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As a student, Li Hua works very harder at his lessons, so he is always one of the top student in our class. He loves sports very much that he makes it a rule to play the football at weekends with his friends. Li Hua is concerning about the students who are not good at their lessons, so she always helps them after class.
As a monitor, Li Hua has organized some voluntary activities successful. We visit a nursing home last month, and we pick rubbish in the park near our school every week. What we do is warmly welcomed by the community. This is how Li Hua is so popular.
2 . During my P.E. class I met a girl, who was in a grade younger than me. She was always
Whenever she came over I made it my
People lose friends all the time but wise people know how to
A.happy | B.sad | C.shy | D.quiet |
A.somebody | B.nobody | C.anybody | D.everybody |
A.classmates | B.schoolmates | C.friends | D.parents |
A.and | B.but | C.so | D.then |
A.played | B.watched | C.talked | D.studied |
A.rule | B.goal | C.dream | D.way |
A.strength | B.decision | C.attention | D.time |
A.equally | B.happily | C.suddenly | D.regularly |
A.usual | B.middle | C.first | D.last |
A.mother | B.brother | C.sister | D.family |
A.Fixing | B.Hearing | C.Seeing | D.Understanding |
A.order | B.force | C.advice | D.allow |
A.newer | B.greater | C.sooner | D.better |
A.forget | B.stop | C.ask | D.mind |
A.help | B.miss | C.greet | D.invite |
A.realized | B.guessed | C.promised | D.hoped |
A.turned away | B.gave off | C.started out | D.lit up |
A.change | B.see | C.appreciate | D.treasure |
A.success | B.question | C.friendship | D.agreement |
A.lucky | B.important | C.right | D.free |
No fight can end, and no friendship can move on, until everyone says these little words: I’m sorry. Sometimes, though, they can be difficult to say.
It’s not about winning.
Friendships aren’t like the Super Bowl, and there should never be a winner and a loser. When you start fighting with a friend, it may feel important that you “win” the fight by proving you’re right and he is wrong, or by making him be the first to apologize. In reality, you’ll BOTH LOSE if you let your fight ruin your friendship, and you will BOTH WIN if you find a way to heal it.
You may have heard the expression “His pride stood in the way.” It is usually used to describe a person who is so determined to be “right” that he lets an opportunity for happiness pass him by forever.
Take the first step.
Are you sick of fighting? Do you think this fight is just not important enough to ruin your friendship?
A.Then try to be the first to apologize. |
B.Stop thinking about your pride. |
C.It’s about taking some responsibility for the argument. |
D.Don’t let this happen to a friendship you care about. |
E.Here are some things to keep in mind. |
F.There are some special cases when you shouldn’t be the one to apologize first. |
G.Once you’ve both said it, you’ll both feel a million times better. |
4 . Three Boys and a Dad
Brad closed the door slowly as Sue left home to visit her mother. Expecting a whole day to relax, he was thinking whether to read the newspaper or watch his favourite TV talk show on his first day off in months. “This will be like a walk in the park.” he’d told his wife. “I’ll look after the kids, and you can go visit your mom.”
Things started well, but just after eight o'clock, his three little “good kids”---Mike, Randy, and Alex --- came down the stairs in their night clothes and shouted “breakfast, daddy.” When food had not appeared on within thirty seconds, Randy began using his spoon on Alex’s head as if it were a drum. Alex started to shout loudly in time to the beat(节拍) . Mike chanted “Where’s my toast, where’s my toast” in the background. Brad realized his newspaper would have to wait for a few seconds.
Life became worse after breakfast. Mike wore Randy’s underwear on his head. Randy locked himself in the bathroom, while Alex shouted again because he was going to wet his pants. Nobody could find clean socks, although they were before their eyes. Someone named “Not me” had spilled a whole glass of orange juice into the basket of clean clothes. Brad knew the talk show had already started.
By ten o'clock, things were out of control. Alex was wondering why the fish in the fish bowl refused his bread and butter. Mike was trying to show off his talent by decorating kitchen wall with his color pencils. Randy, thankfully, appeared to be reading quietly in the sitting room, but closer examination showed that he was eating apple jam straight from the bottle with his hands. Brad realized that the talk show was over and reading would be impossible.
At exactly 11:17, Brad called the daycare center(日托所).“I suddenly have to go into work and my wife is away. Can I bring the boys over in a few minutes?” The answer was obviously “yes” because Brad was smiling.
