增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限- -词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During my last summer holiday, I go to the countryside to enjoy myself. I saw mother bird stay in her nest in a big tree, watching some of her baby flying away. I thought she must be very proud of her children, that were able to find her own food now. But she might also feel a sense of loss since they wouldn't need of her day-to-day care any long. For my parents,things are much easier. We have set up our family blog to posting our photos and journals.Once I leave for college, we can convenient share our experiences but support each other.Their“nest" will never be empty.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）， 并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不计分．
There are many people think that wealth is better than health．I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce．He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted． Therefore， in the last twenty years of his life， his health began to get worse and he led a miserably life．Although the best doctors called for him， he could still find no relief．I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world．If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health，you will not be able to do what you want to do．So I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself to trying to make money．Instead，take care of your body and be happy with which you do． Health is more important．
I would like to suggest that all television broadcasting in the United States is forbidden for 60 to 90 minutes each evening by the law. Families might use the time for a real family hour. Without TV, they might sit around together to talk one another, which might make us get to know each other better. If such a talk was unnecessary, families might take a ride to watch the sunset and they might take a walk together. Therefore, children and adults might read. There is much entertainment in a good book than in a TV programme. In a word, the idea seems beneficially to us. Why not having a try?
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
You must have heard about Dolly and have been amazed by the first cloned animal. But here came a problem; should we clone humans? When being asked about this question, a large number of people which are interested in the topic hold the view that it’s beneficial to clone humans. Therefore, some other people, me including, are against this idea. Cloning humans can bring negative effects and wrong informations. In the first place, they may not be treated equal as normal people, which I believe will make him suffer a lot. In second place, human cloning may lead in some social disorder, and it is quite dangerous.
As we all know, class is place where students ought to work hard to realize their dreams. However, there are some students not using class properly, which makes things to go from bad to worse. For example, some students play mobile phones and sleep in class, wasting quantities of precious time. What’s worse, some students enjoy chat with others. Not only does it affect our own study, but also it will do harm for others.
As far as I am concern, the main reason is that they don’t realize the important of study. To solve this problem, they have to understand making full use of class was the best way to improve the efficiency of study. After all, time and tide waits for no man.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It’s easy for you to start smoking. But if you become addicted to it, you may find it difficult give it up. First of all, you may become physically addicted to nicotine, that is in cigarettes. Secondly, you may develop into the habit of smoking and finally become mental addicted to it. Smoking may have all kind of harmful effects on the fitness of smokers and non-smokers around them. Not only does it affect your physical fitness, but also do damage to your heart and lungs, cause a variety of diseases. If you are a smoker, the bad smell may drive people around you away. However, it is important that you should quit smoking and live a health life. You can make the list of all the benefits you may get.
Western holidays such as Christmas, Valentine’s Day, are getting more and more popular in China. Some Chinese people even get crazy at them. But at the same time, people seem to have more enthusiasm for our traditional festivals such as the Spring Festival and the Moon Festival. However, most people celebrate western holidays without know the meaning behind them. They just go shopping, held parties and have fun.
In my opinion, the celebration of western holidays is good way of learning about the western cultures, which help to promote understanding and communication between Chinese cultures and other cultures. However, the celebration can make our life more interesting as well as. However, we should make greatly efforts to preserve and enrich their own traditional culture.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉；
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear friends.
Good morning! Today l want to talk on you about public morals. Nowadays we can still see some behavior against public morals. Which is often the case, people tend to talk loudly in public places, annoyed others around. Littering rubbish can be seeing everywhere. In an addition, it's common the young sit on the bus while the elderly stand.
Measures must be taken to change this situation. First of all, as student, we should manage our own behavior and help people around us form well habits. Meanwhile, it was necessary for the government and public organizations to encourage people to behave proper.
That's all. Thanks for your attention!
Nowadays many people cross streets without watch out for traffic lights. So traffic accidents often happen to those who runs the red light. Why don’t they obey traffic laws? Because they haven’t realized an importance of traffic safety. Actually, not obeying traffic lights can be danger. Besides, some people are in so a hurry that they don’t want to wait for the lights to change. What shall we do to solve the problem? First of all, all of us should develop into the habit of obeying traffic laws. Secondly, who breaks traffic laws should be punished. Lastly, we should be taught how to cross streets safe. If so, there will be fewer traffic accident, and it will be easy for us get around.
Many people have strong view about the use of school uniforms. There are arguments both for or against it. On the one hand, uniforms stop other students judge them on how they look, as everybody will look more or less same. Besides, it saves parents’ money as they don’t have to buy for new school uniforms every year and their children only need clothes on weekends and holidays. On the other hand, though some parents said that wearing uniforms is a way of saving money, other say uniforms are not cheap. Children are constant growing up and need big sizes. In my opinion, wearing uniforms is a good thing because no one stand out and it looks smarter.
