增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I have noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students are even talking about love affairs online. On my opinion, the cyber cafe should be a place which we can find much useful informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of them. Otherwise, it will do us great harm. So the local government should take measures to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
3．改错格式错误不计分
China is facing seriously traffic problems. Too much cars travel on the roads. This heavy traffic causes delays and a plenty of air pollution. Although many cities in China have traffic problems, some of the worse are in Beijing. One of the reason why there is so much traffic is what only a small number of people use public transportation.
I think one way solve the traffic problems was to make people use the public transportation system. For example, they can take buses instead of drive cars. Meanwhile, the government should make them more reliable and convenient to travel by bus.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays most students are addicted to sharing with pictures in WeChat circle. They even shared all sorts of photos in their daily life. WeChat does make it more conveniently for us to understand and communicate. Therefore, there exists some potential trouble if we overshare. One serious problem is letting out our privacy (隐私), that may cause a lot of trouble. Besides, others may feel uncomfortable, thought we are showing off. In my opinion, we'd better not post their personal information, or blindly adding strangers to a list of friends. It's much wiser to set aside some time accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books or taking exercises.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Online games have become popular among students in recent year. As we can easily see, the number of students have enjoyed pleasure from these games. But some students lacks self-discipline in their daily life are too addicted to these games that their health is affected. This phenomenon has been caused some parents to worry.
From my point of view, online games can make you entertaining if you play them in a reasonably way. When they affect your study too much, it is better for you to give it up at once. Enough self-control over them is that makes you obtain real pleasure and it can help you benefit them.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Peter,
I am more than delight to hear from you. You have asked me about the “save food and combat waste” activity, which is held all over our nation. Let me introduce it to you in detail.
As we all known, eating is an important part in our daily life. However, many people waste food with even realizing it. What’s more, there is a growing population in my country while our resource are limited, which makes it urgent to save food. Facing with such a serious situation, it is high time that we took action now and start small. To begin with, When we have dinner out in a restaurant, remember to order appropriate, and clean the plate,because small actions make big difference. In addition, we held various activities to remind citizens for the importance of the food.
Above all is some information about the activity “save food and combat waste.”
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It can be known, more and more people have mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number rose up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch with each other whenever or wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people owing mobile phones are increasing steadily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用\划掉。
修改：在错词的下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, I see a lot food thrown away by student in our school cafeteria into the dustbins. Some students often bought too much to eat. Others throw away the food just because it doesn’t taste well. In my opinion, the waste of food is unacceptable. After all, many people in the world are suffering from hungry. As a matter of the fact, the waste can be avoided if we raise your awareness of save. Whenever eating, buy no more than what you can eat, but think about what you really like before buying. Besides, remember to pack up the food what you fail to finish.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面与出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With the growing popularity of the Internet, more and more children are addicted to play online games day and night. It does harm not only to our health, especially to their eyes, but also to their studies.
Comparing with online games, many traditional games, like hide-and-seek, benefits kids mentally and physically. They were ever popular to several generations, which not only learned something valuable but also had fun playing the games. Therefore, the games are dying away now.
Personal, I think teachers and parents should take measures to limit their children's Internet time. Let children to know the harm of online games and the benefits of traditional games. Help children judge the healthy and unhealthy games. What's more, we should often organize events for children in which traditional games played.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, more and more people choose to travel in holidays. There is several reasons for this phenomenon. For one thing, with the develop of economy, more people are able to traveling. For another, people are interesting in different cultures but long to experience different kinds of life. However, some tourists tend to behave bad when traveling. They leave rubbish everywhere, spit in public and jumped the queue. All the bad behavior leaves bad impression. Personally, I suggest each of us should be civilized when traveling. Besides, the government had better to take some measures to prevent the bad behavior in places of interests.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am a senior high school student. In my opinion, the classroom is place for students to gain knowledges. So quietness is badly need for us to learn in the classroom. So recently some students have brought their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear of the ring of mobile phones. Some of them even wasted precious time in class type short messages on the mobile phones. To keep the classroom quietly and make us focus more on their studies, I suggest that mobile phones shouldn’t be used in the classroom. At least, they shouldn’t be used where we are having a class.
