Paul, congratulation! I'm exciting to know your admission to Tsinghua University. I am going to take a very important exam the next year. I hope that you can share me some ways that was used in the preparation. For example, how did you reasonable spend your time? Sometimes I do not have enough time to finish your assignment. Besides, could you please tell me what I can deal with anxious and the lack of sleep? To be honest, I had been under great pressure for a long time, especially when my grades were low. Looking forward to your reply!
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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There are many things what we can do to become better learners. We all have two voices. Our inner voice tells us personally opinions while our outer voice deals with things we had heard. If we listen our inner voice too much, and it can prevent us from learning. Unless your inner voice is difficult to control, you can argue with it. One of the best ways to promote active learning is to ask questions, which help gain more knowledge about the topic.
In the word, we should never stop being curious. Active learners also try to question the world around them and understand the truth within every ideas. Finally, as active learners, we should never form opinions about people basing on first impressions.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
We students often feel stressed because we have too many homework to do every day. We are such busy studying all day that we don't have any free time to do what we are interested. So we always felt very tired. What should we do to relax ourselves then?
First, doing sports with some of our classmate is the best way to relax ourselves. It is also good for our healthy. Second, we can also listening to music during the breaks. Third, when we feel tired, going to the movies with our parents on weekends is another good choice, which will help us build a much more closer relationship with them. In short, they should spend a little time on relaxed activities each day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Li Hua,
Thank you for your email. You asked me for some advice on English learning, I’d like to talk about it. The first thing is to enlarge your vocabulary. As is known, vocabulary is vital when you learn English. When met a new word, don’t look them up in the dictionary immediately. Try to guess its meaning from the context, what will help you memorize vocabulary efficient and improve reading comprehension significantly. Beside, try to find a partner if was possible. Then you can practise your oral English together. Last but not least, get yourself exposing to English by reading magazines or novels since this method can help build your reading skills. I hope the advice above is greatly benefit to you.
Write to me unless you have further questions.
Yours,
Alex
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Nowadays Senior 3 students are generally faced with a lot of pressure, that is rather common. To reduce it, the following suggestion may help. First of all, know exactly what lead to your pressure, and then you can take measures to deal with it. Secondly, set up a goal that is not too high, in the other words, don’t put too many pressure on yourself. Thirdly, finding a way to relax yourself occasionally. For example, you can listen music, go swimming or just simple go walking. Eventually, make friends with others, for example, your classmates, your teachers, and our parents. They will understand you and come to your help though you are really in trouble. In a word, never get yourself stuck in the pressure for “impossible is nothing”.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
No matter how troublesome a situation is, we can always find a way to solve it. Therefore, we sometimes show great fear to all kinds of difficulties, which has a negative effect to us more or less. In order to lead a better life for our future, there is need for us to find suitable solutions. The ways to help us get out of a bad situation are as follow.
To start with, we are bound to believe in ourselves, even though we are extreme short of knowledge in this field. And then it’s necessary to turn to people around you, such as parents, close friends, teachers and so on, share inner feelings with them. Next, we can join in various after-school clubs, where we are so occupied that we have no time to think of things of little use.
Last but not the least, we are supposed to be training to face challenges bravely. Only by becoming stronger, can we be more powerful. After all, the world ahead of us, full of wonders, are always waiting for us.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Li Hua,
I know you are very annoying about your results in the midterm examination. I’ve just read a useful article about how a positive attitude makes difference to our behavior.
Naturally, fail an examination can be very discouraging. If you think too many about the past, you will never be able to concentrate on that is more important for now and the future. Life is full of difficulties, but anyone may suffer setbacks. We must take a positive attitude towards the things we had to deal with. Great dreams will come true if we make an effort. Just work hardly and make preparation for another chance. You will make for it.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Your kids often pay for attention to the things you do and look forward to make friends with you. Do you know what to teach kids about friendship? One extreme easy way to teach kids about friendship was to let them see you being a good friend. Modeling friendship will give them a example of how friend act. Modeling friendship will also let them know some of the things you teach us about friendship. You can allow them hear you talking with a friend warmly, or tell your kids, “My friend is a little sadness, so I need to be a good friend and try to make him happy."
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some student have always been very efficient(效率高的) at schoolwork, among which, Li Lin, monitor of our class, is an example. When asking why he was always so productive, Li responded that this was some good habits that benefited him greatly and helped him to be effective. Because he believes that efficiency depends on good organization, so he has strictly followed plans. Beside, he makes full use his time. He listens attentive and takes notes in class. After class, he not only finish his homework but also makes sure that he has reviewed that he learned timely. From Li we can learn that a student's good performance is closely connected with his good habits.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One of the difficulty for foreign students in American universities is taking notes while listen to lectures. These notes are later used to studying for exams. If the notes aren’t well, it will be hard for the students to prepare for the exams. But it is not easy take good notes. If you are try to write every word the professor say, you can’t keep pace with the lecture. That you should learn is how to set down only the most important words, not whole sentences. Words such like nouns and verbs are most important. Remembering that you need information, not sentences.
