增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Monday, my classmates and I went to play football. When we were running to catching the ball, I stepped on Ann’s left foot. As a result, the bottom of her left shoe got separated the shoe’s other part. Seeing that, many classmates burst into a laughter. But there were a little upset in her eyes. She just purchased the shoes a couple of day ago. And she was on an extreme tight budget. Yet she just smiles at me kindly and said I didn’t have to pay for the damage. However, I secretly bought him a pair of new shoes. Seeing the shoes, Ann was too moving to speak. From now on, our bond was strengthened.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have many friends so my best friend is called Li Mei. I met her about five years before in a class we attended together. Though we hadn’t known each other before, we have lots of things in common. At that time, the pressure with us to study was quite heavily. We both hoped to pass the National College Entrance Exam and entered university. He was very diligent and we both studied hard. I was good at maths while she good at English. Finally, we both did very well in the exam. In the fact, she gave me a lot of helps with my study. Our friendship has growing a great deal over the last five years.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One of my friends has sent me a shorter message, saying that true friends are one soul in two bodies. It moves me such much and makes me think that true friendship is.
Nowadays, the word friendship has used so often that it has lost its meaning. Some people jokingly put it that friends are made to be taken advantage of. On my opinion, true friendship doesn’t meant that when you need your friends’ help, you’ll treat them to dinner. True friendship is important, which is the communicate of the hearts and understanding of the souls. True friends keep you in a mind, no matter where they are. Once you had found such true friends, do treasure them. With friendship, life will be happily and harmonious.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Friday’s afternoon, I was on my way to home after school. Suddenly, a sound came behind, “Hi, Li Hua.” He turned around and saw it was Li Tao. Li Tao said, “I was going to play football with Mingming. Could you come to join us?” I told him that I had made appointment with Peter, who asked me to help him with his Chinese. Heard this, he became unhappily. Just then, Yang Yun came. Having found out that we were talking about, she said she could do it instead of me. But we three were both very happy.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线(_),并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, a friend is someone you can share your secrets to. If you tell him a secret, he would never talk about it with anybody else. Besides, a friend is always good listener when you need one. After hear your sad stories, he will say some words that is nice and warm. Still, your happiness makes him happily too. What’s more, a good friend is willing to offer the help to which you need, or can at least give you some advices. In a word, friends are those you like and trust, and you will enjoy every minute that you spent with them.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the past three years, I have been great influenced by my best friend, Lucy. She is popular with all the classmates due to her kind as well as her positive attitude towards life. Generally speak, she is an excellent person who is worth making friends. I still remember the day that I told her I had failed in a math test. To her surprise, she gave me a warm hug and encouraged me. She said that we should never give up when face with difficulties.She kept telling me she believed I would make a great progress one day. Thanks to her encouragement, I finally get out of the shadow. How lucky I am to have so a nice friend!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线(_),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was a time that Zhang Yi and I were good friends, but now we are like stranger. On his first day in our class two years ago, he had no one to talk. I was the first one to say hello to her, so we became friends. Zhang Yi did well in math or he was always ready to helping me with it. One day last month, I told him about that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend. But he told my father about it and that made me angrily. Now, I knew I was wrong. I decide to say sorry to him, because I don't want to lose so a good friend.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\),并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Friendship is very importance. Everyone needs friendship. Friendship makes us getting on well with one another to go ahead under different kind of difficulties in the front us. But real friendship is no easy to come by. True friendship must be sincerely and be based on understand. A good friend can always give us some good advices. However, the more friends we have, better we can improve ourselves.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As the saying goes, “Friendship is like sunshine what keeps us warm and helps us grow.” I think it is important for us to making good friends so that we can always have a fun. I like to choose people who are kind, honesty and helpful as my friends. I like to share my thoughts and fears them whenever I get into trouble.
Now I have some good friends who trusts me. I always care about what had happened to them, because I call them once a week. I always go out with my friends, chatting and play. I try to offer some advices to my friends when necessary. In this way I am able to keep friendship.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面划一横线(_),并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am extreme happy to know you are coming to our school next semester as an exchange students. I even can’t wait to meet you.
When it comes to learn traditional Chinese painting, you are very lucky. Our school had set up various optional courses, Chinese painting including. The students meet on every Wednesday afternoon from 3pm. to 5pm. With the professional teacher’s help, not only can you improve your skill, but also you will make many friends. That you have to do is register on our website. Besides, tools like Chinese brush, ink and paper is also necessary. If there is anything else I can help, be free let me know.
Looking forward to your arrival.