增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意: (1) 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
(2) 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I still remember my thirteen birthday celebration. Instead of the usually parties, my parents decided to spend the whole day with myself. They took me to a larger bookshop first, in which I spent a long time looking through books and magazines there before selecting those I wanted. Then, we went to the cinema. There were many different movies to watch. We finally choose Fantastic 4. My face lit up when I saw the comfortable seats or the huge screen as well. That was one of the most memorable birthday I had ever had. Although I didn’t have a cake or my friends celebrate it, I was pleasant to do which I wanted that day.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(A),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11 处起)不计分。
I’m a top student in my class. I’ve never cheated in a exam and really don’t see the point. If you cheat to get better grades, and you’re lying to yourself as well as to everyone else. Beside, it’s not fair to the students, whom study hard. Rather than spending our time thinking of cleverly ways to cheat in the exams, we’d better devote that time to studying. A friend once tried to read his answers in a math exam while pretend to pick something up off the floor. But I cover my papers, so he didn’t see the answers. After the exam, I talked about him, and he realized it was unfair for him do well because of my hard work. Finally, he understood me completely.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To make our life colorful, my classmates and I took part in a picking activity on a farm locating in the suburb of our city on last Sunday.
Upon our arrival, we were all deep attracted by that we saw. Lovely fruits, such as peaches and cherries, hang on the green branch, which made us really excited. As soon as they were divided into small groups, we worked separately. As time passed by, the activity came to end and all of us gained various fresh and tasty fruits. Tired although I was, I found it worthwhile and get close to nature could benefit us a lot.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello, everyone. We’re senior three students now, and it’s time that every one of us starts considering what to do after our graduation. As the rapid development of our society, there are more and more jobs to choose from. But which one suits us better? Some jobs may seem dull and they are vital to our society while other might appear exciting but actually they are different and bored, and sometimes cause huge pressure to those which are involved in them. As result, when we think about future career, we should realize the important of all jobs. Please remember they together to help our society function well.
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 作错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面33出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2. 只允许修改 10 处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Last month,I finish reading Romance of the Three Kingdoms writing by Luo Guanzhong. It is a Chinese historical novel based upon the events what happened between the late Eastern Han Dynasty or the Three Kingdoms. h is praised as one of the Four Great Classical Novels of Chinese literature. I’ve learned a lot of from the novel. I really like reading, which can broaden your horizon and make me learn knowledges. A good book is like a wise man, a teacher, a friend and a partner. I do advise chose a good book to read. lf everyone does it regular, the history culture and many other aspects will handed down from generation to generation.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^), 并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We’ve all heard of the saying, “Reading good books are like having a conversation with the finest men of the past centuries.” It shows the benefit of reading books. By reading books, we can know which is going on at home and abroad. In fact, reading has many benefits. It can bring us knowledges and pleasure. From reading the number of books, we can get much. Reading books enables us broaden our horizons, enriched our life. We can not only understand how to live in a happy life and learn new ways of doing things. When we faced difficulties, we can solve them peacefully. As someone once put it, “A good book is exact a good friend.”
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, I accompanied my little brother to swimming pool. There, he soon got along with a boy possess a water gun and they played with the toy together. When my brother ran excitedly with the water gun, he scratch the boy’s neck by accident. Shallowly as the scratch was, it was clear. I hurried to comfort the boy, but called the boy’s father. I feared he’d blame for my brother and me. Which was quite unexpected was that I just said it was no big deal. Seeing my brother hang his head in shames, the father comforted my brother, which made me quite touching.
Everybody needs have friends in life. But being a friend can sometime be hard work. Learn how to solve problems in friendship can make you a better friend and a happier person. An universal problem between friends is that they don’t know why to talk with each other about difficult things. When they are talking, they often get madly with each other. What can they do? It took time to learn how to communicate well, and it is important to understand why a friend gets angry to you when you say something. If you know which makes your friend angry, and you can try to talk about the problem in a different way.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack,
I am writing to ask for your help. I was going to organize a money-raising project for poor students. However,I am at loss how to start. I don’t know what types of people are most likely to donate to. Is it a good idea to visiting local business people? Besides,which is the best way to let the public know your ideas? Last but not least,how can I guarantee that the money raising will be sent to the students who really needs it?
Considering that you have much experience in organizing similarly projects,I am wondering if you could give me some suggestion. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I find it interested that many great or success people come from a poor family. This proves that being poor not always a bad thing. In some way, it may be very precious to you, because of difficult situations will make you a person of strong character, upon what you can depend for success. So don’t feel sorry if you were a student from a poor family. Work hard and they will have a great future although other have rich parents.
In a word, it isn’t matter where you come from if you have a positive attitude to life. So, when life gives you 100 reasons to cry, showing life that you have 1, 000 reasons to smile.