增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Most of us have realized what that our parents are our first teachers. As we grow both physically or mentally, our parents teach us more about society. There have a time when we young people believe that their parents should stop offering their advice and stop acting as teachers. We think that we know much about the world than our parents. Perhaps we believe their opinions and suggest are out of date. We are now standing at top of a great pyramid, wait to take turns to lead the people in this century. Besides, we should remember our parents represent the foundation of that great pyramid. With a solid foundation, nothing can be built.
Students need enough sports and activities to keep fit and relax, and in some schools students are not giving enough time to do outdoor activities. Teachers ask students to spend most of their time at studies. But if students feel tired, they can’t pay attention to that they’re studying. They will be in a bad health. It’s also not good for his studies. In my opinions, it’s important give students enough time to do outdoor activities. Then they will enjoy better health and work hard. So please pay more attention to student health and growth.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m worried that you have been addicted sharing pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sorts of photo in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes it the better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, that is very convenient for us to communicate. However, there exist some potential risks if we overshare. One severe problem is give away privacy, which may cause economic losses. Besides, oversharing can makes others uncomfortable, for they think you are showing off. Thus, never should we post our personal informations, or should we blind add strangers to the list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such like reading books or taking exercise.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It can be known, more and more people have mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number rose up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch with each other whenever or wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people owing mobile phones are increasing steadily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The idea of sustainable development has accepted by the world. How to keep sustainable development is of a big problem facing our planet. The present situation is worried. First, natural resources is becoming fewer than before. Second, as some people are not aware of the important of the environmental protection, the problems with it remain extreme serious to some degree. To their great joy, many country have taken action. On one hand, they have made relevant laws and regulations but put large amounts of money to the environmental protection. On an other hand popularized education as well as international cooperation is being carried out. As for me, I should take the responsibility to devote me to sustainable development.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays more and more students attend different kind of training classes or hire tutors to improve their grades at weekends.
Some of the students think that necessary to do so. Firstly, it's more effective to study under a teacher's help than by themselves. Secondly, students can make up for that they miss or fail to understand in class on weekdays. Besides, they can have more chances and time communicate with teachers.
Therefore, others don't think so. For one thing, the students can easily develop the habit of dependence, causing some students not to listen attentive in their regular classes. For another, students needed time for rest and recreation at weekends. What's worse, attend training classes means costing them much money.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Though social media is an important tool, their negative influences of teenagers can’t be neglected. First, when teenagers use social media, they will have difficulty concentrate on their homework. On the other hand, too much time spend using social media may decrease their really life communication. The most dangerous thing is what constant exposure to the fantasy world lead to a lack of self-confidence. Therefore, it tends to harming their dignities. For teenagers, the proper use of social media is must. They should remember it that study is a top priority and thus spend more time on social media.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is the common phenomenon that people, included the elderly people and some young people, will gather in the dancing square late in the evening. This is linking to the fact that people’s physical and mental life develop rapid. When it comes to square dance, this is universally acknowledged that it made a great difference to people’s life. For example, not only dancing promote people’s relationship, but also it makes contributions to people’s health. However, dancing also has some disadvantage of its own. When being dancing, the dancing women play loud music unconsciously, that gives rise to dissatisfaction.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The US has fell to the 28th place in the latest report measuring social progress worldwide. The report looks 50 well-being factors, such as access to health care, safe and the environment. It is common acknowledged that the nation ranks the first for its advanced education and quality universities. Therefore, its access to quality basic education only reached No. 91. And although America leads in medical technology, citizens access to quality health care is ranked No. 97. “The data paints an alarmed picture of the state of our nation—we are no longer which we used to be.” said Michael Porter, a Harvard professor.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is known that some students cheat in exams. There are three reason for it. First of all, there are so many exams. Beside, the exams given are difficulty in some way. Secondly, some students have to cheat in exams because of they are too lazy. The last reason is to please our parents and teachers. For some students, low marks brought them great pressure and make them depressing.
In my opinion, cheating in exams are wrong. We should take positive attitude to our studies, and try to get a mark what is true as well as good.
