增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Annabelle and Alyssa are twin sister, and people can hard tell them apart. Annabelle successfully entered into a famous American technology company after graduation. Because her outstanding achievements plus exceptional capacity, soon she was promoted to a senior management position in the company. Alyssa enjoyed see movies as a child and she became a director when they grew up. A decade ago, she decides to shoot a TV series featuring a fair and honest judge. Where in trouble, she asked for professional legal advice. The series are scheduled for release in August this year. All of them have succeeded in their respective careers, and their parents are proud of them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, Jack and I were walking down the street when we saw the old man fall off his bike. I suggested we carried the old man to hospital, and Jack did not agree. He had learnt first aid, so I said that the old man shouldn’t be moving. We should leave him what he was and check him first. Seen the old man wasn’t breathing, Jack asked me to call the emergency center and he used the mouth-to-mouth way make the old man breathe. Soon the old man began to move on a little and the doctors also arrived. They said what we had done were right.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My little cousin is great interested in science. And he does some dangerous experiments sometime. Although his parents wants to encourage him to be great scientist, they often worry about his safety. Last week, when my cousin was doing an experiment, he hurt him thumb. Felt sad, my aunt wanted him to stop doing that experiment. Therefore, my cousin didn’t want to give up. He said, “Many scientists got hurt when they were doing experiments, but they didn’t give out.” My aunt had to have him to finish the experiment and he finally succeeded in finish it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My daughter and I went to a supermarket where was two blocks away to buy some fruits. While she was queuing at the check-out，my daughter waited on a benches nearby. When finished, my daughter was seated next to elderly woman. I had a talk with her and find out that she was waiting for a bus to go home. I offered to take her home. She glad agreed. It was a nice chance to give up someone a ride when needing. The nice thing was what my daughter and I gained a new friendship. And we promised to visited and have lunch with the elderly woman.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Julian Melcer is an 80-year-old man, which often goes out for walking. Last week, when he was walking in the street, he saw the baby pigeon in the middle of the road. The pigeon was trying fly away from a cat but she fell to the ground. Julian saved from the pigeon and brought her home. He fed the pigeon water or food. Soon they became good friend. Julian is happily to go outside with the pigeon on her shoulder every day. He says every person could have an animal as a friend. The most important thing are to respect the animal.
Mark Twain was once traveling in French. He went on train to Dijon. He was very tired and wanted to sleep. He asked the conductor to call him up when the train came to Dijon. He explained that he was a heavy sleeper. “I may shout loudly when you will try to wake me up, but don’t take any notice of what I say. Just put me of the train.”
Then Mark Twain went to sleep. When he woke up, the train had already arrived to Paris. He thought the conductor had forgotten wake him up at Dijon. He was very angry that he ran up to the conductor and began to shout at him. “I had never been so angry in my life,” he said.
The conductor looked at him and said, “You are not half so angry like the American whom I put off the train at Dijon.”
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
My uncle drove his car meet his friends. When he found there was still some time leaving before the train had arrived, he wanted to take a short sleep. He was falling sleep when a woman came and asked him the time. He opened his eye and answered,“Half past eight.” With a “Thank you!” a woman left. On a short while this happened again. So my uncle wrote “I don’t know the time” on a piece of paper and put them on the window of the car. A few minutes late, an old man came and woke him up, “Hi, young man. I can tell you that time it is. It’s nine o'clock now.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, our teacher gave us a task to write a paper about Old China. I make up a group with another three classmates. We didn’t have much information, but we decided to ask the teacher. After that, we took the trip to visit a famous museum. When we arrived the museum, we saw the statue (雕塑) of Deng Xiaoping. His great image let us to admire him immediately. There were so many statue of great people, who fought brave for New China and made what we are today. When faced difficult situations, they chose to sacrifice (牺牲) them. Their stories are so touching, who encourage us to cherish the life we have.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m a student of Senior Three now. Every day I have plenty of homeworks to finish. Because this, I can’t spare any time for relaxation. What’s worse, my mother always put pressure on me, urging me to work harder. The other day, I was extreme angry with my mother. As a result, I couldn’t help quarreled with her at a high voice. Later, I was realized my mistake and made a apology to her. Now I have made up my mind that no matter how difficulties I meet with, I’ll overcome it bravely.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My family was very poorly when I was a child. My parents lost their jobs and lived with heavy pressure. As result, I wanted to studying hard so as to have a different future. During my high school life, I spent all my time studying those difficult subject, which made me one of the best students in our school. After graduation, I am admitted to a key university which I met a lot of interesting friends. Now, I am working on a big company but I am able to afford anything I want. What's more, my parents also have found out new jobs. So I believe that our dreams will come true if you try our best.
