删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词的下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I will share a true story that happened a couple of days ago to you. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had a stomachache with our faces pale. They were quick sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examine them and gave them some medicine. They were out of dangerous soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to realize the seriousness of the food safety. I strongly suggest that the whole society pays more attention to this problem.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day my uncle had been riding a horse in rain when he reached a small restaurant. Wet and coldly, and he wanted to warm himself very much. However, the restaurant was too crowded with people that he could not get near the fire. “Taking some fish to my horse!” he called out to the waiter. “Sorry, sir. But a horse didn’t eat fish!” the waiter answered. “Never mind. Just do as I tell you,” my uncle said. The crowd of people felt surprising at the strange order. To see a horse eat fish, all of whom ran out. Having the whole room to himself, my uncle sat down besides the fire and began warm himself.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Mary Daniel is a student in England. This year she had a very interested summer holiday. He traveled with fifteen others people to the Tuwenzori Mountains in Africa. They went there to help make a road through a forest among two big towns. “It was very difficult because of there was no water to drink and no shops that we could buy food,” said Mary. “It was also very cold and wetter in the mountains. It is one of the wettest place in the world. ” Mary stays in the mountains for six weeks. It was hard work, but she said it was best thing she had ever done. She is hoping to return next year to do some more woke there.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I had a interesting dream last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race in the sports meeting. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn’t lose heart and kept running. All the student on the playground cheered me on, “Come on!” I was filling with so much energy that I ran faster and faster until I caught up all the other runners. I felt like a superman. In the end, I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmates throw me up into the air. Just at that moment I woke up and found me still lying in bed ! What interesting the dream was!
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)画掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yao is one of my best freinds who I grew up with from the age of 2. However, she moved to Italy 9 year ago because of her parents’work. Last year I came back to our home town spend the summer vacation. Missed her so much , I immediately went to an airport to pick her up when I heard about her return. Upon meeting, we tightly hugged with each other. Then we started to talk about the past joy moments we shared together. She brought me a little memorial sculpture of a cartoon character or the newly updated series of the novels that we are crazy about before as gifts. What kind and considerate she was!
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（
），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（
）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Sally，
Now I’d like to tell you something about my parttime job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I’ve learnt how to get along well with others. What’s worse, I’ve gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In a word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.
Yours
Li Bing
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
John went to shop but forgot to bring a shopping bag. But he bought one. Just then an idea struck him which he might use the old trousers to make the bag. He began to do it immediate he arrived home. It was hard works for him, but he finally made it. His family was amazing at his hand-made bag. When asked what he felt about his creation, John replied: "This is the first time that I had such a wonderful experience." He added up that it was helpful to improve the ability to make things by hand. "It not only brings us pleasure but avoid spending unnecessary money as well."
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There was a rich man who carried many treasures to the distance to look into happiness. And after a long march, he fails to find happiness. Annoyed, he sat by a path of the mountain while a farmer carrying a large bunch of firewood came down from the mountain. The rich man said, “I’m a wealth man. Can you tell me that why I’m unhappy?” The farmer put down the heavy firewood, wiped the sweat pleasantly and said, “Happiness is simple: put down and you’ll be happy.” The rich man inspired suddenly. Anxious and tiring all day, he carried that heavy jewelry, afraid of being robbed or murdered. How could you be happy? So the rich man helped the poor with jewelry and money, doing good deed. He enjoyed the taste of happiness.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday I read a story about a group of explorer who got lost in a desert. The sun was burning hot and everyone quickly ran out water. Later, the group’s leader took out the water bottle and said, “I found a bottle of water in my bag. But until we pass through the desert, anybody is allowed to drink it.” The bottle was passing around the members of the team; it felt heavier. Finally, the explorers made it out of the desert. With tears of joy run down their faces, they had opened the bottle, but out poured sand. Was it a bottle of sand which really saved them in the desert? The answer was no. Their deep faith in the hope of survival, like a seed, had taken root and grown in their hearts. That was how led them out of the terrible situation in the end.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As I was watering the plants in the front of my house, my neighbor was passing by for her walk. She appreciated the plants and so I told him how I had increased the number of plants, and that I would be able to offer her a few.
Then I mix some potting soil and sand and put them in the container, and after put the open cut into rooting powder, I put it in the soil with little watering. Usually it take 4-6 weeks for the roots to form then they are ready about repotting or gifting. My connect with dirt and understanding of plants is also growing in the process. I am gratefully for having these plants and the soil as my teachers and for being able to share the fruits with other.
