增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On-line voting becomes increasing popular. Many competitions get people involving in it. It is beneficial to some people, but it puts the others into a dilemma over if to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting should be welcomed, since it is just a way to participate public life. It is similar in ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek vote. In addition, the Internet make voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space.
Things will turn much good if we can work out some rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude of it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to share pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sort of photos in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, which is very convenient for us to communicate with. However, there exists some potential problems if we overshare. One serious problem is leaking privacy, that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortably, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, neither should we post our personal information, or should we blindly add strangers to a list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercise.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As we know, shared bikes have been made our lives much more convenient. However, we can often see some shared bikes placed messy everywhere. When I talked about this with my classmates last week, we all felt upset but decided to make the change. On Sunday morning, we gather outside the railway station. First, we began dealing shared bikes and tried to put them in order. People who passed by praised that we did. Seeing the bikes in rows again, they felt proud. Then, to encourage people to behave themselves, we put up a larger sign saying “Please Be Civilized While Using A Shared Bike”. Of course, we drew much attention from many passer-by while that also meant our actions would surely make a difference.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With the development of the Internet, it is easily for people to find information in just few minutes. The Internet is like a huge library that you can find whatever you want without walk around. It make our life convenient and colorful. And recently many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. There have been reports in China about people trying it to steal personal information for bad purposes. Also, some information does harm for society. For example, you can even find so information as how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future if not dealing with.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, we can see phubbers watching their mobile phones everywhere. They can’t stop sending messages, surfing the Internet, listening music and even taking photos by using the mobile phone.
Actually, phubbing disturbs not only our study and our life. On the one hand, phubbers waste plenty of time play cell phone games and sending messages, particularly in the class. On the other, using the mobile phone for a long time can lead to healthy problems.
As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we put down the mobile phone and raise our heads up. Do cherish that is around us and appreciate the sceneries ahead of us. Only when we use the mobile phone reasonable, can you realize the happiness of life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Should we help strangers? Different people have different opinion. Some think we should help strangers as much as possibly. Helping others probably mean helping ourselves. We may have a day what we need others’ help. If everyone is unwilling help us just because we are strangers to them, that is hard to imagine what our world will be like. However, some are afraid that helping others may be bring us trouble. We may even have to pay the cost for our kind. As far as I am concerning, we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help, but we should also avoid get into trouble. I hope our world will be full of love.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the Internet becoming more and more popular, some students can’t help play online games or chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting the time, but also a seriously problem which does harm to their health. Which teachers should do first is to find out what makes them addicting to computer games. Lack of love from his parents? Poor test scores? Parents can have a heart-to-heart talk with them. Secondly, teacher should help them build up their confidence but make them develop an interest in studies. Thirdly, find something else for them to do instead playing computer games.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last month, there was news about two pandas that sent to Holland and would live there for ten years. People there held the big celebration, and feel so happy to see these two lovely creatures. Indeed, the whole world is crazy about the panda, as it has a lovely image and no one can resist their charm. If a country wants to rent a panda, the government needs to make efforts to creating the environment where suits the panda. It will be a lucky thing for them to have pandas. Pandas are usually looked on for the loveliest diplomatic officers. Everybody loves them so deep no matter that what happens. This love can help us overcome many problems between different culture.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改： 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Good morning! I’m honored to be here but say something about how to reduce food waste. As we all know, food waste is becoming increasing serious in our country. Much food is throwing away after each meal. Therefore, it’s time for we to do something about them.To reduce food waste, we must order just as many food as we can eat. Besides, it was also a good habit to take the leftovers to home when we eat out. Finally, we should take every chances to educate people not to waste food. I believe that every small act can make great difference.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school has had a survey on reading. It shows that 55 percent of the students spend our time reading textbooks after school. Only 10 percent enjoy read literature. Why? They don’t have enough time because of they have too many homework to do. Some students complain that literary works are such thick that they hardly have enough patience to finish them. Others who only concentrate on what to get high scores simply admit that reading literature won’t help them with their exams. What’s more, some students showed no interest in literature. As a matter of fact, books play important role in our life. Not only can reading make us feel relaxing, but also it help us learn the customs and cultures in the past and at present at home and abroad.
