1 . 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修以你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
How many time do you spend with your parents? Your parents are your dearer people in the world when you are young. And they always care for you deep. But even though many children still loves their mum and dad, families may become less close as you get older. The end of the year is a time for families to got together. Have you ever thought of how you can show your parents that you love them? Find a chances and do something for them or have sincere talk with them. What you can do this, your parents will be very happy.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was 7:15 in the morning of January 8th, 2023. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while a passer-by of average build came out of the park on the other side of the road. Just at that moment, I see a yellow car driving up the Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. Unlucky, the car hit the man when she was crossing the road. And he knocked down with a painful cry. However, instead of stopping, the car drove off even faster. Seeing this, about two minute later, I stopped a passing car and rushed the man to the most nearest hospital. When his family came, they were moving to tears.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today, it has been almost 30 years when I first started volunteering at the local library for “Children’s Story Hour”. Every week, I go there to read to kids. Also, I answer question that they are curious about them. This job, what I have kept doing for so long, help me escape from the daily stress. I am really happy to be with them. Yesterday our local news channel completed a program naming “Local Heroes”. 127 adults voted me, saying something like, “Cheryl’s Story Hour is one of the warm memories from my childhood.” And interesting enough, all the others names on the top of the list were firefighters, policemen, and politicians.
增加: 在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改 10 处, 多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
In my heart, my mom is my heroine in every way. No matter that what happens to her, she always makes sure that she is strongly enough to be able to take care of my brother and me. When we were young, my mom sets a good example to us, which let us know the importance of making decisions or being respectful. She often puts other first. She tells me that helping other people also means help herself. All of her friend will turn to her if they need help, because she is understanding and kind-hearted person. I think my mother is the best person in this world. He is always there for me when I need her. I love her very much and I hope she will be proud with me one day in the future.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A few weeks ago, I went to England with my soccer team. I had a great fun. On Saturday, I wake up at 5: 30 and got on the coach immediate with my teammates. It took him to the boat. We headed for Holyhead what is in Wales. After some time we arrived the Ethiad Stadium. We was there to see Man City vs Leicester City. Man City won at last. The match was amazed. Agüero scored four goal. We went to our hotel in Bolton before we watched the match.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
This weekend, my mother invited me in advance to play table tennis in the city sports center. Unfortunately, it snowed in Friday. Therefore, I thought we wouldn’t play next day because of the table is outdoors. But we decided to checking it out. The road was covered with snow everywhere, but there seemed to be not any hopes of playing. When we arrived, we were surprised to find that the snow had been clearing and the tables were drily. Several people were playing table tennis there. It was the table tennis fans which cleared the snow in time. They greeted us warmly and lent us our bats and balls. Thus I played table tennis with my mother happily.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(⋀)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Saturday, all the seniors of our school visits a digital exhibition. The exhibition was named “A Panorama of Rivers and Mountains 3.0”, what is a perfect combination of traditionally art techniques and innovative digital technology.
The exhibition hosting by the City Art Gallery, enjoyed huge popularity between us. The highly immersive experience allowed us admire one of the most treasured work of art from the Song Dynasty with our own eyes. The highlight was the real time interaction, enabling us to lose ourselves in the vast and beautiful scenery in the person. This experience will stick in your minds, for we felt the charm of both Chinese magnificent landscape or high tech.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Aiming to provide an opportunity with students to enrich their knowledge about Western culture, yesterday the English club organizes a visit to the art exhibition of David Hockney in the City Art Gallery. He is one of the most influential British artists. I was fortunately to participate. Together with other club members, I admired some masterpieces by David and watched a video about her. My favorite part was watching the digital versions of the paintings, which enabled me observe those great work from different angles and have a new insight into them. Although that this exhibition displayed was limited, but I think the visit meaningful and beneficial. After all, learn English is not only about the language itself, but also a culture it comes from.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（˄），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Many a person amaze us in our lives. One of the more impressive for me is my cousin, who graduated from a key university majoring in Computer Science. She once said, “My dream is to become an expert at computer.” Unlucky, a serious illness resulted his disability, so he moved around with two stick. To earn his life, he set up a small computer shop years ago. Then he taught himself what to repair computers by reading e-books as well as paper books and watch teaching videos. Now my cousin has been become a famous disabled computer expert.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
With the on-going development of science and technology, our studies are sure to change great.
First, we can study in whichever place we like in the future, not just at school. For an example, we can have various online classes from the best teachers without leaving home, thus make our learning a lot convenient. Besides, there will be more tool like Ding-ding and Wechat to help us study. We will have no exams at school as they can study easily and do what we have a talent in. Learning will be delighted for all of us.
Every time I look forward to the future, I can’t feel more excited because many kinds of possibilities were waiting for me.
