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题型:改错-短文改错 难度:0.85 引用次数:114 题号:18367354
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10 处错误,每句话中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(∖)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Traditional Chinese Medicine (TCM) has been passed down for thousand of years. With an extensive and profound (意义深远的) culture, TCM is the treasure of Chinese civilization. It is not only widely used in Asia but also has become increasing popular in Europe and the United States. Frank Griffo is a acupuncturist (针灸师) in California whom completed his master’s degree in TCM in 2005 at the American College of Traditional Chinese Medicine in San Francisco. She then spent seven years studied advanced acupuncture techniques and has been practicing for about 18 years. “There are more than 60,000 acupuncturists in the United States right now. Chinese medicine has been grown dramatically in the last 15 years. It is taking on a large role in our medical system here than before, as a safe method of treatment for many problems that Western medicine has difficulty providing good outcomes”, he said in a video interview with China Daily," Acupuncture has been widely accepted in non-Chinese population but is popular in California. ”

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