增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I asked my dad if I had ever made him cry ago.He said,“Once.”He told me that on my first birthday,he laid out a pen,a dollar and a toy in front me.He wanted to see that I would pick.I think that a lot of Chinese people to do that. It represents what you'll value most in grow up. For examples,the pen is intelligence,money is wealth,and the toy is fun.To his surprised,l just sat there and stared at the items.After the while,l pushed everything aside and went right into his arms.He didn't realize that he is one of the choices.And that was the first,and the only time that I had made her cry.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I have a warm story to share with you. The school in San Francisco not only accepted a deaf student, but also teach the entire class sign language to allow them to better communicate with him.
It was in September last year when a woman asked the primary school to accept her six－year－old son, James, who, unfortunate, has a hearing disability. The teacher, Lily, was agreed almost immediately. Therefore, on the first day of school, she noticed James sit all by himself, unable to communicate with any of his classmates. To find a solution, he came up with a brilliant idea — getting the whole class to learn sign language along with James. So they got a sign language teacher on board. And a couple of month later, James was able to communicate all his classmates about homework and games.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Babe is one of my closest friend now. Whenever I feel down, I enjoy his company. Whenever he is in trouble, I would like help him. Actually, he was an abandoning cat. I rescued him from hard situations and nursed him back to health. It was in my friend's backyard which I found him. Then he was a baby of less than a month who he looked so skinny and sick. Seen him trembling with cold, I took him in with hesitation. Now he is 7 years old, health and happy. Quite often a naughty cat gets in fights with cats in the neighbourhood but frequently comes home with scratches in his thick, gray fur.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to Shapotou in last weekend. Having told about the history of Ning Xia, he was amazing at this wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the mixture of sand and water. I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for her. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in the activities of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and sign his name. Both Shapotou and the Ning Xia people deep impressed him so he decided to visit more places of interest when free.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I go to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing a table tennis. Amazing at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later in, I often watched them careful to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing until I became confident enough challenge the good players. At the end of the term, I became one of the best player in my class.
I am really proud of this experience, though it helps me realize that we all can fulfil our potential and achieve your goals through hard work. It also helps me well understand the proverb " Practice makes perfect. " than ever.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The first time I hear my family planned to climb on the weekend, I thought it was the end of the world so I was not good at sports at all. To cheering me up, my father told us the first one to get to the top of the mountain would given a prize. Upon hearing this, we began to run up. Although my sister was well ahead of him, I didn't give up. The prize attracted me so much as I kept running forward. Surprising, I reached the top at first. I turned out to be the happy of all, because I not only got the prize but also knew that one shouldn't give up easily. Now I am already 18 year old, but the memory of my childhood is still fresh.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mary is a high school student, who devotes herself at her lessons every day. Last Saturday, as usually, she went to several classes. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she was about to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was payday. After finishing work, Tony stayed out the whole weekend instead of go home. On Sunday night, he finally went home and found his wife looking at him angry. Tony didn’t say word to his wife, which made him even angrier. She then began to list all the things Tony had been done wrong over the years. Finally, she asked, “What would you like it if you didn’t see me for two and three days?” Tony replied, “That would be fine with me.” Hearing this, his wife hits him in the face.
Monday went by and Tony didn’t see his wife. Tuesday and Wednesday came and went, at the same result. But on Thursday, the swelling around his eye went down just enough that he could see his wife again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning, I found it was snowing heavily. Attracting by the beautiful sight, I decided to go out to take some photo. The snow finally stopped at noon, and I couldn't wait go outside with my camera. As I walked on the path in the front of our building, I saw a boy suddenly slip in the ground. It was at the moment when I realized what I should do. Immediately, I returned home to get a broom but started to sweep the path. It was so a hard job that I sweated a lot. An hour late, the thick snow was cleared away. My neighbors all smiled and give me thumbs-up. I felt very happy that I had done something for my neighborhood.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At 16, my uncle decided he was ready to having a full-time job and leaves school. At the first my grandparent did not agree with him. In fact, they were very angry with him. “We’re concerned your future!” my grandfather said. But my uncle was determined to prove them wrongly, so he applied to dozens of jobs. In the end he was offering a job in an accountant’s office, because he was good at maths. Before long, he found he was difficult to do the job well, therefore he began studying accountancy in his spare time. Thankful, a few years later, he passed his accountancy exams and became a partner in the firm.
