增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning on my way home I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old lady in rag was counting her money when a young man ran into her by accident, lead to the money flying off. Everyone at nearby quickly picked up the money and gave them back to her. The old lady counted money again and find not a single bill was missing. The old lady was very content with that the strangers had done for her so she bowed to them but said thank you again and again. It was clear that the old lady was much touched by the people’s kind.
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Anger is a strong feeling of displeasure. Anger has bad influence on personal relationships. I remember clearly which happened between my best friend Jack and me. One day I entered the classroom and heard my classmates talking about my secret, which I have shared with Jack! What I could think of was that Jack broke her word and let out of my secret! I shouted at him angrily, and refused to listen to his explanation. Soon I learned another classmates heard our conversation by chance and told it to others. It was then when I realized what bad effects anger had, but I decided to control it. Whenever I feel angrily, l try to calm down and think twice before take action.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When visiting a village in Africa, a scientist suggested game to the local children. He put a basket of sweets under a tree 100 meter away. Then he said whoever reached the basket first would win the sweets. But when he said “Go”, instead of raced for it, the children ran to the basket hand on hand. Finally, they divided the sweets out equal. When asked why they did so, they say “Ubuntu”. It means nobody should share happiness with others. He was realized that it was the attitude of Ubuntu which helped bring people together. Generally, this word reminds we of the importance of community and caring for each other.
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)， 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave up studying in Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching the computer softw are. Just as an old saying go, “Interest is the best teacher.” I quite agree with this idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got extreme interested in foreign cultures or customs. To meet me curiosity, I read in English stories every day. It seemed to be the best “meal” of a day. As a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the key of success.
如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词；把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词；在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词 该行错一个词；在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Not only our parents give us life, but they also give us endless love and support, always sharing our happiness with sorrow. I'm very grateful for my parents. They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me. I still remembered when I was seriously ill, they were so worried and almost kept company the whole night. Now I'm in Senior 3. Lucky for me, my parents can understand my stressed condition and often communicate with me with encouraging words. However,they give me enough personal space, that I appreciate so much. What I should do now is to study hard. When I grow up, I'll try my best to make my parents to live a happy life.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Through my process of grow up, senior high school life is most interesting.
The teachers give excellent lessons on a special way. All of them have rich knowledge. They not only explain the contents of textbooks and also provide extra information from many other aspect. Every word they say it in class makes me feel exiting. I have a strong desire to learn as much as I can. There is many kinds of after-school activities that are organized by us. We often shared a lot of things together.
I am absolute fond of my senior school life.
【推荐3】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修以你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How many time do you spend with your parents? Your parents are your dearer people in the world when you are young. And they always care for you deep. But even though many children still loves their mum and dad, families may become less close as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families to got together. Have you ever thought of how you can show your parents that you love them? Find a chances and do something for them or have sincere talk with them. What you can do this, your parents will be very happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A boy went to a shop and bought a pencil or other things. When he was going to pay for the bill, he took out his wallet and found he had not enough money pay. He felt awkward. At that moment, an old man whom was in charge of the shop smiled and said to the boy that he could give a rest of the money next time. The boy was so shocking, as the old man trusted him so much. When the boy went home, he remembered them all the time. So the next morning, when he passes the shop, he gave the money without hesitations. Integrity (诚信) is priceless and decide who we are.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am a senior school student and occupied with my study every day. On this reason, I have a tightly schedule. Thinking I am not easy, so my parents never ask me help with the housework. Instead, it is them who do the housework every day however tired they are. One day, I wanted to give them the surprise because it was their twenty wedding anniversary. When the class was over, I rushed out and hurried back. On arrived home, I began to sweep the floor and wipe the table. When my parents get home, everything looked tidy and clean. Surprised but happy, they gave me a big hug with tear in their eyes.
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last summer, I stayed with a British host family. One day, I was real surprised when Jeremy, the son of the family, tells me that we would have toad-in-the-hole for dinner. I wasn’t sure that we were going to eat a real toad in a hole. If so, what terrible! I joined in them at dinner time nervously. To my surprised, a dish of sausages cooking in Yorkshire pudding was served on the table, and it tasted delicious. It turned out that toad-in-the-hole was a typical dish for a British dinner, and it was no toad! What an amazing experience! It was interesting try such yummy foods with a strange name.
