增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last Monday, I learned a lesson about tell lies. Early in the morning, I didn’t want to go to the school, but I pretended to feel ill. My mother was very worrying when I told her. She left quickly and I thought she has gone to work. But soon, she came back with a bottle of pill. She said that she had asked for a day off from work to look me. I felt a little guilty but I dared not tell the truth. That afternoon, my teacher came to visit me. I felt so regretfully. Finally, I admitted I had lain and promised never to do them again.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This afternoon I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn't tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I am wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can help others in return for. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday evening I went out for a walk without my parents in a nearby park after a long day of study.
There were many people especially women dancing with music happily and energetically. Suddenly, no music was heard. It seemed what their equipment didn’t work. A young man came up into the crowd and offered to examine them. However, all the efforts he made seem in vain. People began to get a little impatience with it. Just at the moment a little boy had noticed the electrical socket(插座) was disconnected. After the unexpecting accident, people enjoyed themselves once again. Seen this, my parents and I smiled in relief. What nice evening！
I was walking my dog around my local streets last Sunday when I meet a new couple. They liked my dog but gave it a sandwich. I thanked them and had a happily chat with them. They said they had just been moved into this community. Unfortunate，they had a troublesome neighbour, that was rather noisy at night, making it hard for them to fall asleep. “Oh，it's great pity. I think I'm quite lucky to have kind neighbours,” I said.
Say our goodbyes, we separated. As my dog and I was near my home, I was embarrassed to see that my new friends were walking towards the house next to me. I was the noisy neighbour!
My 71-year-old grandpa run a small food stand in a night market in my city, provide local snacks for people working overtime. Receiving payments has always been a problem for him before I helped him. He often had to feel in his pocket for changes on cold nights while keeping eye on the food in the oven. After learning this I helped him set up with mobile payment apps like WeChat Pay and Alipay. Now my grandpa is content with which I did for him, for about 95 percent of his customers pay with his phones. Mobile payment has become an essential part of our everyday life. It not only deep changes the life of young people, but provides convenient for the elders.
My daughter and I went to a supermarket where was two blocks away to buy some fruits. While she was queuing at the check-out，my daughter waited on a benches nearby. When finished, my daughter was seated next to elderly woman. I had a talk with her and find out that she was waiting for a bus to go home. I offered to take her home. She glad agreed. It was a nice chance to give up someone a ride when needing. The nice thing was what my daughter and I gained a new friendship. And we promised to visited and have lunch with the elderly woman
Li Ming and I have grown crazily about swimming ever since last year. Last Sunday we decide to go swimming in the Water Cube. So on my way there, I met a little boy, which was crying loudly. I came up with and asked him what was the reason. He said he got lost and that it was the first time he has gone out by himself. So I sent him to the nearest police’s station. Not until an hour late did I get to the gate of the Water Cube. Li Ming got very angry with myself. However, after I explained to him what had happened, he calmed down and made apology to me.
Today was my father’s birthday, which was so a big day for me, so I wanted to give her a surprise. My father always gave me that I wanted. I told my mother that I wanted to cook a delicious dinner for my father and she was very happy to teaching me. I listened attentive at first as it was the first time that I cooked. However, under my mother’s help, I cooked with great caution. I felt much confident than before. Two hours later, my efforts were paid off. I felt happy that each of my dishes have a different taste and a unique style.
I went to the bank to withdraw money yesterday. Seeing several people wait at the ATM machine, I queued up. When it was my turn, I reached into my pocket for my bank card, only to find anything wrong. What the shame! How could I mistake my ID card as the bank card? All what I could do was go back home for it. Half an hour late, I returned to the ATM machine. Following the instruction, I typed my password, but I was told it was wrong. After typing several times, I discovered the card was be swallowed. I had no choice but solve the problem the next day. I was determined to break my habit of being carelessly.
Today, an incident impressed me deep. Mom asked me to buy a bag of flour in a shop running by an elderly couple. On the way, it occurred to them that I had no cash with me. Then I thought I could pay on it with my phone, so I was afraid that they couldn't receive money by phone. After all, they were nearly 70 year old. They might be so much old that they weren't familiar with online service. To my surprise, when I asked an elderly wife if I could pay by phone, she points to the sign on the wall. She said proudly, "Of course, you can scan it!" I felt happy see our advanced society!
