增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意: (1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2) 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember my thirteen birthday celebration. Instead of the usually parties, my parents decided to spend the whole day with myself. They took me to a larger bookshop first, in which I spent a long time looking through books and magazines there before selecting those I wanted. Then, we went to the cinema. There were many different movies to watch. We finally choose Fantastic 4. My face lit up when I saw the comfortable seats or the huge screen as well. That was one of the most memorable birthday I had ever had. Although I didn’t have a cake or my friends celebrate it, I was pleasant to do which I wanted that day.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr. Zhang was on his way home from work at midnight when he smells a strong burning smell. He looked around and saw black smoke shoot from a window of a cafe. The situation seemed awfully. Although he was nervous, he whispered himself, “Be calm.” He hurriedly dialed 119, but then he went to knock at the neighbors’ doors to ask for help. Informing of the situation, the majority of the neighbor offered to fight the fire with him. When the firefighters arrived, the fire was almost under the control. The coffee shop owner and the staff expressed his gratitude to Mr. Zhang and the neighbors which bravery was highly thought of.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每句不超过两个错误;
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
3.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A man had two sons. The younger one said to his father, ‘Father, give me my part of the wealthy.’ But the father divided his property between them. Not many days later, the younger son got all which he had, leave for a distant country where he spent everything. Then a severe famine hit that country, and he was on need. So he had joined himself to a citizen who sent her to feed pigs. And he would glad to fill his stomach with pigs’ food. When he came to himself, he went back and said to his father: “Father, I am no longer worthy to be called your son; treat me as one of your hired servant.” But his father was filling with compassion and threw his arms around him and kissed him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was driving to a meeting when I suddenly found there was a truck in the front of me. This truck stopped in the middle in the street and allowed an elderly lady cross the street. I was used to trucks driving straight ahead and not stopped for anyone. I called the company in that the driver worked and told them that he was a great driver because he lets the elderly lady cross the street. I wanted this driver to be recognizing for his good manner and driving. The customer service lady was thank that I called and let him know about the driver.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dewey is my pet dog. While water is his favorites, he is also a big fan of snow. One winter day, I take him to a huge snowy field where he could run and play. Before Dewey started to play, I thought would be nice to take a photo of a snowy field. Dewey was such excited to run around in the snow that he couldn’t help ran right through the photo, but ended up helping me create something fantastic. I decided the photo couldn’t be keeping to me alone because of it was just too great. I posted it online to see that anyone else would find it just as wonderfully—and of course, they absolutely did.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
While leaving a shop, I heard a conversation between a staff member and a lady, whom was looking to enter the shop with her dog. A staff member was apologizing that the dog not permitted to enter—it wasn’t a support dog. The lady turned to leave out. I called out to her to wait and offer to look after the dog. She was surprised, and half joking asked if I was going to steal her dog. I told her I was a pet lover either. I then spent lovely 20 minutes get to know Baxter while its owner took his time to do the shopping. How a wonderful experience!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last weekend, I watched The Planets. It’s astronomical series, which left a deeply impression on me.
Presented by a famous physicist, it told facts about the eight planets in, the solar system. The vivid exposure of the secrets of their origins and history held his interest most. The physicist also discusses how the planets become that they are today. Besides, many scenes on the show are visually amazed, especially those of the Earth, the five biggest planet in the solar system. They’re similar to the scenes in one of my favorite sci-fi film, but they’re real. The Planets greatly adds up to my knowledge of the universe. It inspires me to learn more about astronomy and explores space as well.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My grandpa has been in hospital for one and a half week. He has just received the operation and is very weak. Seeing his low spirits, so I often come to accompany him after school. Obviously, he is more than happier every time I come. The other patients in the same room are also extremely helpful. They talk merry with my grandpa and comfort him, say he will be well soon. The nurse, she is in charge of my grandfather, also encourages him. I am so grateful to what they have done. Gradually, my grandfather cheers up. Yesterday, he even asked me bring him a book as he want to read to kill time.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I headed for the exit with the things bought in the store. The colder wind reminded me of my gloves. Besides, I could find them neither in my pockets or in the shopping bag, which made me a little nervous. I remembered had putting them into the right pocket of my coats. I decided to return to the store that I had shopped. Just at that time, I saw shop owner walking to me. In her hand was my gloves. She said I had left it on the counter. I was so glad and grateful to her kindness that I thanked her again and again.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Since I turned 12, I had had a birthday tradition. Put into my pocket three times as much one-dollar coins as I can get, I go outside. Then I give them to stranger around town.
Reactions are wonderfully as I explain, “It’s my birthday but helping you is your gift to me.” In this case people will tell the story of strange guy who paid for their coffee. The best one was when I helped paid for a young man’s meal. He was shocked and then told him I had made his day full of happiness. He wished me for a happy birthday and said that he would help others as I had done.