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Natural disasters often come unexpectedly, killed many people and destroying countless homes. But what on earth lead to natural disasters? Of course, natural change plays an unique and important role.However, now people are aware of that we humans are partly to blame for them, which have done something harmful to the earth. We cut down too many trees in the forests so far. Better still, we have badly polluted the environment. Considering the great damages caused by us, we should take action as soon as possibly to protect our environment. Besides, we must keep calm and try to save us and help others when disasters happen.
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刷除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I’m delight to introduce you something about Chinese cultural heritage.
Hard-working and intelligently, Chinese people have made great contributions to the world civilization. Nowadays, many Chinese cultural heritage sites were preserved very well. If you have a chance to travel to China, I recommend yourself to visit Beijing and Xi’an, where many cultural sites are worth visited. Apart from the cultural heritage sites, the natural scenery in Guilin is such beautiful that you will be deeply impressed. Besides, some simple folk custom in the villages in Yunnan province are likely to remind you the good old days,during which living a harmonious life with the nature in the villages, as you know, are of great benefit.
Yours,
Li Hua
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注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack,
Learned that you like giant pandas very much, I’d like to tell you something about it.
The giant panda is known for the national treasure of China. Being one of cutest animals in the world, they are loved by people of all age. Fat and funny, the black and white animals enjoy to eating bamboo shoots and leaves, Adult pandas, most of them live in southwestern China, are about 1.2 to 1.8 meters tall and weigh about 80 to 120 kilograms. They always served as ambassadors of friendship between China or other countries.
I do hope you find the information usefully.
Yours,
Li Hua
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注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are many people who wants to protect the environment but don’t know that should be done. Here are a few tips that can help you lighten the burden on the heavily polluting earth.
Don’t leave any electrical appliance (电器) on careless if you are not using it. It can contributed to saving energy. In addition, recycle cans, bottles, plastic bags and newspapers if circumstances allow us to. Finally and the most importantly, be an educator. Talk with both your family and friends about global warming or let them be aware the importance of protecting the environment. Please remember that everyone contribution counts when it comes to creating a greener world.
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修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Boys and girls, as we know, the hazy weather was becoming worse and worse in their city. I, on behalf of our school, strong recommend that we use public transportation every day, that can help us do something to reduce pollution. First of all, we student should persuade our parents not drive us to school daily. Then we can take a bus to school of our own. In this way, we can not only develop our independence but also reduce traffic jams. Most importantly, it is also the most cheapest way for students. In the word, I appeal to all the students to take public transportation more frequently and contribute to bring back the blue sky.
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注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One Saturday’s afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping were having an environmental protection activity near the riverside while they caught sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out immediately and found it wounded.
Think it might die without timely help, they took it home. They made a nest for it and feed it with rice and water. Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon. When time came to fly the bird back to the nature, they felt very delighted.
Birds are friends of our human beings. Please bear in mind that to protect them is protect ourselves. Only by changing the way we treat the environment can we live in harmonious with it.
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注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today our class went to plant trees. We were happy to have a chance to get closely to nature. In the morning, we take a bus to Western Hill together. On arrival, we began to work immediately. Some students were busy digging holes. Some were carrying but planting young trees. Others were watering it. After getting the work do, we put up a board to remind people take care of the young trees. Seen the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. Before the leaving, we took some photo to record our action. Through this activity, we learned that it was our responsible to protect the environment.
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修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m writing to invite you to take part the upcoming tree planting activity, that is launched by the Student Union.
This activity is just part of our school environment-friendly action. It is wide accepted that the harmony between human or nature is of great importance. Besides, we are well aware that only when every individual was involved in greening projects can we enjoy a most beautiful and comfortable environment than now.
If you are interested, please joining us. We will meet and start at the school gate at 9 a. m and come back at 4 p. m. You’d better to wear strong shoe and bring some water and food along.
Looking forward to your early reply.
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删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am fond of wild animals, which existence makes our world lively and colorfully. However, many wild animals in nature are in the danger. It is believed that human beings mainly lead the terrible problem. Thanks to many governments’ and organizations’ efforts, much attention from the world are paid to the protection of wild animals. As a member of human beings, I am sure willing to protect the wildlife. So far, I had launched two activities to show the public the great achievements make in the protection of the wildlife. Many of my classmates have joined myself. I hope that more people can participate in the activity to advertise the important and benefits of environment protection.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last month, our school launched a campaign which intention was to promote environmental protection. The campaign last for one week. Firstly, there was a photo display to show the seriously pollution caused by human activities. Secondly, there was a lecture on many small step that we could take in our daily life protect the environment. For example, taking the bus and using the bike-sharing system would be a good way. Last but not the least, we students were encouraging to decorate our classrooms with recycled materials. Through the campaign, they have benefited a lot. We realize that it is our responsible to leave a better, cleaner and healthier planet for future generations.