此行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home
at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However ,
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life .
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out .
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories
are as sweet as ever before .
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m sorry to hear that you’re having trouble get along with your friends. Here is my advices. First, talk with your friends often. It is the good idea to share your happiness and sadness to them. Second, helping each other was very important. It’s better for you to help your friends have trouble in study or daily life. And they will be help you when you need help. Third, learn to appreciate your friends’ strengths. In this way, you can make really friends. Whether you follow my suggestions, I believe your friends will understand them better.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误仅限1词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am good at all the subjects, and always ready help others. At school I get along well with my classmates. Therefore, I have a problem that troubles myself all the time. It’s the relationship among my deskmate and me. He is a hard-working student, who keeps school rule well. But he’s a person with few words. What’s more, he got angry easily. I don’t know what to deal with him. Maybe that ’s why we’ve seldom sat down to exchange our feelings and thoughts. I value our friendship. I hope we can know more about with each other and understand each other better. I do hope we will be close to each other than before.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
Dear Jin Jing,
Your problem is common one among middle school students.Maybe the following advices can help you.First in all, believe in yourself.Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence.The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates.One smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any word.Your smile will show that you are friendly to him.Next, trying talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share the same interest as you.You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies.Unless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her.Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly.
Yours,
Lily
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1)每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2)只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Janice,
It’s been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some problems. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We’ve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It’s been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many money. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Yours,
Grace