增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everybody thinks of I have a real gift for painting. Therefore, I once did not like art lessons because I could not draw very good.
One day, I was playing with some paint as usually in Ms Luo’s art lesson. I mix the paint with water. As I took the brush away, I dropped some paint onto the paper. That immediately occurred to me was to blow it. The paint began to run, so I blew harder. The paint ran in all direction and made a very interested picture! “That’s very good picture, Sandy,” Ms Luo encouraged me to keep trying. Since then, he have been crazy about painting.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Life is full of various experiences, some of them are unforgettable. I still remember the hiking experiences with my classmates for 16 km a year before. That summer day, we set off early in the morning, think it would be great fun to walk for so long a distance. However, with the weather is getting hotter and hotter, I found their legs heavier and heavier. What’s worse, my feet began bleeding because long time pressing against the shoes. At one point, I even wanted to give up. But I manage to drag the rest of the way to the destination.
Though not pleasant, this journey was impressive or rewarding. I have learned life is a long journey like this. No matter what happened, we should never give up.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday afternoon we take part in a voluntary activity called “Clean Home”, which was organizing by our school. We got to the People’s Square in our town but then handed out leaflets to passers-by to remind them of the importance of protect the environment and cleaning their homes. The leaflets were used to calling on people to start with ourselves. Some students made out public speeches to tell people to take action immediate. All of us really learned lot from the voluntary activity and it offered us an opportunity to make some differences to the society.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号( Ʌ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划- -横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限- -词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last year, I went to Hainan Island with my friends and stay there for two days. Hainan Island, a beautiful tourist attraction, located on the south of China, is well know for its beautiful blue sea and pleasant beaches with golden sands. On the first day, they went to the seaside and hiked here. It was so exciting for me to walking on the sands, leaving me some unforgettable memory. On the second day, we had some local food but sweet fresh juice. We spent that night in a tent, which was made us happy. In a word, we had good holiday on Hainan Island.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father already worked in a local factory for years. You will not find anything unusual about him till you learn more.
My father has always been kind and help. He has donated blood much times since 1990. The blood he has donated is enough to save for over 70 lives. He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer. To my surprised, he has decided to donate my body for medical research after his death.
When I was a little girl, I could not understand how my father always seemed to be kind to others than to his own family. Now I realize that he is a cared person.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We have an radio club in our school, which started two years ago. I am lucky as I’m one of the host. Our club is much more than just music. Every morning we broadcast the weather, the recently news and some special messages. During exam time, we had a special program to tell students that what they should do for preparation. In the end of the school year, many students whom are graduating use our club to give messages to your teachers and close friends. When parents come to our school, we often play songs sang by the students and inform them of some important events.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并 在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
I love doing handwork. Three days ago, I visit my uncle’s small factory what produced Chinese traditional carpets. I found it hard and more dangerous than I had thought. Workers used knives, scissors and other tool. With my uncle permission, I gave it a try. When I did it, the knife was very much close to my hand, so I had to be careful. I did a same thing again and again. But it took me a lot patience. It’s easier said than done. I think my uncle is greatly and she is my good example.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last night after I had the supper, I went to do my homework. I finished all the work except the last one in half an hour, but I still couldn’t work itself out. An hour late, I wanted to giving up. But my father told me to keep on work. I made it the help of my father at last. I smiled, but so does my father. From the experience I know nothing in the world is impossible whether I make up my minds to do it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Housework is annoying and always takes my mother a great deal time, Well, I’m glad to lend her the hand. After meals, I often offer to wash the dish first. It makes my hands oily, and I don’t care at all. Then I help her clean the kitchen. Not only do she clean the wall but also sweep the floor in the kitchen. After cleaning, I’m often pleasing to ask my mother to check it up to see if it meets her demand. She always wears out a smile on the face, what makes me really happy. In my opinion, doing housework gave me mental relief from study and pushes me to be a responsibility person.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear David,
I'm writing to tell you about Americans' shopping. In the America, people choose different shopping places according to their economy conditions. Rich people often go to large shopping centers. So many people usually shop at discount stores, ordinary shops or supermarket because things at these stores are not expensive. The prices are more reasonable. Some people prefer to buying second-hand furniture or other household items, what are still in good condition and the prices are quite low. Many stores will have various items in sale during holiday seasons. The prices may have reduced from 10% up to 50% off the original prices, so shopping during holiday seasons may be the good idea.
That's all. I hope my introduction help you know more about Americans' shopping.
Yours,
Li Hua
