增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good manners were very important in our daily life. Not only do it show that we have respect for others, but they can also assisted us in getting along well with others. Do you know how develop good manners? First, it’s necessary for us to obey basic rule when we are at school. Second, we should learn to understand others in case of we disagree with them. More importantly, it is an good idea to lend a hand to classmates which need help. In this way, we will live in harmony with others.
In summary, spent time developing good manners, we will be able to behave proper.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
About how to keep healthy, I’d like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers are going through a rapid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut out the food rich in sugar or fat. However, we should take physical exercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take walk after school. Have enough sleep is of great importance. Therefore, you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too late. Only in this way that can we keep fit.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
We all wanted to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal you must do several things. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consist of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is the power. Because we have the power, we help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study it well, we need to do sports so that we can keep good. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk before a day’s study.
Dear Linda,
If you will want to be healthy and happy, you need to have healthy lifestyle. I have some advices for you and I hope you will follow all of it. Like a young student, you need to get enough sleep, but try to go to bed early every night. You should try to sleep for at least 8 hours every day, that will help you be active and energetic for your day at school. Doing more exercise was also very important, and you should remember to eat more vegetables and fruits. You mustn’t be addicted to playing video games or eat junk food. Besides, it can reduce our stress to listen to music after studying. Smiling as often as possible can help you stay happily and forget your troubles.
Yours,
Li Hua
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I’m writing to congratulate you of your winning first prize in the English short novel competition recently.
I must say that I am not surprised when I heard from the good news. I know that you have practised written English novels in the past years. I’m delighted to see efforts have finally been paid off. By the way, I am also fond of writing shorter passages in English. What upsets you most is that I sometimes can’t find suitable word or expressions to make myself understood. Would you be kind enough to give me a few advice on improving this situation?
Congratulations again. I hope to get your reply as early as possibly.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are several ways improve our English writing skills, such as keeping a diary, learning some good writings with heart, doing a lot of reading, etc. As for me, I prefer keeping a diary. Comparing with other forms of writing, keeping a diary is easier and take less time. Beside, it can help us form the habit of thinking in English. If we can keep this practice, and we will gradually learn how to express us in English. What’s more, keeping a diary can be like talking about one of our close friend, sharing our happiness or sadness. In the word, keeping a diary enables us to improve our written English.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is known by us, our government is trying to make our city the National Civilized City at present. We hope we can also do our best to help realize this goal.
First of all, we should mind our words and deeds and become civilized citizens. Always remember to say “Please” and “Thanks” and don’t talk and laugh loudly in public. Seen people in trouble, we might as well to lend them a helping hand. In addition, be civilized pedestrians. We must observe traffic rules and never cross the streets before the traffic lights are red. At same time, keeping our environment cleanly is also advisable, it means we shouldn’t litter or spit in public places. Only by starting with the little things around us we make a great difference to our city image.
Let’s take measure now and make joint efforts to make our city more civilized.
Get rid of the bad habit of procrastination is now my goal of life. My first step was to set small targets what can be reached realistically. For example, I plan to set a timetable for my study. So in school, I will put finishing homework in the first place. Beside, I will write down several important thing including their due dates and follow my schedule strict. I will avoid finding excuses for my laziness. At same time, I will ask for my friend and parents to help me. By finishing these small targets, I have confident that I will overcome procrastination.
There are many people who wants to protect the environment but don’t know that should be done. Here are a few tips that can help you lighten the burden on the heavily polluting earth.
Don’t leave any electrical appliance (电器) on careless if you are not using it. It can contributed to saving energy. In addition, recycle cans, bottles, plastic bags and newspapers if circumstances allow us to. Finally and the most importantly, be an educator. Talk with both your family and friends about global warming or let them be aware the importance of protecting the environment. Please remember that everyone contribution counts when it comes to creating a greener world.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每句不超过两个错误；
2. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Li Hua and Zhang Ming are two students of Senior Two. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Hua often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him many time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Zhang Ming has quite the different way of learning. He listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class. Because this, he spends less time doing his homework, which makes it is possible for him to go to bed early.
