删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词的下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I will share a true story that happened a couple of days ago to you. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had a stomachache with our faces pale. They were quick sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examine them and gave them some medicine. They were out of dangerous soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety. I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more attention to this problem.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. Wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. However, the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire. “Taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didn’t eat fish!” the waiter answered. “Never mind. Just do as I tell you,” my uncle said. The crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. To see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mary Daniel is a student in England. This year she had a very interested summer holiday. He traveled with fifteen others people to the Tuwenzori Mountains in Africa. They went there to help make a road through a forest among two big towns. “It was very difficult because of there was no water to drink and no shops that we could buy food,” said Mary. “It was also very cold and wetter in the mountains. It is one of the wettest place in the world. ” Mary stays in the mountains for six weeks. It was hard work, but she said it was best thing she had ever done. She is hoping to return next year to do some more woke there.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I had a interesting dream last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race in the sports meeting. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn’t lose heart and kept running. All the student on the playground cheered me on, “Come on!” I was filling with so much energy that I ran faster and faster until I caught up all the other runners. I felt like a superman. In the end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmates throw me up into the air. Just at that moment I woke up and found me still lying in bed ! What interesting the dream was!
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)画掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yao is one of my best freinds who I grew up with from the age of 2. However, she moved to Italy 9 year ago because of her parents’work. Last year I came back to our home town spend the summer vacation. Missed her so much , I immediately went to an airport to pick her up when I heard about her return. Upon meeting, we tightly hugged with each other. Then we started to talk about the past joy moments we shared together. She brought me a little memorial sculpture of a cartoon character or the newly updated series of the novels that we are crazy about before as gifts. What kind and considerate she was!
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sally，
Now I’d like to tell you something about my parttime job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
Yours
Li Bing
After school, I was about to enter my apartment building when I saw a little dirty dog lie beside the dustbin. He looked extreme weak. Immediately the homeless dog filled me of sympathy, so I decided to take him home. I gave to him some food and a bath. After the bath he looked energetic and refreshed. What a lovely dog!
When my parents got home, I asked that I could keep the dog. To my surprises and happiness, they agreed. Up to now, he has become member of our family. Everyone had enjoyed his company.
Looking at the cute, happy dog today, I realize that I did the right thing. I just offered him a shelter and he has brought ourselves great happiness and laughter.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One of my classmates live on the first floor of our building. He went to Beijing with his parents visit his relatives last autumn. They plan to stay there for a month. He came to see me at my house before they left. He asked me that it would be convenient for him to water their flowers. I happily agreed on. After they left, I went to water the flowers every few days. My help was final rewarded. He asked me to pick some apples because it was an apple tree in their yard, what was full of apples. In this way, I had dozen of fresh apples to eat every day.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday we were in a supermarket. It was Saturday, or most people were in casual clothes. A lady, who was in her late thirty, I thought, was wearing beautiful suit. My 10-year-old daughter Amy whispers: “Mum, I love that lady’s suit!” “Why not telling her about it?” I responded. Then I accompanied her to the lady.
“Excuse me. Madam. You look amazed today with this suit.” said Amy. The lady stopped for a minute and jumped with excite: “Oh thank you, you’ve made my day.”
Saying something nice can change the direction of someone’s day, what costs us nothing but means a lot of to them. Children don’t just automatic become kind adults — we need to teach and show them how.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Going to works by train on a daily basis is never pleasant in the city. But today was different. In the morning I got up a little early than usual to catch the first train. I almost have an opportunity to sit down when the elderly lady got on the train. But I directed her to the seat I had my eye on and she thanked for me. A few stops later as I was about leave the train, she gently stopped me. And a moved act took place—she gave me a smile card! Which seems rather small or unimportant in life really matter!
