增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On my way to home yesterday afternoon, I happened to witness a traffic accident. When an old woman was crossed the road, she was knocked down by a boy riding bike. The boy was such frightened that he stood still at the scene but didn’t know what to do. I quickly went up and saw the old woman lie on the ground, making crying because of pain. I stopped a taxi and told the driver that had happened. The driver drove them to the nearest hospital at once. To our relieve, we were told that the old woman wasn’t injured seriously after she was examined carefully. The boy was deep grateful for our help.
Kobe Bryant was killed in a helicopter crash Sunday in California, along with his 13-year-old daughter Gianna and seven other people. It is known that the helicopter
Bryant was
Thousands of people gathered to remember the star outside the Staples Center in Los Angeles,
1. 表明身份;
2. 简述事情经过;
3. 道歉并表示愿意赔偿;
4. 联系方式(Tel:5893671 E-mail:lihua@windmillco.org)。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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On August 14, 1996, a tiny drop
You might say that a toxicologist studies substances that lead to
On Sunday, a bus in Chongqing fell into the Yangtze River,
A woman passenger failed
I wonder why none of the passengers took action to stop the fight.