增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)画掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are lots of experience in our life.The most unforgettable one for me is the speech competition holding last year.I’m interested in English.When my English teacher told me that I had chosen to take part in the speech competition, I devoted me to the preparation.I was determined to win the first prize.I was such nervous when I stood on the stage that I forgot everything.Not until I caught a sight of my teacher did I calm down.Finally，I do a good job.
When I heard I got the first prize，my heart was filled in joy and tears rolled down.Through this speech competition，I understand that it is confidence which makes people successfully.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Recently, we have had a instructive discussion on how to make English learning relaxing and interesting. It’s all too natural that we had come up with a lot of advices concerning the topic. Firstly, we can have more interactive activities that makes English learning great fun in class and it is generally considered not a little beneficially to us all. Secondly, we need to find more chances to communicating with people in English, whether they are English teachers and classmates, because using English is the best way to learn. As it is known to all, practice makes perfect.
In my eyes, there are many other ways like listening English songs, watching English movies, joining English clubs or making pen friends on the Internet. That we need most is more time and more space.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ʌ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I still remember the first day I come to this new school. Everything was new to me,that made me realize I was no longer a small child. I had to depend on me.Luckily,I made several good friend.Their interests were similar with mine. I had great English teacher,Maggie. She let me know the important of English. So I decided to learn English hardly. Although it was very difficult at first,but with the help of my teacher,I made rapidly progress.Just as the old saying goes,"Where there is a will,there is a way."
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Last weekend, we watched an excited basketball match in our school. It is between Grade 1 and Grade 2 students. During the match, the players from all teams played very hard. Grade 2 was stronger. However, to our surprised, Grade 1 won at last. The player jumped and hugged celebrate their success. Just then, the players from the other team that came near and said “Congratulations!” to them. They worn smiles on their faces and you couldn’t tell from their expressions that they lost the match. We were touching by the scene and felt what important a role sport plays in daily life.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known to all, build good relationships with others is critical in our society. When it comes about personal relationships, I’d natural think of my relationship with my mother. She often told me that I can be anyone I want, as long as I’m confident of myself. She sees my talent and pushes me to do the best I possibly can. I respect for my mother so much for she treats me as an equal instead of child. She gives me the free to make mistakes and to learn from it. Unlike friendships that can fade and break, I know I’ll always be connected to my mother what I face.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Since an early age, I have been told to be kind to others. One day I am in line at our local post office. Behind me stood a man, which coat was dirty. It was clearly that he hadn’t bathed or changed his clothes for a long time. Hardly had he come in while the others stood back several foot away from him. In the fact, I didn’t notice her at first. After I had my business finishing, I turned back to see what had been taken place. Turning to leave, I said to him, “Wish you a nice day!” The man nodded with big smile on his face.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧). 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear teachers and fellow students,
I’d like to take this opportunity to express my sincere appreciation my parents, teachers and classmates. Eighteen years has seen me grow into a adult. I can't forget the times when my parents took care of me patient and lovingly but helped me overcome difficulties one by one. When I enter school, it was lucky for me to meet many excellent and devoted teacher. It is your guidance and encouragement that makes me what I am today. Besides, classmates also play an important role in my life. With your company, I can't imagine what your school life would have been like. Again, I am grateful to all of you for that what you have done for me.
Thank you very much for listening.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school held the fifth annual sports meeting last week. As sports lover, I signed up with long-distance running. That was the first time I have taken part in long-distance running, so I didn’t have experiences. With encouragement from my teacher and classmates, and I gathered strength and final stood on the starting line.
When the starting gun sounded, I set out with other runners. Although I fell behind, I didn’t lost heart. Instead, I kept on running until I arrived at the finishing line.
Take part in the sports meeting provided myself with a great opportunity. Now I am more confidence about myself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday was the day where No.2 Senior High School organized a friendly football match between the students and the teachers with the intend of enriching their school life.
Bathed in the sunshine, the students from Grade Three competed over their teachers on the football field, with some other students watch the match cheerfully.Both teams were playing hard in highly spirits. The match met their expectation because he was going on wonderfully. Finally, either of the teams gets two goals.
Tiring the competition might be,it meant the lot to the students and the teachers. The thrilling game was sure to help relieve the students’ intense pressure were caused by their heavy study tasks.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
（2015•温州市高三第二次适应性测试）
My favorite sport is playing basketball. In the middle school, I joined in the basketball team. All the teammate practised hard after school. Once our team had match against another school’s. At the very beginning, we were so nervous which we couldn’t cooperate very good, because this was the first time for us to compete with the school honor. In the half match they fell behind. Our team leader calls us together and said that we must get uniting in order to beat them. Then we tried our best and won the game at last. Play basketball makes me realize the importance of union and teamwork.
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