删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分
My neighbor Miss Chen is most successful person I know. Her mother sudden died at the time she finished middle school. To support her family, she gave up enter high school and set up a shop selling vegetables with her father. Since she began to sell vegetables, Miss Chen had saved nearly 300 thousand yuan. He has given away all that money for children from poor families. Though she couldnˈt afford to get a better education in her early life, but she wanted to help more child to receive a better education. Miss Chen thinks that money are only useful if you give it to people they need it.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(＾), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
Alice, my best friend, devotes many energy to her lessons. She is always one of the top students in our class. She loves music so much that she makes a rule to enjoy songs in her spare time. Alice is always willing to help others, and she often helps us with our lessons. Have it not been for her help, I couldn’t have made such a progress. As a volunteer, she has successful organized some voluntary activity. We pay a visit to a nursing home last month, so we picked up rubbish near our school. What we did was warmly welcomed by all the staff in a nursing home. Win honour for our school, Alice is admired by our classmates.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改5处，多者（从第6处起）不计分。
Because my father was in poor health,my family moved from a small village to a city. It was my seventeen birthday. I felt lonely as I listened the strange city noises. Much to my sadness, the family had been very busy moving that they seemed to forget my birthday. My brother sensed that something was wrong and asked what was the matter. To comfort me, my brother found a piece of paper, on that he drew a picture of my family holding a birthday party for me. That night, I was received a tiny toy bear from my brother and a birthday card from my parents.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意；1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day last year when I was busy prepare for an important exam, I got a phone call from my aunt. I used to quite nervous when I talked with her, because of her dialect spoken in her loud voice somehow aroused my fear of her. So the other day after a long talk, surprisingly, I feel warmth and was touched. I sudden realized that I used to put so much emphasis on her dialect that I didn’t even notice his love for me. Like my parents and my other relative, my aunt showed her love, encouragement and expectation for me. The dialect may sound unfamiliar with me, but our family relationship shortens the distance between us causing by the difference in our languages.
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意；1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
Last week, my parents and I visited my grandfather in countryside. I like to visit my grandfather because he has so much interesting stories to tell. He often tell me about the little farm house what he was born. He also has a lot of stories about my experiences in the army. Sometimes he will even show me an old newspaper article about his brave in knocking out six enemy tank. My grandfather loves to talk about Chinese history and famously people as well. On the way home, I said with my mother, "Grandpa may be old, but that he sure is a neat guy to talk to."
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was far behind most of my classmate when I become a senior three student. Moreover, I couldn't follow the teacher completely in class. One day, I was too much exhausted and confused to concentrate on which the teacher taught. Unfortunate, I was invited to share my own idea. As you can imagine, I couldn't say a word. Feeling embarrassing, I ready to be criticized. Much on my astonishment, the teacher instructed and encouraged me patiently. I was such touched that I was determined to try his best to study hard. Now I am quite confident about my study.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词0
注意：1 .每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Sometimes, we are affected by the people and things around us.
I still remembered the winter dawn when I was awakened by the noise inside .It had been snowing heavily the whole night .So the campus was quiet but full of snow .Especially annoying by the unpleasant noise, I pulled the curtain aside, only find some cleaners working hard to sweep the snow.With the rest sound asleep, these worker were fighting bravely with the coldness for the convenience of the others.
In life, they are occasionally supported by the people around us, at which we are sometimes unaware. Never should we forget to be gratefully to the lovely strangers around us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My father is the person constantly looks for mistakes in other people and thought no one is perfect in the world. His character was created a negative atmosphere in my family. I was the same like my father, so I often felt angry, disappointed, depressed, and alone in school. Fortunately, my favorite book changed this.
Before I had read my favorite book I began to seek “good things” in other people. It has complete altered my life. Now I feel happy, I have more friends, I have more trust in people, and I realize everyone has their own strength! Another important lesson I got from this book is that I should always behave me in a positive manner. Let’s admit that we sometimes complain about our situation. That’s not good. “Believing it or not, people don’t like to listen to negative opinions.”
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am Li Hua, the Senior 1 student. Recently, I’ve been busy prepared for the coming exam. Unluckily, I find quite hard to devote myself on study. I meet some problems what trouble me a lot. So I’m writing to ask you for help.
I have to spend so very much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take part in sports. Beside, the high expectation from the teachers and my parents made me extremely stressful (有压力的) because I don’t want to let them down. What troubles them most is that it’s difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Could you please offer me some advices on how to solve these problems?
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sir,
I’m glad to recommend my student Li Ming to you. During middle school years, he did well in several subject, including math, physics and chemistry. Later, his efforts paid off when he admitted into Beijing University majoring in physics. After that, he went to abroad for further education. Because for his excellent work and performance, he gets a doctor’s degree at Cambridge University. Today that attracts him most is our country’s great succeed and he hopes to come back home to do something for our country. I will be most gratefully if you consider his recommendation and offer him a job in your company.
Looking forward to receive your early reply.
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
