增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m worried that you have been addicted sharing pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sorts of photo in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes it the better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, that is very convenient for us to communicate. However, there exist some potential risks if we overshare. One severe problem is give away privacy, which may cause economic losses. Besides, oversharing can makes others uncomfortable, for they think you are showing off. Thus, never should we post our personal informations, or should we blind add strangers to the list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such like reading books or taking exercise.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim,
Long time no see. Knowing that you will come to Beijing to study, and I recommend you an useful APP in our life—WeChat.
WeChat has become a big part of our life. It is very convenient for people to express our feelings instant at any time. Besides, it provided a chance for people release inner stress. By showing their heartfelt emotions on WeChat, their friends may know about their conditions and can offer timely comfort. WeChat is also one of the most convenient and safe ways to pay. We rarely need to carry a wallet or cash at all. So, never will we worry about get fake notes or having to count changes.
I hope my recommendation can be in help to you. Wish you good luck.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, everyone. Welcoming to Enjoy Your Life again. Today I’d like to introduce a special camp to you during your summer break. OK, now, let me bring them to you. Greenwood, a magical literature camp for a young, is open to boys and girls of grade five to seven. The basic idea is bring together teenagers to take part in lots of fun team-based activities. Students of all abilities get together for two weeks and read novels as well as learn what to write poems in teams. At the end of the camp, each of the students have his/her own works. Come and share the literature experience in Greenwood. It is real a big chance for all literature fans. Are you ready to join in us?
If you’re interested but want to join, please call us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Kate,
I’m worried that you’ve been addicted to share pictures in WeChat circle recently. You even share all sorts of photo in your daily life. Of course, WeChat makes better to understand each other and makes our life more colorful, through which it is very convenient for us to communicate with. However, there exists some potential risks if we overshare. One severe problem is leaking privacy, that may cause economic losses. Besides, oversharing can make others uncomfortably, for they think you are showing off.
Thus, never should we post our personal information, nor should we blindly add strangers to a list of friends. It’s much wise to set aside some time to accompany parents or do something more meaningful, such as reading books and taking exercise.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays, many students are worshipping stars so blind that they don’t care about how the stars do. It is really a pity that some fans lose them in the process.
Here are some suggestions giving to the fans. Firstly, please worship stars sensibly. Never try to do some stupid and even crazy things for our stars. Next, be aware of a most important task of a student. Everyone is supposed to studying hard at present. Last but not least, why not to worship the stars around us? There are some super stars we can communicate in reality, such as our parent and the medical workers.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Our school is organizing an English essay competition, which theme is “Good habits and success”. The essay must be focused in good habits and where they lead to our success. We are expected to support our views with detailed experiences or story. Those will make our essay very more readable and convincing. However, the essay (500 words at the most) should sent to essaycontest@163.com before November 13, 2021. The top three winners will separate receive a 500 yuan, 750 yuan or 1,000 yuan scholarship. Why not to pick up a pen and share our most touched moment with others?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The school Dance Club aims to enrich students’ school life and involving students in different dancing activities. If you’re good at or interesting in dancing, the dance club is exactly that you are looking for. Here are the requirements that you need to pay attention. There is no doubt that your interest in dancing is a must. Beside, you are more likely to be admitted unless you can organize events or have dancing experiences. Additionally, we high appreciate a strong sense of responsibility and good team spirit.
If you wanted to join us, please turn in your application before the October 30. For more informations, please contact us at danceclub123@ gmail. com.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am an high school student. My favourite film star is Jackie Chan. I see every videos of his movies over and over again. I had written hundreds of letters to him. However, all I get back are autographed（签名的） photos. I dream one day I will be meet and talk to him. My friends think I’m crazy but I don’t agree with him. I will have exams next month and can’t concentrate in my homework. I want talk to my parents but they are too busy to listen to me, what makes me totally depressed. What can I do? I honest hope someone can give me some suggestions.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均只限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are several English papers help us improve our English, the better of which is Learning English.
Learning English is written according to textbooks. That is the reason because it is especially fit for us students. Besides, the paper is rich with contents, which articles include stories, school life, news, foreign cultures, and so on. It also provides plenty of necessary exercise for us to improve our skills. With the help of paper, we can great broaden our horizons. I have been using the paper since I study English. It is very much popular with us because it can help improve our English.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Do you want to enjoy a family tour of China? We would like to help you to discover best family holiday destinations and fun thing to do with your kids in China. You can also get usefully tips for traveling in China with your kids or guidance on organizing your trip in this family tour planning guide.
Have fun is very important for kids during a trip. They are probably not as interesting in learning about Chinese culture or history as adults is. Since your daytime journey should involve some child-friendly attractions or enjoyable activities. You can also allowed some free time for your kids to play with friends or with their toys, to explore new things, or just to sleep or relax.
