增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I’m so sorry to hear that you had been suffering from sleeplessness for a long time. To help you recover soon, I’d like to advise you to turn on to traditional Chinese medicine.
As is known to us, traditional Chinese medicine is practical but effective when used to treat some diseases. Comparing with the high cost of western medicine, it has reasonable price, so you don’t need to be worried about your budget. Additional, unlike western medicine, traditional Chinese medicine has few side effects. If you agree, I’d like to recommend a doctor to you, which I’m sure will offer you an ideal treatment. Please don’t hesitate to ask me for help unless you think it’s necessary. I hope you would have a speedy recovery soon.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Among the things what have happened to me, there is one that I will never forget.
One Saturday, I invited Eric my house. Unfortunate, I was bitten by my dog. Then the wound started to bleed. After apply pressure to the area with a clean bandage, Eric cleaned my wound with soap and water under running water for at least 5 minute. Therefore, the wound didn’t stop bleeding after 10 minutes of direct pressure. At that urgent moment, he send me to the nearest hospital for further treatment. The doctor thought highly of my action.
I was so grateful to him. And from this unforgettable experience, I realized the important of first aid. So, to help myself out and save others, I have learned some knowledge about first aid after that.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改仅限一词；2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mr. Liu Weihai is making good progress. Although his hand is weak, but he can now feel hot and cold. The operation was doing in Zhongshan Hospital andlasted for four hours. During the operation, Mr Liu had a new hand attached.
Liu Weihai is attacked by a wild animal three months ago while leading a group of tourists in the mountains, but lost his left hand. The members of Liu’s group quick took him to a nearest hospital. He was later flown to a hospital in Guanzhou for an operation.
Mr Liu’s doctor has worked out a safe treatment plan for him. It will be hard for Liu weihai, but it is expected which in the next few months his body will accept the hand as his own without any disability. During this period, various methods will be applied to help the patient’s hand get strong, according the doctor.
“I’m very grateful to his doctor. I feel hopeful that I’ll fully recovery the use of my hand in the near future,” said Mr Liu.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A woman which has recently had plastic surgery on her face now regrets the decision. The surgery takes place more than a month ago, but Ella Edwards still suffers from daily pain. This is stopping him from returning to a normal life. She has been to several hospitals and all the doctor say that the pain is unlikely stop any time soon. She may need to take painkillers for a long time. In an addition, Miss Edwards says the surgery makes her look unnaturally and that she is unable to make certain facial expressions.
Miss Edwards is unhappy with the results of the surgery. “I wanted to become more beautiful, and it hasn’t turned out well at all. I really regret have the surgery,” she said. “I’m very anxious for it.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Animal bites are like dog and cat bites are most common nowadays. It will cause signs and symptoms such as pain, swelling and bleeding, that bring the victim a lot of suffering. First aid (急救) can make difference before emergency (紧急的) medical help arrives. It can be used for animal bites that cause scratches (挠) on the skin but did not cause a serious reaction. You should do with follows. Firstly, wash the bite area immediate with soap and warm water for 5 minutes. If the bite is deep, place the wound under gently run water for 10 minutes. Then dry the wound with a dean towel. Secondly, if the wound is swollen (肿的), put ice covering in a towel for several minute. Thirdly, get medical care.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Xiaohua,
It is four days since mother recieves the operation. She is feeling much more better. The doctors told me the operation was successful, but because her old age she had to stay in hospital for other two weeks. The doctors also say it was quite necessary for him to do so. We expect to get a full report in two and three days. Please tell the good news to the rest of the family as soon as possible. You needn’t come here. I’m able to look at mother by myself. You can send some flower to her. She will feel very happily.
Yours,
Xiaohua