1. When his wife left home, Brad expected___________.A.go out for a walk in the park |
B.watch TV talk show with his children |
C.enjoy his first day off the work. |
D.read the newspaper to his children |
A.Drawing on the wall | B.Eating apple jam |
C.Feeding the fish | D.Reading in a room |
A.Because he wanted to clean his house. |
B.Because he suddenly had to go to his office |
C.Because he found it hard to manage his boys |
D.Because he had to take his wife back home. |
A.by space | B.by comparison |
C.by process | D.by time |
When she was fourteen, Michel was already
Michel says that it is
Michel believes that handwriting is a good
A.with | B.by | C.like | D.as |
A.search | B.follow | C.catch | D.judge |
A.so | B.too | C.quite | D.extra |
A.books | B.letter | C.tongues | D.handwriting |
A.writing | B.studying | C.settling | D.uncovering |
A.attending | B.finishing | C.starting | D.stepping into |
A.powerful | B.natural | C.special | D.common |
A.main | B.safe | C.easy | D.impossible |
A.most | B.nothing | C.little | D.sight |
A.with | B.by | C.of | D.about |
A.so | B.for | C.thus | D.but |
A.they | B.in which | C.that | D.those |
A.up | B.out | C.for | D.into |
A.of | B.to | C.with | D.for |
A.test | B.sign | C.means | D.habit |
A.thief | B.criminal | C.writer | D.policeman |
A.whether | B.unless | C.if | D.after |
A.adds | B.tells | C.repeats | D.cries |
A.before | B.after | C.so | D.and |
A.necessary | B.all right | C.important | D.quite easy |
It was New Year’s Day. Mr. Lang didn’t go to work. He felt lonely and wanted to gamble again. He called his friends and they came soon. But they were afraid the police would come. He told his five-year-old son to go to find out if there were the policemen outside. They waited for a long time and didn’t think the police would come and began to gamble. Suddenly opened the door and in came a few policemen.
“I saw there weren’t any policemen outside, daddy,” said the boy, “so I went to the crossing and asked some to come.”
1. Mr. Lang was paid much because _______.
A.he was a driver |
B.he worked in a factory |
C.he had a lot of work to do |
D.he had worked there for a long time |
A.she couldn’t find any work |
B.she thought her husband was tired |
C.her husband spent all time in gambling |
D.she wouldn’t stop her husband gambling |
A.Mr. Lang often gambled |
B.Mr. Lang was late for work |
C.Mr. Lang didn’t help his wife at home |
D.Mr. Lang wasn’t polite to the police |
A.he didn’t love her any longer |
B.he wouldn’t stop gambling |
C.he had been put into lockup |
D.he was hardly sent away by the factory |
A.The boy hoped his father to be put into lockup again. |
B.The boy thought his father needed some policemen. |
C.The boy hoped his father to stop gambling soon. |
D.The boy hoped his mother to come back. |
I’d been proud that I’d never lost my cellphone until my husband Jack got a call one evening.
We went to visit a friend in hospital last year. When Jack’s
I used Jack’s phone to call my number. Then a boy, whom I’ll call Rhys,
Later that evening, I went to
My
I was
As we drove back, we praised Rhys for his honesty.1.
A.electric car | B.mobile phone | C.radio | D.doorbell |
A.hospital | B.company | C.school | D.home |
A.found | B.changed | C.lost | D.bought |
A.gone | B.new | C.busy | D.broken |
A.accepted | B.returned | C.got | D.answered |
A.before | B.because | C.after | D.if |
A.coffee shop | B.post office | C.hotel | D.supermarket |
A.follow | B.meet | C.catch | D.punish |
A.slowly | B.back | C.alone | D.finally |
A.driving | B.running | C.walking | D.riding |
A.talked about | B.looked for | C.heard of | D.knew about |
A.difficulties | B.fears | C.diseases | D.hopes |
A.remember | B.know | C.tell | D.understand |
A.realized | B.repeated | C.explained | D.believed |
A.had | B.noticed | C.expected | D.finished |
A.happen | B.matter | C.help | D.fit |
A.called | B.settled | C.shared | D.sold |
A.sorry | B.glad | C.sad | D.proud |
A.useful | B.strange | C.grateful | D.polite |
A.missed | B.appeared | C.agreed | D.refused |
8 . A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town, but it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.
On his way home he saw a person lying on the ground. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking his baskets.
