增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was quiet, sunny afternoon. I was sitting in the garden, reading the Sunday newspaper and expected a couple of hour of peace. Then I hear a loud knock on the door. I saw about twelve ladies wearing her Sunday clothes. They said, “Well, we hope we are not late, so it is not easy to find your house.” One lady said, “Well, your husband is very kind to invite us to tea.” I thought, “My God, my husband must have been mad.” I asked for them into the house and they sat down and started talking happy. But when my husband appeared, it was quickly discovered that they could have gone to the house on the another side of the street.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The other day, I discover I couldn't move my right arm and fingers after sleeping through a flight. Having diagnosed me with neural injury, the doctor suggested I could try acupuncture(针灸). So I followed his advices and began my treatment. Dozens tiny needles were inserted across my arm and fingers. I dared not move, because even a small change of position could cause a acute pain. Two weeks went by since I could eat a meal with chopsticks and it took a month for my arm and fingers to return back to their normal functions. I was very amazing at how magic these needles were. That I had always considered old-fashioned and useless turned out to be of great use. I hope acupuncture, with its help I recovered, will continue to bring health to other people.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的次。
删除：把多余的用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
With the aim of enriching our school life, our school hold a chorus competition last week. Our teacher encouraged us take an active part in the activity. Late, we carried out a heated discussion to select songs. Finally all student in our class agreed on sing “Defending Yellow River” in the competition. In the chorus, we sang with full of passion under the direction of our conductor. Which excited us most was that we won a first prize. During the competition, not only were we proud of us triumph, but also deep impressed by the meaning of cooperation.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There are various kinds of theme parks in a world. The theme park you are probable most familiar with is Disneyland, that will bring you into a magical world. You can not only meet your favorite Disney cartoon characters but also enjoy excited rides. Dolleywood shows and celebrates America’s tradition southeastern culture. For example, people come from all over America see carpenters and other craftsmen make wood, glass and iron objects with the old-fashioned style. If you want to experience the ancient days and great deeds of English knights and lady, princes and queens, then English Camelot Park is the place for you. When you enter into Camelot Park, you may feel like enter a world of fantasy about old England.
5 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When studied in elementary school, I talked to a better friend about volunteering. I was sorry to hear she has never volunteered before. More surprising, several days later I was told that opportunity to volunteer was not easy to get for other classmates either. Then I came up with an idea, this was to organize one volunteer opportunity a month at school. Other kids would make a difference through simple act of service if I could offer situations to teach them the importance of giving back. However, I presented my idea to our headmaster. To his great happiness, it was recognized. It started as one project in a small classroom, and eventually was turned out a success in my whole school.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
According to scientific researches, complaining every day was bad for you. It actual hurts your brain. It causes damage to the areas for learning, make new memories, and solving problems. Complaining is bad for the people around you as well, that is just like secondhand smoke. The negative comments and energy also affects them and get to them. So, turn the negative thought into positive ones. Also, be sure to calm you so you can see real problem and fix it. Finally, appreciate the good or forget the bad. Your brain will thank you for not to complaining.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Delighted to be informed the news that you have won first place in the Chinese Calligraphy Competition for International Students, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulation to you.
I think you deserve a prize. For a long time, you had shown great interest in Chinese culture, especial Chinese calligraphy. I know you always refer to calligraphy books, learn from masters and keep practice writing Chinese characters. It’s your passion and hard work that contributes to you winning the championship. Hopefully, you can achieve even great success in the future.
Also, I hope you can make great progress in calligraphy together. Please tell me that when you are available so that we can exchange our experience of learning it. Looking forward to your early reply.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, my mother and I went to a park. We had a goodtime, deciding to have the lunch in the park. With some milks and bread ready, my mother and I went to wash my hands. However, when we came back, our bread was going! We thought that it was someone took it. We were very angry. I thought that the thief will come back to take the milk. So, my mother and I hid behind a tree or waited. One hour late, no one came. We were such hungry that we had to give in. Suddenly, I found something under the chair. Oh, it was our bread!
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My English teacher is in his fifty and of medium height. Always wear a smile, he looks more than kind. The reason why I honor and admire for him so much lies in two respects. For one thing, I wouldn’t have got so great progress in English without his patient and significant assistance. For another, it’s my devotion to the career and consideration for us that earns not only my but also other students’ gratitude. So touching am I that I’m determined to spare no effort study hard. I dream of being an person like him in the future or make great contributions to society.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Once there was an exhibition on fine paintings in Paris. There was a curtain covered each painting. Several well-known artist were invited to visit and show their opinions. After commenting four fine paintings, they came near the fifth painting, an assistant drew the fifth curtain away. A vivid rose appear before them. At the moment an butterfly (蝴蝶) flew onto the roses in the painting. All of them cheered. They all said that it was excellence, because it confused the butterfly. Then the assistant was going to draw the 6th curtain as she did before. As soon as he touched the curtain, he cried, “Wonderful! It’s the best painting I have ever seen.”
All the artists asked that why he thought so. Before he told the reason, everybody agreed with him. The painting itself was a curtain, and the assistant was also confused, he hadn’t think it was a curtain.
