删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
It was about 9 o'clock one evening. While do my homework, I heard strange noise which sounded like the flowing of water. Suddenly I find the walls shaking as if someone was pushing it. Thinking perhaps I was such tired, I stood up, and was going to bed. Just then I heard someone shout “Earth-quake!” The word put much fear into everyone heart. I rushed out of the house as quick as possible. The whole street was already full with people. I felt everything was trembling. The earthquake was lasted for a few second. Then everything was quiet again.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(˄),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As a student, my main target is to study well and then make progress step in step. As we know, all works and no play makes Jack a dull boy. When holiday comes, it is time for me play and I’m usually very happy. Therefore, playing all the time makes me feel empty because I have done nothing at all. I want to do nothing meaningful to enrich my life, so a target is needing for me. I usually set a small goal for myself, for example, read a book. Every time when I finish my target, I felt so satisfied. The really meaningful life is to do some usefully things.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
For about half century, scientists have been making better and better computer. Now a computer can do a lot everyday jobs wonderful. It is widely used in factories, hospitals and banks. Many computer’s scientists are now thinking of making the computer to “think” like a man. At the help of a person, a computer can draw pictures, write music, talking with people, translate languages and so on. Perhaps computers will one day really think and feel. Do you think that people will afraid when they will find that the computer is too clever.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We have been travelling for more than a week already but arrived in Saudi Arabia today. Most people here wear traditional type of long and loose clothing that cover the whole body. Saudi Arabia is in the desert, and in summer, the weather is extreme hot. One of the tour guide told us that it gets as hotter as 50℃ every summer. Wear this kind of clothing may be very comfortable in that weather, but this is winter and quite cool now. During the day in winter, it was about 22℃ and about 13℃ in the evening. I think I will find the weather a bit of cold when we return to China.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Three years before, I visited the Great Wall with my parents. In the way to the Great Wall, we met a foreign lady. She was happily handing out pencils to friendly students which were talking with her. My mother was asked me to chat her.
Without the second thought, I begin to talk about the warm weather with her. We quickly became friend. I learned that she came to China by herself, so she didn’t feel lonely with so many kind people around. Thought highly of my spoken English, she gave me a pencil made in Canada.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today, more and more English words find its way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese included many English words. Some people support it and others do not.
Generally, I'm in the favor of the inclusion. As the number of English learners are increasing ,it's not difficult to understand these borrowing words in Chinese contexts. Beside, on some occasions, it is more convenient to use English words. Most people nowadays use "IT" instead its translation "xinxi jishu". In our globe village, we can see that it's uncommon for one language to borrow words from other languages. So I support the inclusion.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, some of my friends and I went to a park for a walk. I saw a elderly woman collecting rubbish throw by people. She obviously had some difficulty collect some small things. Suddenly, I came up with an idea. Why not asked my friends to help her collect rubbish? Much to their surprise, all my friends agreed and were willing help. So we worked hard together with her and collected much rubbish. At the end of this activity, and we said goodbye to her. Felt tired, I was really happily. I really think we'll have a beautiful society if all people help each other. How a meaningful day!
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分。
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party in five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.
9 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day, Daisy went to see the animals that give fur to make her sweater in a flying carpet. It flew away to Tibet in China first, which she saw an antelope. The antelope told to her that they were killed for the wool that was taken from their stomachs.
Then the carpet flew to Zimbabwe, where Daisy saw an elephant. The elephant said they were endangering in Zimbabwe. Farmers used to hunt them with mercy. Now the government allowed tourists to hunt only a certain number of animal if they paid the farmers. The flying carpet rose again and almost at once we arrived at a thick rainforest.
There a monkey was rubbing a millipede insect over its body if the insect could protect it from mosquitoes. But Daisy decided to produce this new drug with the help of WWF. The carpet rose and flew home.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A perform in our city made people think more about an overuse of plastic bags. It called on people use more cloth bags instead of plastic one. In front of a largely supermarket, five volunteers wear white plastic bags and walked through the crowd. Some of the plastic bags worn by the volunteers was collected from customers in two food markets, and all the others were collected by 700 students from a secondary school. On that day, upon leaving the food markets, customers were asking to hand in the plastic shopping bags that they didn’t need of. Several hundreds plastic bags were collected within just two hours.