增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m terrible sorry for my failing to go on a trip to Chengdu with you next Friday. It is mainly because of at that time I will be fully occupied in looking after my little brother. Two days before, he broke his leg unexpectedly and my parents won’t come back until next weekend, that conflicts with our plan. However, I am not able to keep my promise to visiting Chengdu with you. I would appreciate if you could allow me to fix another time to show you around some place of interest in Chengdu.
I really hope you could accept my apologies. Please don’t hesitate to drop me the line about your preferable date.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, I accompanied my little brother to swimming pool. There, he soon got along with a boy possess a water gun and they played with the toy together. When my brother ran excitedly with the water gun, he scratch the boy’s neck by accident. Shallowly as the scratch was, it was clear. I hurried to comfort the boy, but called the boy’s father. I feared he’d blame for my brother and me. Which was quite unexpected was that I just said it was no big deal. Seeing my brother hang his head in shames, the father comforted my brother, which made me quite touching.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My family has a tradition of pick pear flowers for food every spring. This year, as usually, together with my parents, I go back to my hometown. We visited their grandparents and picked pear flowers as well. It was best time when pear flowers were in full bloom. That impressed us most was the sweet smell of the flowers in the air. As the trees were tall, so my grandfather and father used a long pole to getting the flowers down from the trees. My mother and I picked them off from the ground. At noon, my grandmother fried cookie for us, which were made of pear flowers mixed with flour and eggs.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, Jack was walking home from school while a shiny coin caught his eye. He stopped and immediate picked it up. It was a nice dollar coin, with them he could buy a package of candies. But he had decided to put the coin onto the ground again. What if homeless person needed it less than he did? Feeling confusing, Jack picked up the coin again. What if one of the wealthy guy found it? Finally, after care consideration, he decided to keep the coin and stayed where he was, waiting for the owner to return to look after it.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Andy,
I just wanted to write you a note of encouragement because I know you feel completely frustrate at not getting an award tonight.
Most of the time, you don’t necessary succeed in everything without difficulty for the first time you try it. For example, you may have to do a math problem a few times after you get it right, made you afraid of failure. Instead of letting failure define you, let it teach you. As the matter of fact, it is happiness matters most, whatever happens in your life. Do remember no one can ever take away his choice to be happy. Close your eye. Put your hand on your heart. Breathe deeply until you feel your spirit floating up. Love you so much.
Mom
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is perhaps the most performed songs in the world. A birthday party wouldn’t be complete with participants joyously sing out the song around a big birthday cake. Yet “Happy Birthday to You” is privately property and protected by copyright.
It is fine when you sing it by yourself. But if someone wants to do them in movies or TV shows or in any other commercial activities, they need pay the Warner Music Group for the right. According to a forbes.com report, “Happy Birthday to You” is believing to be netting the company $2 million a year in the fees, this could soon be changed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Village life is totally different from that in the city. I brought up in a small village but I can remember so many facts about village life on winter mornings.
In the village, people, which fields need to be looked after, are all hard-working. Too much cold and fog can make our work a little bit of hard. They wake up early in the morning and went to their fields, drove their cows. Winter mornings are special for kids as well. This time is perfectly for playing games. As the child, I would go out with my ball to play with some other child. And that is why I have been in love with winter mornings ever since.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Good habits benefit from our life and career. But unfortunately, everyone may have some bad habits, includes me.
In the past, crazy about snacks, I missed meals too often that my health was affected serious. What’s worse, I used to addicting myself to the phone every night, which makes it difficult for me to concentrate in class. Having realized these problems, I determined to kick it. To my delighted, with people around me giving hand, I succeeded and even improved my academic performance.
In conclusion, getting rid of bad habits is of great importance to our physical or mental health.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, my friend invited me to visit my hometown with her. I asked for my parents’ permission, but they agreed. Leaving home for first time made me very happily. I was like a bird fly in the sky. But when the fourth day comes, I started to miss my parents. Especial when it was night time, the darkness made me to feel lonely. So I went home the next day. Through the experience, I begin to realize how a nice place the home is and that my parents are the loveliest persons. It is lucky for me to have so a happy family.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
Many parents have bought their children their own computers, hope that they will use them sensible for their schoolwork and have the latest skills. Schools teach information technology as an essential part of the school curriculum (大纲). But some people feel they have a lot of disadvantage. Teenagers don’t have a balanced life and computers are turning them into “geeks” which no longer take exercise or even know how to have a conversation. An expert also warns about the dangers of “chatting” to people one didn’t know over the Internet. “I strongly recommend that the government ban all Internet cafes as such many teenagers are wasting their time on games and Internet chatting which have nothing to do their schoolwork. But, some teenagers can be seen as good examples as they put the enthusiasm for computers to good use. Computers help him organize the schoolwork and learn a future career as well as.”
