增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, a great number of people, especial young people, enjoy order meals online. It’s not surprised. First, as the pace of modern life is becoming faster and faster, people have less time to cook even one meal for them. Second, the development of technology brought us smart phones and new apps, what may lead to the increase in online service. Therefore, we should pay more attention to food. As it is known to all, our health is closely related to what we eat. Although the service provides us with convenience, we must take the food safety onto consideration. Home-made food is cleaner and healthier, so I prefer cook food at home rather than order meals online.
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增加在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mom is a middle-aged woman, who really Fays great attentions to health. She often asks me to eat food which is rich on protein, vitamin, fiber and other nutrients, but I just eat that I like. One day,I felt too dizzy that I was sent to the hospital to checked. The doctor told me I was nothing seriously and advised me to take more exercise as well as having a balanced diet in the future. Now I am concerning about my health.Also I make an exercise plan. I ate healthy food my mom cooks it for me every day. I don’t feel dizzy anymore.
Dear Jenny,
How nice to hear you! In your letter you asked me what to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice.
As we know, our teenagers grow very fast, so we need a plenty of nutritious foods, such as fish, beans, fresh fruit and vegetables. You should not eat too much meal or too many sweets. However, you should take physical exercises regularly instead of studying all the time. For example, you can play basketball or swim after school. What’s more, have enough sleep is greatly importance. Therefore, I strongly advised you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day but not to stay up too late. Only in this way can you keep fit.
I’m looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we know，more and more ladies are begun to lose weight in different ways now. Recently，our class have had a heated discussion about it.
About 60% of students are into it. They think one can stay slim and look beautiful by losing weight. If one does this in a proper way，and it can stop one from getting fat and can keep one health. Besides，taking everyday exercise and go on a diet can help to train a person's perseverance.However，the other have different ideas. They hold view that it is a waste of time，energy and money. Some often try to lose weight by taking weight loss pills. As a result, their health gets damaged bad. What's worse，whoever takes weight loss seriously often lack confidence.
In my opinion， if one is too fat and often falls ill，he or she should try to lost weight with the help of a doctor.
