增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Most of us have realized what that our parents are our first teachers. As we grow both physically or mentally, our parents teach us more about society. There have a time when we young people believe that their parents should stop offering their advice and stop acting as teachers. We think that we know much about the world than our parents. Perhaps we believe their opinions and suggest are out of date. We are now standing at top of a great pyramid, wait to take turns to lead the people in this century. Besides, we should remember our parents represent the foundation of that great pyramid. With a solid foundation, nothing can be built.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It can be known, more and more people have mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number rose up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch with each other whenever or wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people owing mobile phones are increasing steadily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays more and more students attend different kind of training classes or hire tutors to improve their grades at weekends.
Some of the students think that necessary to do so. Firstly, it's more effective to study under a teacher's help than by themselves. Secondly, students can make up for that they miss or fail to understand in class on weekdays. Besides, they can have more chances and time communicate with teachers.
Therefore, others don't think so. For one thing, the students can easily develop the habit of dependence, causing some students not to listen attentive in their regular classes. For another, students needed time for rest and recreation at weekends. What's worse, attend training classes means costing them much money.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Though social media is an important tool, their negative influences of teenagers can’t be neglected. First, when teenagers use social media, they will have difficulty concentrate on their homework. On the other hand, too much time spend using social media may decrease their really life communication. The most dangerous thing is what constant exposure to the fantasy world lead to a lack of self-confidence. Therefore, it tends to harming their dignities. For teenagers, the proper use of social media is must. They should remember it that study is a top priority and thus spend more time on social media.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is the common phenomenon that people, included the elderly people and some young people, will gather in the dancing square late in the evening. This is linking to the fact that people’s physical and mental life develop rapid. When it comes to square dance, this is universally acknowledged that it made a great difference to people’s life. For example, not only dancing promote people’s relationship, but also it makes contributions to people’s health. However, dancing also has some disadvantage of its own. When being dancing, the dancing women play loud music unconsciously, that gives rise to dissatisfaction.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is known that some students cheat in exams. There are three reason for it. First of all, there are so many exams. Beside, the exams given are difficulty in some way. Secondly, some students have to cheat in exams because of they are too lazy. The last reason is to please our parents and teachers. For some students, low marks brought them great pressure and make them depressing.
In my opinion, cheating in exams are wrong. We should take positive attitude to our studies, and try to get a mark what is true as well as good.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Many young boys and girls had the habit of smoking, though they are middle school student. As we all know, smoking do harm to human beings. More and more people have realized how seriously this problem is. And they are never bored with it. Some people think smoking is a kind of fashion, and other think smoking can refresh themselves. In the fact, smoking causes many illnesses. The most serious illness causing by smoking is lung cancer. Meanwhile, smoking is a waste money. What’s more, careless smokers may cause danger fires.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is often the case, when having meals, waiting buses or at tending lectures, you can always find people addicted to their cellphones, completely ignoring others.
This is really a common phenomenon in our daily life. The reason is why smart phones nowadays can be used to playing mobile games and keep in touch with friends. However, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of healthy. Moreover, people involving in phones fail to communicate well with these around them.
As far as I am concerned , people should be wisely make use of their phones to help with their work and study. Meanwhile, they should care much about their family and friends than mobile phones.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每句不超过两个错误；
2、 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
3、 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In my view, the Internet is helpful. As is known to all, the Internet is playing a important
part in your daily life. On the Internet, we can read news home and abroad and got as much information as we can. We can also attend to the net school and read many books. We can even do shopping online. Besides, our ability to operating the computer can be improved great.
So we shouldn't be addicted to the Internet, or we'll get our life and study destroying. In addition, we should keep off the harmful website. Anyhow, this doesn't keep the Internet becoming our friend.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently campus safe has become a public concern since a series of violent attacks happened, which caused serious damage. It make us aware of the fact that safety should always come first in our daily life.
In this case, we should take effective measure what can solve this problem. Firstly, our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules, and pay attention to food safety, because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless. Secondly, you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts. Thirdly, our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying.
As far as I am concerned, improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound.
