注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I spent last Sunday fish with my friends. The difficult journey to their destination was well worth it. Beautiful as the scenery surrounding the lake was, but there was hardly anyone else. We random separated into two groups and my team caught more fish. Before cooking them, we had to remove their insides. It feels like an adventure when I did a job. After eating, we packed all the things which had been left into our bags, on the purpose of protecting the environment. When leaving, I had mixed feelings. I didn’t mind staying several extra day, but it was also nice get home to my warm bed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a little child, I liked to stay at my grandparents’ home during the summer holiday. That impressed me was helping them with their housework and farm work. Beside, I usually did my homework for only an hour in the evening. I spent most of my time played with the kids in the neighborhood. We go fishing together and explored the nearby forest several time. I also taught them to learn speaking English. We even used English to communicate each other. By the end of the holiday, they could have a simply conversation in English. For this, their parents came to thank me. In a brief, in our childhood, we really felt relaxed and enjoyed us.
Last weekend has witnessed my active participation in the community service with my classmates, the theme of them was “Caring for the Elderly”. As scheduled, we arrived at the nursing home on the morning, where we helped mop the floor, dust the furnitures and clean all the windows. After that, we made dumplings with the elderly, chat together happily. Tired although I was, it was rewarding and meaning. Not only did I bring joy to them, but also I found confidence in keeping their company. It is voluntary labor which enables me to understand the Chinese traditional virtues. To be frankly, I have benefited from it greatly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many teachers are talking about the importance of after-class activity, that is believed to bring more creativity to the class. Actually, the traditional class pays much attention to the knowledges from the books all the time, and it is easy let students feel bored. As a result, every student is so exciting about the PE class, so they can enjoy the freedom in it. After-class activity offers students in a different way to broaden their mind and inspire their creativity. Students feeling relaxed and can think in an actively way. Many great people get his idea from nature, so if teachers wanted to improve students’ interest, the good learning place should not be limited in the classroom.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Although autumn leaves are very beauty all around the world, the colorful leaves in Beijing’s Xiangshan Park is really unique. The explosion of colors across the park is an amazed sight that only Mother Nature can provide. The fall scenery of the park never disappoints and pretty sights can be found everywhere, regardless the weather.
Each autumn, people in Beijing will squeeze in their last gatherings in the park after winter settles in. It is a perfect season for outdoor exploration with some of their friend. Visitors will took off their jackets at the noon as the sun shines brightly in the sky. They will ride bikes, or walk along the parkways that offer him a chance to take in the sights before they are sending back indoors until spring.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均只限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the Spring Festival come, there will be a long winter holiday. However, I am not going to travel somewhere, because I don’t want to join the crowds. Instead of, I just want to stay at home and enjoyed the family time. I am so delightedly that my grandparents will come to stay with us for few days. So my parents decide to having a family hotpot and invite some relatives together. It is so a great reunion that everyone will have much fun. What’s more, we will drive to our hometown, what is near the city center. There will be fewer people and we can appreciate the beauty of natures.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Ʌ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
Last week, my class went fishing. It takes us about one hour to reach the fish farm by bus. It had four largest ponds. So, we were divided to four groups. Anyone caught the most fish in two hours won the game. At first, I thought it was easy to fish, and things didn’t go well. One and a half hour passed, and I didn’t catch one. I felt so sadly that I wanted to give up. But at that time, the class mate from another group came to me, he taught me carefully and helped me catch it. I was happy that I was both caught a fish and gained friendship!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Spring has come with all its beauty! Trees have turned green or flowers can be seeing everywhere. Last Friday, my friends and me went on a spring outing. It was such a great fun! We cycled along the streams and down the paths. It didn’t take us long to get the foot of the mountain, that we left our bikes. Then we begin hiking. As we reached the top of the mountain, we were shocking to see many plastic bottle and food bags here and there. All of us started to collect the rubbish and then took it down the mountain. We felt happily to have done our part for the environment.
增加: 在缺词处加个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday, our grade held a fun sports meeting, that aim was to relieve us senior three students from pressure. I, as well as my best friend, were asked to compete in the three-legged race.
The three-legged race required effective cooperation among teammates. Thus, during the days before the competition, we practised the game after the school.
Then came the big days. With my left foot and my friend’s right foot tying together, we set out fast as soon as our PE teacher blown his whistle. The playground was filled with our schoolmates cheers. A few minutes later, we tried hardly and crossed the finishing line quickly. By getting involved in the game, not only we get a little leisure from our busy school life but also we got the joy of working together with others.
10 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I went to the seaside to spend my summer holiday with my family in last year. We stayed there for about two weeks. The weather was much hot than that in my hometown, but I got used to it. Every morning, I get up early and went for breakfast ahead of time. Then I went the beach and talked with John which was my new friend. I came across her on my first morning there. John were warm-hearted and he seemed to be very familiarly with the seaside village. Sooner we became very good friends. We have kept write to each other ever since then.
