增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Last week I notice a spider in my bathtub. I must admit its long legs were a little bit frightened. For the next few day, each time I was entered the bathroom, I would find it still in the bathtub. Then, it sudden occurred to me that the spider might have been trapped and unable to get out of the bathtub. So, I gathered my courage and was able to move them onto a small piece of string attached on my hairbrush. In end, I carried it safely to the window from that it made its way outside. I felt a great sense of joy in rescue the poor little fellow.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
At Christmas Eve, Abby and her friends got together to hold their annual Christmas gift exchange party. They excitedly lay out their presents on the table and started drawing names. When it was Abby’s turn, she was very happy because she got the biggest gift. Her friends’ eye were shining with envy and expect. Then, Abby lifted the gift up to her ear and tried to guess which was inside by shaking it.
When Abby finally opened gift, it turned out to be a big skull-shaped pillow, that almost scared her to death. Everyone else was shocked as well except the naughty boy who prepared for the gift. He burst out laughing as he watched his friends’ reactions. Thanks to this surprised gift, Abby and her friends both had the most unforgettable gift exchange party in their life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
Last term, our school holds a math competition. To my surprise, I got the highest mark. To be honest, I felt very proudly. I was overjoyed. When one of my classmate asked me a question, I thought it was too easy and I was impatient with explaining them. As result, some of my classmates began to thinking badly of me. When I was having classes, I was absent-minded. By and by, I fell behind. When I became aware for this, I felt regretful. As a saying goes, pride goes after a fall. This experience made me to realize we should be modest, no matter whatever progress we make.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On the first day in my new school I felt upset so I had no friend. I usually sat on my seat all day without saying the word. I am too shy to speak to anyone. Fortunate the situation didn't last long thanks to Mrs Lee. She came talk to me when she saw I was alone during the break time. After communicating, she found I had a talent for painting and encouraged me to join in the art club. There I made some friends with which I shared the same interest. Mrs Lee gave me patient guidances and great care, turn me from a shy girl into an outgoing one. It was Mrs Lee who made her optimistic and confident.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Of all the people I have encountered in my life, a person I admire most is my English teacher. Working for our class teacher, she has to work around the clock to take good care of us as well as giving lectures and grade homework. She always walks towards the bus stop, carrying a bag full of notebook or a big folder with assessment reports she makes the night before. She is the one we spend major part of our day and she is the one who constant encourages us to break barriers and to be extraordinary. We owe all of our success to him. I will not forget her instructions but I would like to express my the deepest gratitude to her.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, a man dressing in rags came into our shop. We stared at him doubtfully when he said he wanted a new coat. I showed him the cheapest one which was fit for him. I thought he might be a bit of upset about the price. However, he didn’t seem to care about it at all. So I persuaded him buy it. Then he hand me a Black Card, an unlimited credit card. I was shocking and asked my boss for advices. He looked very angry but told me to find the best coat for the man immediate. I have never seen him so kind to somebody else like that before.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I work in a public school to help students whom often have difficulty in learning and communicating with. They also feel uncomfortably being a part of the school community. To help us, I created a kindness learning community calling the BCS Group. The group set the goal to write and produce pictures for a book for kindergarten kid on how to be kind. We met our goal of completed the book last month. And we proudly read it to over eight classes so far. We also launched a kindness challenge such that the students could carry out acts of kindness.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第1处起）不计分。
The day before yesterday, I went to the bookstore where is near my school to buy a reference book. It was Saturday, so there was many people. Under the help of the shop assistants, I quickly got the book I needed. I was about to leave while I found someone trying to steal a man's money. Although I was nervous, but I tried to think of a way to help. Suddenly, a good idea occurred me. I stepped on the man's foot by purpose. As I expected, the man's scream gives the thief a fright, who quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude to him.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be fully prepared. And the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blankly. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks to his advice, I never give up when I do anything.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：1.在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once I came across a middle-aged man whom was accompanying his old father to the Beijing Astronomical Museum. As the old man slowly stepped out of the car, he suddenly lost his balances. But his son immediate grasped his hand and supported him before his falling. Catch hold of his son's hand, the old man breathed a deep sigh. “When you were kid, I was holding your hand to support you. Now, you are holding my hand to support mine," he said in an unhappy voice. "How time flies!" Hearing from his dad's words, the son unconsciously tighten his dad's hand. "Nothing new, Papa!" he replied softly. "Just let nature takes its course as it is or we will live a happy life."
