增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thank you for your concern about our efforts in environmental protection. As too many use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our government encourages us use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags were made from a variety of materials that can be easy treated when they become rubbish. Beside, they can be reused. More and more Chinese have been realized the advantages of such bags and started to use it. What is believed is whether the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the steps taking to make our country a even cleaner place.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, everyone have a dream. I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school. Nowadays with modern life go rapidly, many people suffer from different kind of disease, both mentally and physically. As a result, doctors are in greet need at home and abroad. My dream is to become successful doctor, helping to save people’s lives. Although to be a good doctor was very difficult, I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health. To make dream come true, I have told me over and over again that I will concentrate to studies, after all, only by working hardly can one succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How are you doing these days? Hear that you are going back to Britain next week, and I’m writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your teaching and the assistance given to me during the previous year.
So far you had taught us English for about one year. I still remember the time when we made tastily turkey and had a party last Thanksgiving Day. It was during that time that you chatted with us and shared so much interesting things about your country with us. Thus I learned a lot about your country’s food, culture and history and the beautiful small town when you were born. Which is the most important is that we’ve become good friends since then. Though I feel a little sorry that you are leaving soon, I am pleasing to know you can be reunited your family soon. I really hope we can keep in touches often.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many teenagers have difficult getting along with their fathers. I can fully put myself your shoes, as I once experienced the same problem. You can try the followed suggestions.
Be patient with your father. You two must have misunderstood each another. The key to solve the problem is regular and honest communication. Explain your actions and feelings calmly, listen carefully, and address her concerns. Besides, you should try your best to seeing things from his point of view. Only in these ways can your misunderstandings be clear up. You will learn to back down and what your father will relax. With a little bit of patience and communication, much of these problems can be solved.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a Chinese high school student. I’m writing to apply to English literature major in your university.
There are three reason for my choice. To begin with, I developed a strong interest in English since my childhood. Losing in English literature, I find a sense of satisfaction. What’s more, it’s known that English literature indeed plays an increasing important role in our daily life. It not only enriches our mind but also establish cultural and emotional ties between them with foreigners. Last but not least, the major contributes to find a good job. This is why most employers favor those with a good understanding of English literature.
From where I stand, I have achieved good academic performance in all English literature exams. I make it a habit to read English literature every day. I believe that I am qualified for the application.
I would appreciate it that if you reply to me as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father is always on my side to make sure I overcome difficulties and progresses towards my goal. He is always first one to help with my troubles. I still remember a rainy day. The road was awful flooded. I was stuck at school with a thundery and dark sky, what scared me a lot. Suddenly, I saw my father coming to pick myself up. That incident made me loved him more. When I was seven, I had some difficulties solve my competition problems. He had stayed with me all day to help me. With his helps, I won that competition, which motivated me a lot.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When it comes to music, here is how I want to say: Music is one of the important part in my life. The beautiful classical music not only helps us deal with stress, but bring me pleasure. Although some songs contain rock-and-roll beats, but they still can make me feel calm and comfortable. I believe music is able to passing on all kinds of emotions. While prepared for the coming day, I love listening to music as my regularly morning routine. Also, I am planning to learn to play piano. Without songs and harmonies, my life will be completely empty.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Digital life has brought great changes to us. With a smart phone in hand, I can do almost nothing. Just name a few on the list—learning online, getting medical service on the Internet and shop with a click. I can even travel across China without taking cashes!
As a young student, I surely enjoyed living in such a digital world. It gives me an easy access to abundant resources, news and learning materials alike. If only I wish, it offer the chance to better myself, physically or mentally. Therefore, the digital life also has their downsides. Many elderly Chinese feel leave behind. So I often try to help those need.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
In response to the call of nationwide labor education, a series of hands-on courses launched last term in our school, ranging from planting vegetables to making tradition handicrafts.
Sewing is one of my favorite course where I obtained a fundamental knowledge of essential life skills such as sewing a button, knit a scarf, and making a cushion by operating the sewing machine. It was sure a rewarding and fulfilling experience, that not only enriched our extracurricular life but also helped us acquire practical basic working capabilities for livelihood and form the good habit of labouring.
The hands-on courses have won a popularity among students and had a positive effect to the personal growth of everyone involved. If possible, an exhibition could be held to demonstrate students well-designed works and displayed their creativity.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The day before yesterday, I went to the bookstore where is near our school to buy the reference book. It was Saturday, so there were many people. Under the help of the shop assistant, I quickly got the book I needed to. I was about to leave when I found someone try to steal a man’s money. Although I was nervous, I tried to think of a way to help him. Suddenly, a good idea occurred me. I stepped on the man’s foot on purposes. As expected, the man’s scream gives the thief a fright, who quickly walked out of the shop. After hear my explanation, the man smiled and showed great gratitude for me.
