增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My parents and I spent five days in Beijing last year. We went to there in autumn. We think it is best season to visit Beijing. The weather is usually cool or there aren't too many tourist in October. We stayed in a hotel in the center of the city. It was conveniently as we travelled most on foot. We couldn't understand the bus routes, and my parents didn't enjoy travelled by underground. We both went shopping in Wangfujing Street and spend too much money. What we liked most were going to the theater. We don't have the chance to see so wonderful plays at home.
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I spent the National Day Golden Week holiday traveled around Guilin，Guangxi with Mike and Tom，exchange students from Germany．We visited many popular tourist spot．The last destination of our vocation was Longji Rice Terraces in Longsheng county．The rice terrace is a well-known tourist place，where attracts visitors from home and in abroad．We admired a way people have worked in harmony to nature to make these traces and grow rice．Mike showed great interest Zhuang people's traditions．Amusingly，Tom's favorite seemed to be Guilin rice noodles serving at the guesthouse．We had so much fun and we' re already talking about their next holiday!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I had a golden chance to go on a trip to Hong Kong in last month. I had dreamed of visit it since my boyhood and it was first time that I had been there. I was impressed by that I had seen. Wherever I went, I saw many smiling face there. People in Hong Kong are kind, generous, easygoing and ready to help others. Much to his surprise, I saw that people there always kept order in public places. People, which were waiting for the next train at the subway station, chat in such a low voice as not to disturb one another. English is wide used in governments, markets, service centers and other fields. Stay there for only a week is a good experience that I will never forget.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I travelled to Lijiang in this summer vacation with my parents by plane．The fresh air brought me back to life before I got out of the plane．We first went to the Lijiang Ancient City, where they bought some interesting thing and had a good meal．On the second day, we go to the Yulong snowy mountain．It was my first time that I had seen the snow．I played with the snow happy with my parents．I told that Yulong snow mountain was such famous a place in China that many people came here every year．I was tired but exciting throughout this trip, looking forward to visit Lijiang again!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I went to the park with my friends. At the gate I come across some American tourists. I greeted him in English and then we began to chat. I got to know about that they were college students study in China. They were busy taking pictures and were deeply impressing by the changes what had taken place. Before that, we visited a beautiful garden and had good time. We exchanged our e-mail address so that we could keep in touch. I was very gladly to have had a chance to practice my oral English.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，井在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
During the weekend, parents and I paid a visit to Datong City by train. We arrive there at about 9 am. First we went to an ancient temple, in that we saw some impressive Budda statues. It is small but beautiful. So we stayed here for nearly two hours. Then we left for the temple to go downtown. You can’t imagine what crowded the street was! My parents bought some souvenirs in the local market. Meanwhile, I collected some postcard and funny toys. As we know, Datong is famous as its noodles, so we couldn't wait to taste some in a restaurant decorating traditionally. At 5 pm, we came back home happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
You asked many question in your last letter, and now let me answer them. To start with, Beijing, the capital of China, is very attractive city with a long history. You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing, of that the most famous is the roast Beijing duck. I hope we will enjoy it. Besides, there is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace or the Forbidden City. These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists in this year. I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.
I'm looking forward to hear from you as soon as possible.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^ )，并在下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month my family made about a trip to Brazil. We fly to Rio first. There we stayed at the Green Park Hotel, that was about one kilometre from the beach. It was very comfortable and really cheap. I could swam every day. There was music festival and a lot of famous musicians went to play there. We were such lucky to be able to go to some free concerts. Then we drove south to a city calling Paraty. The weather there were great and the people were friendly and nicely. The only problem was the food. There weren't many types of food to choose from and I got boring eating the same things every day. But all in all, it was a wonderful holiday.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, sixty students from our school pay a visit to China Science and Technology Museum.
The museum, which main task is to spread the knowledge of science and technology, covers area of 48,000 square meters. The moment when we entered the museum, the exhibition caught their attention. In the museum, we saw the latest progresses in science and technology. Moreover, we did an amazed scientific experiment by ourselves. What appealed for us most was the 3D film that made us feel we were in real events.
Though the visiting time was slight short, we gained a lot. It is so an instructive activity that we hope more will be organized in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Lucy,
I’m glad to hear that you are interesting in my city. As you read online, great changes have been taken place in our country. It is more convenient to live in the city than before. Private cars were everywhere now. Lots of people shop on Internet, that is especially popular among young people. What’s more, people are paying more attention on their health. You can find more people in the park or in their neighborhood, doing exercises. Even young people are paying lots of attention to their diet. All in all, our city looks very differently. I hope that they will be able to visit my city this summer holiday. I’m looking forward to show you around our city. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
