增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Tony gave Claire a new haircut and improved his makeup. Because of he was not allowed to accompany her to the shops, he wrote out a list of things that he would need for his work on the house. Claire went downtown and buys these things. She had appointment to paint her nails, then she went into an expensive clothes shop. The saleswoman there was rude to her, and she rang Tony and told him she was being treated badly. He spoke to the woman, that immediately changed her attitude. Claire thanked Tony, tell him that he was a “dear”. As she turned around, there stood Gladys Claffern. What awful to be discovered by her, Claire thought. By the look on her face, Claire knew that Gladys thought they were in a relation. After all, she knew Claire’s husband’s name was Larry, not Tony. Although it was complete innocent, Claire felt guilty.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My friend John and I went to a park last Saturday. The moment when we got there, we were great attracted by the beautiful scenery. We couldn't help taking photo to record the wonderful moments. As we walked on, we noticed the boy on his bike in front of us suddenly fall to the ground. The boy struggled to his feet, and failed. John and I ran to offer our help him immediately. John helped him stand carefully while I picked up our bike. Noticing that the boy wasn't hurt, I gave the bike back to him and reminded him to be careful while ride. He was very pleasing and thanked us for what we did.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was a little kid, I dreamed of keeping on a dog. My parents disagreed, say that I was so young to take care of myself, let alone a dog. I didn’t give up. Instead, I tried to be independence and helped with housework. A few month later, my parents found that I had become considerate than before. They finally approve of my request. On my eight birthday, they bought me a lovely dog as the gift. Following my parents’ direction, I’ve learned how to raise the dog. I still miss those days that we accompanied each other.
增加∶在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除;把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改∶在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意∶
1. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This afternoon I went to see my grandfather by bus. It very crowded and I had to stand. Besides me, there was a woman hold a little boy in her arms. In the front of her, a young man occupied two seat, pretending to be sleeping. I heard the little boy ask his mother curious, “What’s wrong with the uncle?” I had thought that perhaps the woman would blame the man. Beyond my expectation, the woman answers with a smile, “Be quiet. This uncle must be very tiring because of hard work.” The young man must have heard our conversation. His face turned red but offered one seat to the woman at once.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was November 21, my parents wedding anniversary. But we have just buried my father the week before. Felt down, I ran into the bank to cash a check. The teller counted my changes. “Wow,” he said. “This penny is from 1951.” That was the year what my parents married. I saw it was a wheat penny. My sweet dad was coin collector. She had jars full of wheat pennies. If the teller had not been mentioned it, I would have spent that penny with a second thought. But now I will permanent value my penny from heaven.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处。
Last Sunday, I spent my lucky money on the special gift for my grandma. Early in the morning, I went to a cellphone store and choose a cellphone specially designing for seniors. I gave it to my grandma when I visited her at the weekend. On receive the cellphone, Grandma was very happy and eager to learn how to use it. I patiently explained several important function she needed. My grandma learned carefully and wanted have a try. Under my help, she successful called one of her friends. That afternoon, my grandma proudly told her neighbors that she could make calls with the new cellphone I bought it for her. They all praised what thoughtful I was.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, on my way home, I passed by an old lady who seemed in trouble. I turned back and asked if she was OK. She explained that I suddenly felt sick and had trouble walking in her shopping bags. I offered carry her bags, who seemed too heavy for her, but she politely refused. I insisted, because she agreed to let me help. As I walked with her, she introduced herself. I also told her my names. She asked if I know Li Guangming. I was a kind of surprised and said he was my grandfather. It turned out that the lady was my grandfather neighbor. What an unbelievably coincidence!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Apart from my mother, I’ve been very lucky to having two teachers who have fundamental influences on my life. One of them was my first piano teachers. She really got me interesting in playing the piano and made a huge impression in me at a very early age. She helped me to learn the basic techniques and develop understanding of the instrument. Then, when I was 16, I start studying with my second inspirational teacher. He made me too much more confident and encouraged me to enter competitions even when I felt certain and unconfident about doing this. He had enormous faith in us, and it was this, more than anything else, which inspired me to make music my career.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half the money. I should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleasing when I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how happily I was when I rode to school by my own bicycle.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用 (＼) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.
