增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During my last summer holiday, I go to the countryside to enjoy myself. I saw mother bird in her nest in a big tree, watching some of her baby flying away. I thought she must be very proud of her children, that were able to find her own food now. But she might also feel a sense of loss since they wouldn’t need of her day-to-day care any longer. For my parents, things are many easier. We have set up our family blog to posting our photos and journals. Once I leave for college, we can convenient share our experiences but support each other. Their “nest” will never be empty.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I came to China, I start to travel around and I was amazed at various wildlives compared to my hometown in the UK. I went to Northeast forests in Dongbei and it was full of birds singing -numbers that I’d never experienced it in the UK. These forests are bird watching paradise. I was impressing by the number of birds in Inner Mongolia, lots of different species singing like an orchestra on the morning. In Sichuan I saw the fire throat, the black throat and pandas. These is birds that are found nowhere else. With a relative rare human population, there are big wild spaces and quite different wildlife comparing with the rest of China. I’ve been here 11 years now and I've still just scratched the surface . There’s still so much many to see.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A big storm destroyed two villages in South Africa on last Friday, causing 4 death. Over 200 people became homeless as a result of the storm. A farmer said the storm began early in the morning and last one hour. He said, “I was cooking in the kitchen with my wife and children while we heard a loud noise. A few minutes late, our house fell down. I managed to climb out, but much to my shocking, one of my boys were missing. I quickly went back inside and found them safe but frightened.” Soldiers came to rescue those burying under the ruins, and the government provided food, clothes, and shelters for homeless.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The study has revealed that renting clothes is worse for the planet than throwing it away. It found that renting clothes have the highest climate impact of all. The hiding environmental cost was delivery and packaging costs. Renting involves a large amount of transportation, taken the clothes back and forth between the warehouse and the renter. Dry cleaning is also extremely harm to the environment. The study found many rental brand misuse the term “circular economy”—the system which clothes are passed from person to person before being recycled—as a form of green washing. And if rental companies transform their logistics for a climate-friendly mode, renting would equal reselling. It was also found that the most sustainable way to consume fashion is buy fewer items and to wear them for as long as possible. “You want to be sustainable? Buy less, buy better,” Thomas said.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my friends and I went to seaside. There was many people swimming in the sea. We felt about happy when we saw some wonderful view. But something unpleasant caught their eyes. Some visitors throw a lot of rubbish into the sea. We also found some dead fish, plastic bags and empty bottles float on the surface of the water, and the air smelt terribly. The marine (海的) environment is seriously damaged, what makes me worried. I think we should take effective measures to protecting the environment. Only by doing it will we live better and become healthier.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As the Earth Day approaching, a lot of posters were put up in our school to call on us to take action for greener earth.
Seen that, my classmates and I had a short discussion and we were put forward a good idea of recycling. The next day, we bring plenty of used materials to school and tried our best to make various kinds of new things. After school, we went to the nearby neighborhood which we gave them away to the citizens. It wasn’t long after the headmaster heard of our deeds. He invited us to introduce our practical experiences at the school meeting.
We felt very proud of us because we had done something meaning for our planet.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Summer was my favorite season among the four seasons in a year, which makes me free, excited but energetic. When summer vacation comes every year, I can do all that I can’t do it during my school time, including going shopping with friends, swim in warm water and even hiking or camping in the deep valleys. These activities lead me enjoy full freedom. We can find us in an excited world every day, with the sun shining brightly, trees growing well and flowers coming out with both kinds of colors. Summer gives me the strength to do the most difficulty things in my life and makes me filled to energy. I like summer best, and I wonder how your favorite season is.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The word “smog”, a combination of smoke and fog, is made in the early 20th century. Now it is familiar to everyone but it has occurred repeated in recent years. Many traffic accidents happen due to poor visibility. A great number people have to go to see the doctor because of the diseases causing by the smog. Having realized what important it is to protect the environment, we should take measure to reduce the smog. We should go to work or school by bus or the subway if possible. Beside, we should plant more trees to keep the air fresh. Only in this way can we save us from air pollution.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, my classmates and I saw a wonderfully tiger-themed exhibition. It was been held in the People’s Hall of our city. We observed hundreds items with great excite. Among the popular exhibits were a painted sculpture of a tiger going skiing. The tiger, dressed in a red suit, looking so cheerful and energetic. There was also a section introduce the Global Tiger Day. It stressed the importances of tiger protection. The most people are aware of it, the better tigers can be protected. We will never forget that we learned from the exhibition.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
With the develop of our society and increasing population, the environment is serious affected nowadays. A large number of trees are cutting down, and water and air is polluted. As students, we can take an action and try our best to have a low-carbon life save energy and reduce pollution. Firstly, we can choose to walk or ride to school, what can reduce air pollution. Secondly, turn off the lights and fans when we leave the classroom also helps a lot. Thirdly, we should always make full use of paper and others things and never waste water. I wished more students to join us and make the earth more and more beautiful.
