增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线(—),并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The modern Olympic Games are biggest sports meeting in the world, that include 2 sets of Games, the Winter and the Summer Olympics. All are held every 4 years. All countries can took part. Only athletes who have reached the agreed standard for their events will be admit as competitors. Women are not only allowed to join in but plays a very important role in many events. The special village is built for the competitors to living in. A great number of building such as stadiums, swimming pools and gymnasiums are built for competitions. It’s a great responsible and honor to host the Olympics. Although the olive wreath has been replaced by medals, but the motto of the Olympics is still Swifter, Higher, and Stronger.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday our school organized mountain climbing activity, whose purpose was to inspire us students to taking more outdoor exercise. Hundreds of students took part in it. Having gathered at the Xiangshan Park at 8:00, they set out for the top in high spirits. Along the way we enjoy the beautiful scenery, chatting with each other happy. If some people fell behind, others would come and lent them a hand, such as carrying their bags or making them feel encouraging. After about two and a half hour, we all reached the top, where we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity benefited to us a lot. Not only did we get some exercise, and also we promoted the friendship.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, many a student don’t have enough time to do sports, thus causing their physical and mental health to suffer a lot of. Therefore, our school is conduct Happiness Fitness activities to improve our health.
As scheduling, the activities are held from 5:00 to 6:00 every afternoon. We are free do whatever we like, such as running and playing table tennis. The playground is full of laughters and life, and there are expressions of satisfy and joy on our faces.
These activities are very meaningfully because they really make them happy and fit. Besides, we have the much better understanding of sports,friendship as well as team spirit.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, I went a rock climbing in a climbing gym. It had several walls covered with hand and toe holds of differently colors. I tied a rope to myself and my coach held one ending of the rope, guaranteeing his safety. There were many route on the climbing wall. I chose an easy one but reached the top quickly. And then I tried a harder one, what cost me more time and effort. Though my legs kept shaken after the climb, I was very content. I am eager to go here next time and I hope I will be qualified to take part outdoor climbing soon.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations in your team’s winning the first prize in the fierce basketball compete. As your friend, I just want you to know what delighted I am at your success.
Which you told me last time, there were several outstanding basketball teams is competing in the basketball matches. It was really hard to win the prize. However, you made them in the end. You and your team members must have made great efforts practise playing basketball. Your passion for basketball sometimes is beyond my wildly imagination. You deserve to win this prize!
At last, I wished to have a talk with you but we can exchange our views about basketball.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On the afternoon of last Friday, the English speech competition, organized by our English club, was held in our meeting hall. It begun at 3:00 p.m. and Mr. Lee, our leading English teacher, gave an inspired opening speech. Then two students started to host the competition with both English and Chinese. Fifteen students were attended the competition and each gave an excellent English speech. If the competition finished, the competitors were ranked and prizes were presented to the first sixth speakers. The competition has received positively comments from students and teachers. They both believed that it could encourage more students show interest in English learning.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With summer vacation around the corner, some students just can’t contain our excitement, because it is the best season to go swimming. Although swimming is a good kind of exercise that help us keep healthy, but it can also be very dangerous sometimes. Here is some advices for you. Firstly, you are not allowed swim alone in the river. It would be better to go with your parents. Next, you should do some warm-up exercises after getting into the water, that will reduce the risk of getting into trouble. Lastly, you’d better not swim for too long, or you will feel too tiring. Kept this in mind, you will have a safely holiday.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, walking is a good way of exercising and is benefit to our health. It can not only reduce the risk of many kinds of diseases and also build up the bones. It’s safe than many other ways of exercising, especially for the old and it’s easy to do without considering rule. Besides, walking can also help we lose weight. What should we pay attention during the walk? First, we should wear which are comfortable in order that we can relax. Second, we should walk fast enough to let us for breathe with difficulty but still be able to talk. Third, it’s quite important to walk with our arms move freely. Most important, we should do it every day.
增加:在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I love playing sports. After class, I played various sports with my friends, such as basketball, volleyball and badminton. In my view, playing sports is physical, mental and social adventure. The physical benefits are probable the most obvious. Regardless of our fitness level, after we start playing sports, we’ll notice an increase on our overall fitness. Beside, playing sports also contribute to our mental health. A pat on the back or a high-five from a teammate can really boost their confidence and self-worth. Moreover, those participated in sports can learn how to work with others. There’s no shortage of reasons to find a sport to play with. Pick one and get moved!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My office was fill with fit, slim people. When my colleagues work out at the gym, I stayed in and read. Instead of reading adventure novel, I would go for science fiction. One day last month,my mum came into my room,advised me to play sports on Wi Fit (健身游戏名). Finally, I selected tennis-after all, my mum played it on my own Wi Fit. Twenty minuteslater, I was extreme tired. As I slowly regained my strength, I found that I wanted to play again, who surprised my mum! I’ve now had Wii Fit for three months, and I play at least five times a week. My friend Leo was so amazing that he almost fell the sofa when I told him I was playing games on Wii Fit. Now I’m more fitter and healthier.