After graduating from high school, I’m going to be computer programmer, which I think is on great demand in the modern world. Moreover, my parents would like me to study medicine. They believe here are two reasons for being a doctor. One is that doctors usually deal with patients in person, which mean they are able to help people in need direct. The other is that doctors are so important that it is almost impossible for it to lose jobs. Up to now I have chatted with my parents for three time. To my disappointment, I was failed to persuade them. Now I am confusing about how to solve the problem.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Everybody has a best friend, but they can share everything. I also have one calls Bob. He is a good student who helps me learn a lot. Frequent, he helps me with math. Besides, he’s friendly and reliably. I trust him completely and I share him secrets all the time. Being brave is also his good qualities. I remember once when a classmate laughs at me he came to his rescue. To my joy, he always remembers my birthday and has the good understanding of how to cheer me up when I’m down. Bob is really great and I am quite grateful for how he has done for me.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^ )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出 修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
My brother has been fond at building things since he was a kid. After earning a degree in computer science, he has developed software for different businesses. With his childhood dream in mind, he eventual quit the job and began to build 3-D printers. Having never taken some classes in electrical engineering or robotics, he found everything he was supposed know on the Internet. He often starts with some parts finding from online stores. The rest is trial and error. He comes up with a design idea, test it and observes the result. If it doesn’t work, he analyzes why or starts over. That’s not so different from what a scientist does an experiment. I admire him for his applying original idea to real-world problems. I hope he will succeed.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My neighbor had a daughter named Emily, which was always playing with her friends and passing the time by sit at a computer. She was always thinking she was a genius in their studies. Although both of her parent kept persuading her to study, but she didn’t even listen to them. One day, her math teacher asks her a question in class. She was not able to answer it as she never practiced at home. Her classmates were all surprising that she didn’t give an answer to such simple question. She stood in silent and felt ashamed. From then on, she started studying hardly and she finally made great progress.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One Monday afternoon, we were playing basketball on the playground while I suddenly slipped and fell over. On seeing that, all my classmates rushed to me. Under the help of several other students, Li Xiang, one of my best friend put me on his back and head for the clinic immediately. It turned out that my right ankle got injured but I had to be sent to hospital. He did not leave until an ambulance was arrived. The following day, he came to see me. To my greatly relief, he brought textbooks with them and helped me with my lessons. It was a great pleasure have such a devoting friend.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（
）,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When I was very young, I was always told by my mom not to wasting food. She did really well at saving food. For example, she often made a list of what we would eat in a whole weeks ahead of time and bought fresh vegetables every day. She always said, “Store of more. Waste more.” Usual we could finish all the food, but sometimes there was some food left. At that time, my mom would put it into the refrigerator.
Now I am growing up and has to eat in the school dining hall. Influencing by her, I just take as much I need and never waste food. And I was trying to influence more people around mine.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He did not want share things with other people. For example, when he buy a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place where I couldn’t find it. Then he ate it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is, a game of tennis making him very busy. He did not care if something he did it made people angry. For instance, one night he played strong and loudly music till four o'clock in the morning. But now he is difference. He often helps grandma with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his classmates with his lessons.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day my friend took me to a R.O.K.’s restaurant, where she often visited. I looked at the menu all writing in R.O.K.’s. Since I couldn't read them, I glanced over the pictures and picked out what I want. I ordered the Kimchi Beef with vegetables. It was very spicy food I had never had before. Therefore, I drank my glass of water immediate. I thought the beef was the spicy part, but when I started eating the cabbage, it only got worst! The waitress had refilled in my glass after I knew it and I drank it quickly. Turned around, I could see that the waitresses were having good laugh.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
There was a time when I was addicted to online games. Because of that, my study was suffered a lot. Instead for scolding me, Mother gave me a book by Helen Keller and asked me to read it. Hardly have I finished a few pages when I was great attracted by Helen Keller. Despite(尽管) her disability, she didn’t abandon hope and achieve a lot. This was her determination and courage that made her huge success.
When I finished reading the book, Mother had a talk with me. “You can also achieve which Helen Keller did.” Mother’s words ring in my ear whenever I see the book, inspired me to face challenges in life.
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分
My neighbor Miss Chen is most successful person I know. Her mother sudden died at the time she finished middle school. To support her family, she gave up enter high school and set up a shop selling vegetables with her father. Since she began to sell vegetables, Miss Chen had saved nearly 300 thousand yuan. He has given away all that money for children from poor families. Though she couldnˈt afford to get a better education in her early life, but she wanted to help more child to receive a better education. Miss Chen thinks that money are only useful if you give it to people they need it.
