增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday, I spent my lucky money on the special gift for my grandma. Early in the morning, I went to a cellphone store and choose a cellphone with large buttons specially designing for seniors. I gave it to my grandma when I visited her at the weekend. On receive the cellphone, my grandma was very happy but eager to learn how to use it. I patiently explained several important function she needed. My grandma learned carefully and wanted have a try. Under my help, she successful called one of her friends. That afternoon, my grandma proudly told her neighbors that she could make calls with the new cellphone I bought it her. They all praised how thoughtful I was.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a bicycle，that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers afterschool. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school by my own bicycle.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week, my parents told me the good news my family would go camp with my uncle’s family. I feel so excited about it, because I could spend the whole night outside, it never happened before. When the day came, we brought the equipments and bought some food. In the afternoon, the two families settled in, and then we started to walk around. My cousins and I rushed to the forest and went to the high point, where we could appreciate the whole sight. Stand on the highest place, I felt so great. The world was in the front of my eyes and I thought of some old poets’ description. At night, we made a fire and talked happily. The parents were talking about the family chores and the kids were playing games. It was such happy a moment for me.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My mother is sixty-five year old, that devotes herself to the whole family and us three daughters. Today I still remember clearly that there was the time when life was really hard in a remote mountain village. People there had a strong prejudice that girls should not go to school and stay at home doing housework. However, my mother held a total opposite view that her three daughters should get educated no matter what others thought and no matter what hard life was. My mother got little education because the Chinese Cultural Revolution and she decided not to let the same thing to happen to her girls. To his delight, we three sisters went to college and got well-educated. And now, we all have our jobs and our own happy families. We are such grateful for what Mum has done for us.
