增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
My dance school has a float in our town’s parade (游行) every year. I was so exciting when I got been selected to be part of the special dance. The rehearsals (排练) did conflict to a few of my soccer games. However, their teacher said it’d be okay as soon as I practised the steps at home. Well, I should have practised hardly! We were right in middle of the routine, and I turned right while the rest of the class went left. My mess-up caused a whole row of dancer to knock over. I heard the whole town went silent as they watched!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A few weeks ago, I went to England with my soccer team. I had a great fun. On Saturday, I wake up at 5: 30 and got on the coach immediate with my teammates. It took him to the boat. We headed for Holyhead what is in Wales. After some time we arrived the Ethiad Stadium. We was there to see Man City vs Leicester City. Man City won at last. The match was amazed. Agüero scored four goal. We went to our hotel in Bolton before we watched the match.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I love reading. I love it so much that no matter where I go, and I will put a book in my bag. And I will take it out and read a couple of page when I am free. However, so a good habit also has its disadvantages. Once my mother had anything urgent to deal with and can’t spare time to cook.
I promised her that I would cook. But thinking it was still earlier, I picked up a book to read. Soon I got lost in the story. Not until my mother came back I realize I forgot to cook the meal. In my relief, she didn’t blame me. She just reminded me to pay attention to protect my eyesight. What the good mother!
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
Since I was little, I’ve been larger than other girl. I hated a way I looked. My anxiety drives me to try every means to lose weight, dieting and weight-loss pills including. This only brought me pain and poor health. Everything changed the moment when I came across the story a plus-size model, Tess Holliday. Although she’s larger than most other models, she has the confidence to be her. Her story has changed my ideas about that it means to be beautiful. My health, mentally and physical, is the most important thing. Isn’t it better that I’m large and happy, instead of skinny and healthy?
I am interested at swimming very much. At first, I went swimming just to keep health. Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics. Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream. Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions. In the competitions, I’ve made a lot of friend and we’re very close. It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.
注意(文中还涉及增词和删词错误各一处未标明,请同学们自行找出需增词、删词处,再做修改,注意增、删格式。)
Dear James,
Thanks for your letter. I’m delight that you’re coming over and we’re all looking forward to see you again. I can understand you are nervous about travelling by your own. Don’t worry! We’ll pick you up at the airport. Telling me your flight number and arrival time, and we can meet you while you arrive. Kate wonders if you could bring him some of that wonderful cheese we eat in your parents’ house last month. She keep talking about it. I don’t think it should be problem bringing it into the country. Let me know as soon as you can book your flight.
Love,
Sandra
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Andrew,
I’d like to invite you to the coming Christmas party, what will take place on the second floor of the dining hall as expect. It is the celebration for the Christmas Eve. But you are welcome to make the short speech. After that we’ll have some funs together, singing, dancing and playing games. Then we’ll enjoy a candle light dinner, tasting a variety of delicious food. Finally, members of the English club will exchange gifts. I’m sure it will be a warmly get-together.
I’d appreciate if you could come and join us. The party will start at 6:00 p.m. and lasts about three hours. We’d like to meet you at the school gate at 5 :50 p.m. on this evening.
We’re looking forward to you reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
On New Year’s Day I went to a stamp exhibition, that proved to be a unique experience.
I arrived at the exhibition with my precious stamp album, eager and exciting. Crowds of stamp lovers had gathered here. I joined in them and studied the stamps one by one. I was deep absorbed in the artists’ delicate design and wanted to learn more. Then, some of us got together in twos and threes to share our collections, chatting cheerfully about the stamps and stories behind it like old friends. Time passes quickly and it was time to say goodbye to these friends. We took pictures together but made promises to meet again.
I had great time today. Not only did I appreciate beautiful stamp, but also I made new friends of the same interest.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I travelled to Lijiang in this summer vacation with my parents by plane.The fresh air brought me back to life before I got out of the plane.We first went to the Lijiang Ancient City, where they bought some interesting thing and had a good meal.On the second day, we go to the Yulong snowy mountain.It was my first time that I had seen the snow.I played with the snow happy with my parents.I told that Yulong snow mountain was such famous a place in China that many people came here every year.I was tired but exciting throughout this trip, looking forward to visit Lijiang again!
Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you getting well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating with dinner, going out for a walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their lives when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents well trust you more.