增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The other day, I was invited my friend Sam’s home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn’t know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. He went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.
Everybody needs have friends in life. But being a friend can sometime be hard work. Learn how to solve problems in friendship can make you a better friend and a happier person. An universal problem between friends is that they don’t know why to talk with each other about difficult things. When they are talking, they often get madly with each other. What can they do? It took time to learn how to communicate well, and it is important to understand why a friend gets angry to you when you say something. If you know which makes your friend angry, and you can try to talk about the problem in a different way.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you tell him the secret, never will he talks about it with anybody else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with them.
My neighbor Granny Zhang and my mother are good friend. They often walk, dance and shop together. Last week Granny Zhang gave us several pies making by herself. And she brought big apples, which given by her relatives. We were very grateful for her generosity. How could we thanked her? Then an opportunity came. Yesterday was the Children’s Day. I made lots of dumplings with my mother, and then I sent any to Granny Zhang’s house. She was very happily to see me. She happily accepted the food but gave me a box of chocolate for return. Later she told me that she celebrated the day by cook the dumplings for her grandchildren.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11 处起) 不计分。
My best friend had a seriously car accident last week. Although she has some major bones broken, but she is alive. The other three passenger, one being her 11-year-old sister, all managed to escape unharmed.
Many friends are offered support now. Some are cooking for her. Others have been taking care her sister, or picking up supplies she need. When I visited herself yesterday, we locked eyes. We both cried as she told me everything it had happened after the accident. It was the great release for both of us. We were both moved by what her friends have done for her.
Being a good listener can not only help someone solve much of life’s problems but also improves his way of dealing with matters. There was a time while misunderstanding occurred to between my friend and me, and we quarreled terribly at that time. For the sake of our friendship, I took great courage to make an explanation to him. But as a result, the more I explained, the angry he seemed. I was in great despair. Quarreling with him again one day, I suddenly realized that I should be good listener so that he could tell me how was in his mind. Strange enough, it does work. Misunderstanding between us was removing and we became good friends again .
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear friends,
How time flies! It had been two weeks since you came to my school for the exchange program launching to promote communication and cooperation between our two schools.
During the past two weeks, we have studied and lived in a same place, which has enabled us know each Oher better. Do sports together on the playground gives us an opportunity to promote our friendship. That has impressed us most is your art show, in which you showed outstanding talent. I believe the program is of greatly benefit to the students in my school.
At last, on behalf of all the students in your school, I wish you a safe journey at home. And I also sincerely expect more program like this in the future.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Monday, my classmates and I went to play football. When we were running to catching the ball, I stepped on Ann’s left foot. As a result, the bottom of her left shoe got separated the shoe’s other part. Seeing that, many classmates burst into a laughter. But there were a little upset in her eyes. She just purchased the shoes a couple of day ago. And she was on an extreme tight budget. Yet she just smiles at me kindly and said I didn’t have to pay for the damage. However, I secretly bought him a pair of new shoes. Seeing the shoes, Ann was too moving to speak. From now on, our bond was strengthened.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the saying goes, “Friendship is like sunshine keeps us warm and helps us grow.” I think it is important for us to making good friends so that we can always have a fun. I like to choose people who are kind, honesty and helpful as my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears about them whenever I get into trouble.
Now I have some good friends who trusts me. I always care about what had happened to them, because I call them once a week. I always go out with my friends, chatting and play. I try to offer some advices to my friends when necessary. In this way I am able to keep friendship.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have many friends so my best friend is called Li Mei. I met her about five years before in a class we attended together. Though we hadn’t known each other before, we have lots of things in common. At that time, the pressure with us to study was quite heavily. We both hoped to pass the National College Entrance Exam and entered university. He was very diligent and we both studied hard. I was good at maths while she good at English. Finally, we both did very well in the exam. In the fact, she gave me a lot of helps with my study. Our friendship has growing a great deal over the last five years.