增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was a high school student then, from poor family. So I have to work to support my family. My first one job was to clean the tables in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world. I worked hardly because I was afraid of losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do my homework. I came to understand that was not easy to earn money, and that knowledges could change my life. But which I learned from the job, in a hard way, was much more important as what I earned.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Every day I go to school by bike. In my opinion, cycling is an environmental friendly form of transport. It is also a good way to exercise, from whom I benefit a lot. Besides, it can give me many chances to experienced love and kindness. Yesterday one such thing had happened to me. It was on my way to school that something was wrong with my bike. I didn’t know how to do. Just then a passer-by volunteer to have it repaired. I offered himself some money in return his help. He refused, saying help others was what he should do. Hearing his word, I was deeply moved and decided to pass it on.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was raining when I went home from school yesterday. I see an old man walking difficultly in the rain without a umbrella. I went up to him and offered to share my umbrella with him. He was very surprising and said “Thank you.” When I tried to hold the umbrella to him, I found that she was very tall. I was too short hold the umbrella highly enough. Just when I was wondering what to do, and he took the umbrella. Several minute after we got to the bus stop, his bus came and he got on it. He again thanked me for that I had done. I went home happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I had a good time during the Mid-Autumn Festival that I invited my foreign language teacher Mr Smith to spend the holiday together. I treated him as various moon cakes, which means reunion or get together. After the meal, we went out to admire the full moon. He was so much excited about our traditional culture that he asked me to tell him many about Chinese culture. I was high encouraged.
Then I told him about the story of Chang’e. It said that she ate a wonder drug by chance and fly to the moon. She had no other choices but to stay there, accompanying only by a white rabbit. He was deeply attracted by a story.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week our teacher announced that a Chinese Character Dictation Competition will be held in the auditorium on July 3. Many of us were interested and hoped to join in it, and only one competitor was allowed for each class. Luckily, I got chance.
In the following days, I buried me in preparing for the competition. My classmates gave me a lot of good advices. As the competition was approaching, I felt more and more confident. The day finally came. Some characters were very challenging that many of the competitors got stuck while I succeeded on writing down most of them and won the first prize. When I was standing excited on the stage, pictures of my classmates helps me flashed into my mind. The victory and honor were belonged to all of us.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下而写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday on my way home, I saw the little boy playing just beside a construction site with iron sheets blocked it as a fence. I went over to warn him the potential danger. He smiled shy at me and walked away. Just at that moment, the fence falls down right there on the same spot which the kid was playing. I was shocked and hurried to see that he was hurt or something. But I saw him running away. He somehow panicked either. Miracles happen every day. We should always be sensitive and not let the noise of the world to deafen us and fail to notice small and amazing wonders of our planet.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分.
After dinners, Li Hua came and asked me go and see a film with him. In our way to the cinema, we saw a little girl crying, that sat in front of a store. We bring her a cake to stop her crying. But when we asked where she had lived, she said she did not know. So we took her to the police station but asked the police to take care for her. After this, we went to the cinema, but when we got there, the movie was almost over. Though we missed the movie, we felt very happily.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
Li Bai, a famous poet in the Tang Period, liked playing and afraid of difficulties in his childhood. However, he fell behind others in his studies.
One morning, on his way home after school, he walked by a stream, that he saw an old woman grind (v. 磨 ) a very thick iron rod ( 棒 ). He went to her and curious asked why she was doing so. The old woman replied, “To make a needle.” Li Bai felt more curious on the answer,
“How can you grind such a thick iron rod into a needle?” “If one work with constant effort, he can make this,” she answered. Hearing her word, Li Bai was inspired. After that, Li Bai studied hard and made a rapid progress.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Some days before, I didn’t pass a vital exam, that made me depressed. I feel upset and cried alone in the classroom in secret. My best friend, Tom, found that I was in bad mood at that moment. After learning about what had happened, he spent a long time talk with me. He also gave me some good advices on how to get a good grade in the future. However, I was aware how to deal with my study and got relaxing. Tom is always there for him whenever I am in trouble. I’m proud of him.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Sunday, my friend and I was taking a walk on the playground when a girl came ride a bike at a very high speed. Then we heard a loud scream, that attracted our attention. We turned around and saw the girl struggling her feet, crying out for help. My friend and rushed towards her as quick as we could and had helped her to stand up. Therefore, the girl rode away immediately without saying “Thank you”. I felt disappointing at her behavior. To my surprise, the girl came back with hot drinks several minute later. Seeing this, I knew I had misunderstood her and felt ashamed of me.