增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Shi Yigong, president of Westlake University based in Hangzhou—had some important points to make it when he gave an online open class for middle school students on April 19, until they went to school the following day. Shi is a biologist. He is also the member of the Biophysical Society of China. During his class, Shi advocated his thinking gaining over three decades of scientific research to give the students a single piece of advice; think independent and respect science.
Shi said what independent thinking is lifelong value and respecting science is especially significant. He also said scientific finding and research were fundamental forces shaping and decide the present and future of society. They encouraged students to study science.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I am extreme sorry to tell you that I’m unable to carry on help you learn Chinese. Words fail show my deep regret.
It is for one year when we have helped each other. I am grateful to your selfless and effective guidance, without which I couldn’t have made such amazing progresses in English. However, it won’t be a long time before I will take the College Entrance Examination. And with my overall energy devoting to my study, I have no time to surf the Internet. Still, I hope that we can continue learning from each other after an exam.
I would appreciate your understanding or forgiveness. Hope to study with you online soon.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Brown，
Last summer I take a parttime job in the International Camp for children. I have been told one more worker will be needed this year and I think you are fit to it. How about join us? The camp is at the foot of a small hill close to a river.It is so a beautiful place！We can hear birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleep in tents，that is very exciting. We usually work only five hours a day，so we will have plenty of spare time visit the area and have a fun.I am sure it will be an unforgettable experience. If you have interests in it，reply to me soon.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧））,并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线.并任该词下血面写出修改后的词.
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处.多者（从最11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I have got to know your plan for volunteers in China through the Internet. Consider my advantages. I want to catch this opportunity.
I am a senior school student in China. I can speaking English very fluently. Thank to my work with an international event not long ago. I was confident that I can meet your request fairly well. In addition, I have the good command of knowledge about Chinese culture, that is a must for this event. More important. I am outspoken and always ready help others. Therefore. I am sure of I can make a good volunteer. I hope to work with him in the coming event.
Looking forward to your early reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today, I saw the funny incident happening outside a grocery shop. Two little kids were playing together happy. One was very fat with a large stomach, which was eating junk food. The other kid reached out or felt his stomach, joking, “See how big your stomach it is, but you are still eating much!” I amused and looked at the other kid. I couldn’t help laugh out as he was much fatter with an even large stomach!
In your opinion, it is no good having too much junk food, which might be to blame on the fatness of children.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Tom,
I'm writing to tell you we had found a new apartment close our school for you.There is a bank on its right or a gym on its left. Across it is a supermarket. Besides, it will be convenient for you to get around the city because a bus stop is right in the front of the building.
The apartment measures 40 square meters and is full furnished, included a bedroom, a sitting room, a kitchen and a bathroom. They also make sure that it is equipped with basic thing needed in everyday life such as the refrigerator, the TV set and the coffee maker. Which is great news is that free Wi-Fi is provided.
Please write back and tell us if it is nicely enough.
Yours
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Shortly after when I moved to a new neighborhood, my African gray parrot accidentally fly out of the door. Panicked, I ran after him. One of the new word the parrot had learned recently was coffee, and her nickname was Small. As a result, I was running around yelled “Small! Coffee!” at the trees like a madwoman, hoping for him give a response. Finally, the neighbor cautiously approached me with a steaming cup on hand. She said, “Maybe you should relax. By the way, there has no coffee shop here, honey.” Fortunate, I got my parrot back later that day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Susan’s family was terrible poor. One Christmas Eve, Susan’s father saw that Susan had used piece of gold wrapping paper to decorate a shoe-box, where is so precious to their family, and she put it under the Christmas tree. The next morning, Susan takes the box to her dad and said, “This is for you, dad!” But if he opened it, he found it was empty. “Why do you give me an empty boxes? Don’t you know the gold wrapping paper is such expensive to us?” Her dad said angrily. Susan cried, said, “Dad, it isn’t empty. I blew kisses into it until it was all foil.” Hearing of this, the dad felt regretful, he held Susan in his arms but said “Sorry, my dear, I love you!”.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Dear John,
Yesterday I had read a notice on the Internet. You wanted to look for a Chinese friend online who can actual help you learn the Chinese language, cultures or customs.
I’m looking forward to be your friend on the Internet but I wonder whether or not you would like to accept me. If I become our friend on the Internet, I’ll try my best to help you for Chinese in my spare time. At same time, I’ll introduce some cultures and custom of China to you step by step.
So if you are interesting in this, please let me know your QQ number and I really expect what we can make good friends soon.
Love,
Li Hua
