增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ʌ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划横线，并在该词下面写出 修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday morning, hardly had I reached school while my attention was caught by a big poster on the notice board, saying that it would be the World Earth Day in a few of days.
Responding active to this, my classmates set to work immediately. In the afternoon, we brought to school what they thought to be of little value. Use scissors and paste, we made shopping bag and artworks out of them. After school, we went to the local community and launched a campaign, giving up what we had made and calling on people to make best of what they thought to be useless. Meanwhile, we hold a lecture in the community to raise people' s awareness of protecting the earth. We had a busy but meaning time.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tim,
It was my son’s birthday two days ago. As I didn’t buy any gift with him, I give him $10 as a birthday gift. Last evening he took his cousins out to buy some ice-cream with the money. It was turned out that these two kids were the last ones to the shop of the day. So the lady at the cash register who wanted get off work quickly told them their ice-cream was freely! They were exciting to hear that. Then I asked my son how he did with the money. To my joy, she said that he gave it to the homeless man.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver puts the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through. I stood there and couldn't believe what the complete stranger was so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer and watched the truck to disappear down the road. The man might need the umbrella herself, and he preferred to give it to us. Keep it in mind, and it is important to give without expect anything in return.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How time flies! It won’t be long after I say goodbye to my high school life. Look back on what has happened, I really want to share one of the most unforgettable experience with you. It was my first time to give English speech. I felt worried, so I turned to Mrs. Li, my English teacher, with help. She had encouraged me to work hardly and practise more. Confidently, I practised them countless hours. My performance was very successful that it impressed my classmates a lot. I was not a talent speaker; I knew it took the SWEAT to finally taste the SWEET success.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：1)每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2)只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, in the Palace Museum, I met a young student, that came from the USA. It was first time that I had met a foreigner, so I went to greet her in English. He told me that he was a college student travel in China and he liked China very much. I volunteered to show him around to the museum. He was impressing by the Chinese buildings and busy taking photo all the time. He said he hadnˈt seen so beautiful buildings before. After that, we go boating on a lake but had a good time together. I was very glad to have the chance to improve my spoken English.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改十处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I experienced something exciting on my way school last Friday. I saw the 50-yuan note drop from an old lady’s pocket, and I want to remind her. The old lady, therefore, didn’t seem to understand what I was talking about, which made me very embarrassing. My friend, Peter, just saw what had been happened. He picked up the notes, went towards the old lady, and asked if she had lost some money or not. The old lady checked her pocket and realized it was his money. She praised both of us after learn about the whole process.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One morning as usual my father woke me up to go to school. I didn’t want to, so I pretend to be ill. He worriedly asked me to lie down, drink some water or have a good rest. My father was so easy cheated, which surprised with me. He even read my favorite storybooks to me. Finishing one storybook, he went out to fetch another. What good chance! I rose from the bed and began to jump. I jumped so happily to notice my father had already come in. Though he stood there silently, I felt embarrassed and quickly ran to school, carried my schoolbag. I once wondered that my father could be taken in by my stupid lie. It was no doubt that my father’s deep love explained all.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last summer, I was a service volunteers at the local zoo. My job is to help the zookeepers with my daily work. To take care the animals, we had a lot of things to do. Every morning, we were arrived early to check on the animals and then cleaned up the places where the animals lived. It is very important for animals to have a clean but comfortable environment. An interested thing about the job was feeding them. We provided them with various food what could keep them healthy and some animals looked very amusingly when eating. I will never forget this experience and wants to continue to help and protect animals.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There is no doubt whether birds are our friends. Therefore, a large number of birds are killed for food every year, that really causes more and more people to be worried. The other day I was walking in the woods when the shot was heard. Hearing the shot, the birds in the trees fly in all directions. A bird was bad injured and looked sad. Find the bird injured, I decided to take it home. At home I took good care for it. When it recovered, so I returned it to the woods. I hope something can be done to protect birds from killed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning when I got into the taxi I have booked,I noticed it was a same gentleman that had
taken me back home last week. I still remembered that we'd talked about. He said he thought somebody
would care,so he felt surprised and was happily to know I still remembered him. He said he began to swim to lose weight,but he did it every morning before start work. I told him that swimming was one of the greatest way to keep us healthy and it also had positive effeets on our brains,too. He said he knew it was a good way avoiding depression and that he would keep on doing it all the time.
