增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, there are more and more people who attach great importance relationships in career success. Being polite is the first and most important step to developing good relationships among friends. Polite words can be easily said yet always have some unexpected and powerful result in your daily life.
Always saying “please” and “thank you” will make your friends feeling more comfortable and more willingly to offer help when necessary. We all know that one man’s success is based on what he deals with people. Always being grateful for other people’s kindness and show your gratitude through the words you say. The more support you win from other people, the more faster you will move towards your goal.
Remember, be polite to others cost nothing so it’s worth a million dollars.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was Sunday. I was doing housework while someone knocked at the door. It was milkman who sent a bottle of milk. But I didn’t order it. Feel confused, I noticed a note stuck to it. The note said “Dear neighbor, I’m sorry about the noise making by our decoration that will last for three day. The bottle of milk is given to you as a gift to show off our apology.” The next day, everyone in the neighborhood were talking about the milk and our coming neighbor. With the decoration finished, the family final moved into the neighborhood. People come to help. I was extremely touched by this scene which was full of consideration and appreciate.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Money is vital in everyday life. Is it the people earning lots of money which are successful? In some people’s eyes, being rich is equal to be successful. They say we live a materialistic world where everything including relationships is defined by money. To be successful, that is essential to acquire good education and it came from money. Success and money are close related to each other.
However, there are many people who have huge amounts of money, and in no case can they be said to be successful. Being successful means being satisfying with whatever things we have. Money cannot buy satisfaction and happiness, and a person without such feeling cannot be called a success.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good manners were very important in our daily life. Not only do it show that we have respect for others, but they can also assisted us in getting along well with others. Do you know how develop good manners? First, it’s necessary for us to obey basic rule when we are at school. Second, we should learn to understand others in case of we disagree with them. More importantly, it is an good idea to lend a hand to classmates which need help. In this way, we will live in harmony with others.
In summary, spent time developing good manners, we will be able to behave proper.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）， 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was Sunday. I was doing housework while someone knocked at the door. It was a milkman who sent a bottle of milk. But I didn’t order them. Feeling confused, I noticed a note stick to it. The note says “Dear neighbor, I’m sorry about a noise made by our decoration that will last for three days. The bottle of milk is given to you as a gift show our apology.”
The next day, everyone in the neighborhood were talking about the milk and our coming neighbor. With the decoration being finished, the family finally moved into the neighborhood. People came to help. I was deep touched by this scene which was full on consideration and appreciation.
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 每处错误及修改仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I received a handwritten letter from the friend last week. I got one or two when I was a child but I never expect to receive one again. In this rapid changing world, in most case we use social media to keep in touch. The letter reminded me that this form of communication still exist, and that there are reasons in it to exist. People today are connected more, and the pictures I post on our social media accounts that are widely viewed by people we don’t even know. However, letters represent a slow pace and allow us control what we tell our friends. In this way, our conversations don’t involve so many irrelevant things, but the slow pace makes the contact long-lasting.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last week, I went to a painting exhibition. Upon enter the gallery, I put on the earphones which would give me informations about all the paintings. Suddenly, I noticed that the elderly woman who didn't know how use the earphones stood anxiously in front of a painting. I rushed to her with hesitation and helped her put on the earphones. The woman thanks me for my kindness. I realized this was reaching out to others that could real bring a great moment of happiness, which was of benefit to me so much. That day when I appreciated lots of breathtaking paintings. What's more, I learned a valuable lesson from the grateful smile giving by the elderly woman.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改1。处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was sitting on a train to Shenzhen on the other day. During the journey the middle-aged man suddenly threw up, making those around him extreme upset. The lovely young lady (Miya) sitting near me stepped forward but started talking to him to make sure he was all right. They talked for about 10 minutes, during that time Miya showed such great cares towards that complete stranger. She calms him down and helped him come to the decision seek assistance. Admittedly, she impressed those of us sitting nearby with her good. Thank you and well done for win at being an awesome human being!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m glad to have received your letter, showing that you long with more information about China. In my opinion, you can choose to work in China after graduation.
For one reason, over the past 30 years, China had developed into a powerful country, that quantities of job opportunities are offered to the young. What’s more, how you are studying is bad needed in China nowadays. In facts, many big companies are hoping to employ people like you.
For another reason, China is a country with very different cultures and traditions from the West that a plenty of foreigners enjoy living and working here. I’m sure you’ll adapt the environment soon. Unless you come, I will do whatever I can to help you. So what are you waiting for?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are a lot researches showing that when we are kind to others, they become happier. In a sense, giving is much more better than receiving. If you spend time practice three acts of kindness each day, you will improve your level of happiness, especial if you practice such kindness often. An act of kindness can be as simple as holding the door open for someone, buy a classmate a favorite drink in the morning or giving moneys to charity. You can also call someone in need and offered a friendly ear. It is also an useful choice for you to cook a delicious meal for the family despite being tiring.