The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours? ” “Yes, sir. ” The farmer answered timidly(胆怯地). “Have you killed the man?” “No, no, sir.” The farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man?” “About seven last evening. ” “Did you see who killed the man?” “No, sir. ” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet?” “No, sir. ” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison(监狱)。
That evening the officer went on trying. Pointing to the knife, he asked again, “Have you seen it yet?” “ yes, sir.” The officer was happy and asked, “When and where?” “I saw it here this afternoon, sir.”
1. Why did the farmer decide to sell the vegetables?A.To go to the market. | B.To go to see the doctor. |
C.To buy some food for his family. | D.To buy some medicine for his wife. |
A.they were too bad | B.they were very expensive |
C.it rained hard that morning | D.people wouldn’t go out on such a bad day |
A.He was afraid to see a dead man. |
B.His wife was waiting for him at home. |
C.The policemen were coming towards him. |
D.It was so late and he had to buy some medicine. |
A.ask if he had seen the knife | B.know who had killed the man |
C.ask when he saw the dead man | D.know if he had seen the dead man |
Raeann’s older brother, Derek, has cri du chat syndrome. Children with cri du chat usually have problems understanding ideas and might have a hard time learning to talk. Many also have weak muscles that can cause problems with walking or using their fingers to pick things up. The term cri du chat means “cry of the cat” in French. Babies with cri du chat often have a high-pitched cry that sounds like that of a little cat.
Over the years, Derek’s teachers helped him learn sign language and gestures. They also taught him skills such as recognizing letters, cutting with scissors, and understanding basic math. Raeann wanted to donate money to Derek’s school. “I just wanted to help my brother,” she says, “and the people who help him.”
At first, Raeann focused on creating jewelry that would raise awareness for cri du chat. But people started requesting bracelets to wear as a symbol of support and awareness for a variety of other diseases and disorders. To create those symbols, Raeann researched the color most often associated with raising awareness for the disease or disorder, such as pink for breast cancer or orange for leukemia.
In the end, it turned out to be a great idea. In only a few years, Raeann has donated more than $30,000 to local charities. Raeann’s mom says that working on the bracelets has developed the generosity and kindness that already existed in her daughter. Raeann plans to keep making bracelets and raising dollars for charities. “I just want to keep going on with it,” she says, “to help my brother more.”
1. Paragraph 2 is mainly about _____.
A.the origin of the term cri du chat |
B.the research on cri du chat syndrome |
C.the treatment for cri du chat syndrome |
D.the characteristics of cri du chat syndrome |
A.are decorated with colorful jewels |
B.represent different kinds of diseases |
C.are very popular all over the world |
D.add up to more than 30,000 |
A.Caring and generous. | B.Honest and responsible. |
C.Polite and determined. | D.Creative and humorous. |
A.tell us the story of a loving girl |
B.show us how to make bracelets |
C.introduce a kind of rare disease |
D.ask us to donate to local charities |
They needed some
The first group explored the north. There, they saw large fields with
The second group went southwest. There, they saw lots of
The last group went southeast. There, they reached the sea and saw hundreds of fish swimming. They returned and said, “We saw plenty of fish. We can go
“We can eat meat alone!” shouted the second group.
“No!
The third group joined in, “Are you
Each group got so
A.spending | B.costing | C.taking | D.losing |
A.break | B.cool | C.settle | D.calm |
A.water | B.food | C.energies | D.information |
A.explore | B.clean | C.measure | D.cover |
A.same | B.a | C./ | D.different |
A.main | B.few | C.poor | D.many |
A.experiences | B.findings | C.results | D.conditions |
A.vegetarians | B.fishermen | C.hunters | D.miners |
A.mountains | B.people | C.animals | D.houses |
A.prepare | B.hunt | C.fight | D.wait |
A.mainly | B.partly | C.fully | D.hardly |
A.surfing | B.boating | C.fishing | D.swimming |
A.Fishes | B.Crops | C.Cows | D.Flowers |
A.going | B.sleeping | C.coming | D.joking |
A.described | B.brought | C.wrote | D.explained |
A.strict | B.angry | C.sad | D.pleased |
A.sad | B.pleasant | C.sure | D.anxious |
A.Happily | B.Luckily | C.Unluckily | D.Hopefully |
A.After | B.Because | C.Before | D.If |
A.admire | B.believe | C.appreciate | D.understand |