My neighbor Granny Zhang and my mother are good friend. They often walk, dance and shop together. Last week Granny Zhang gave us several pies making by herself. And she brought big apples, which given by her relatives. We were very grateful for her generosity. How could we thanked her? Then an opportunity came. Yesterday was the Children’s Day. I made lots of dumplings with my mother, and then I sent any to Granny Zhang’s house. She was very happily to see me. She happily accepted the food but gave me a box of chocolate for return. Later she told me that she celebrated the day by cook the dumplings for her grandchildren.
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注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
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Although friendship is important in our lives, some consider this hard to make friends. A fine way to make friends and introduce yourself to your neighbors in Norway is to present them for a simple gift like a cake but a loaf of bread. If you gave them expensive gifts, they may suspect your intentions. If you have never baked a cake before, it may take you months to produce a beautiful cake whose can stand upright. But don’t wait for perfection. Do your better, and when you think your creation is good enough give away, do it. They will appreciate your honest gesture of friendship even if your bread is hard, and the cake looks interestingly. In fact, that helps you make the true friends is not a valuable gift but a sincere attitude.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划--横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限- -词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi, Jane,
It had been almost half a year since I came to my new school. I think I should share with you one of the problem I have been facing.
As I told you last time, I have made three good friends here. We usual hang out together after school. We've been spending a lot of time singing in KTV. It has really cost me too many. I also think it is a time wasting activity! In fact, I don't want go anymore, but I'm afraid I'll loss their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to us?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Yours,
Grace
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Steve, our monitor, is my best friend. We go skate, play football, talk about sports, and go to a concert. When I break my leg, he always came over to play games; in school, he carried my schoolbag for me and got our lunch for me. I know I can always count him, but he also knows that he can ask me for help.
Some friends may be in your life for the while. Others will be here for a long time, maybe even much forever. I would hate to move, until I could take my friends with me. They are too importance to leave behind.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
After hearing a knock on the door, I opened it. But to my surprise, somebody was there. “Look!” my little daughter, Micah, said happy, “There’re some flowers.” “Happy May Day!” said the card, signing by the girls next door. I remembered of my grandma who used to celebrate the holiday by giving some backyard flowers to many of her neighbors and friend. Then, Micah and I headed out to our yard but picked up some roses. We took some to the girls next door, and then drove to the hospital that my grandma stayed. At Grandma’s sickroom, Micah hands a rose to my Grandma. Then we gave rest of the roses to other patients there. They felt very gratefully for our kind action.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When stick in traffic, I noticed the woman in the car next to me crying. Alone in her car, she was kept wiping her tears and struggled to caught her breath. Honest speaking, I didn't mean to stare, and I could hardly look away. As she pulled her car ahead of me, I could still see her crying for quite a few minute. When it was my turn to drive up besides her, I managed to get her attention by waving a little toy pig in car and smiled at her She gave me the smile, too. At that moment, traffic cleared up and we drive off.
Harmony is very important to our society. All of us are looking forward to live in a harmonious society. As students, I thought we should first keep our dormitories with harmony. For one thing, it can create a good environment for my studies and life. For other, it can help us grow healthily. Unfortunately, there are some way to make our dormitories harmonious. Firstly, we should learn to understand each other and solve everything in the peace. Secondly, we should try to get rid our own bad habits. Lastly, we should share or get on with each other.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble get along with your friends. Here is my advices. First, talk with your friends often. It is the good idea to share your happiness and sadness to them. Second, helping each other was very important. It’s better for you to help your friends have trouble in study or daily life. And they will be help you when you need help. Third, learn to appreciate your friends’ strengths. In this way, you can make really friends. Whether you follow my suggestions, I believe your friends will understand them better.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；
3. 3.只允许修改10出，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Hi, Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the
problems I have been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
