interested on Double 11. Now let me to tell you something about them. Double 11 has become a special day in recently years. With four "1"s, it is also called Singles' Day. On that day, single young people held parties to show love or simply have funs. In 2009, Double Eleven Shopping Day was held to promoting online shopping, that has become the biggest online shopping day in China now.
In my view, this day is chance of promoting business. People should make purchases wisely. What do you think of this day? Look forward to your opinion.
Yours,
Li Hua
Television plays important role in our daily life. It presents a vivid world to us. People can enjoy whatever programs they liked at home. Television keeps us informing about current events, and allows us to keep up with the latest developments in science and politics. It is undoubted a great comfort to lonely old people.
However, television also can be harmful. First, some people complain television causes people to have little contact with their family member than before. Second, some programs are full of violence and crime, that have a bad effect on children.
In my opinion, the television itself is neither good nor bad. Whether it is good or bad depend on how people use them. People should choose to watch useful programs that can benefit from them in life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
My friend Tom likes shopping online. He always spends much money buying different clothes and decoration. Yesterday, he received the coat he has ordered online. He felt happy after opening the box. He thought he must look handsome in them. However, at the sight of the coat, he felt disappointed and angrily. The coat was too large and it didn’t look the same as describing online. He contacted the salesgirl and told her that she should exchange it free of the charge. The salesgirl didn’t think that she had made a mistake, but she agreed change the coat if he paid the fee. Tom did so but he decided that he should think twice before he did something from now on.
My mother’s birthday was coming, but I didn’t know how to buy for her. So I decided to go to the shopping centre, hope to buy a gift for her. Nothing catches my eye until I saw the beautiful scarf (围巾) through a window. I stepped into the shop and didn’t go to the scarf directly. Before asking about several other item, I pointed to the scarf. I tried my best get the price down to a level that I could afford it. Even though I paid much, it was complete a lovely scarf. I believed that my mother would like it very much.
In recently years, many young people prefer to go shopping on the Internet. People have different opinion about online shopping. Some think online shopping was more convenient and the goods are cheap. However, others believe it is unsafe to buy goods by credit card. And that is impossible to check the quality of the goods. As far as I am concerned, go shopping in a store is a better way. It is a fun to walk around stores and look different goods on sale. We can choose that we need. Beside, we can chat with the shop assistant and know a lot of useful information.
